-----// Jaan ke nikal jaane tak //----- Hriday

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mushkil  hai  bach  paanaa  meraa jaan  ke nikal jaane tak
kaise rok paaungaa khud ko aaj  shaam ke dhal jaane tak

mehek tumhaare  jism ki paagal banaa rahi  hai mujhe ab
kaise sambhaalun khud ko poori tarha sambhal jaane tak

aankhen   tumhaari  nashili  jalaa  rahi  hain mujhe kabse
kaise  bas dekhtaa  rahun unhe khud ke pighal jaane tak

do  palon  ki  duuri  bhi  ab  baras  ke samaan lag rahi hai
kaise thahar paaungaa main  aaj waqt ke badal jaane tak

pyaasaa hai  dil meraa tumhaari  mohabbat ke liye jaanaa
naa  tadpaao mujhe  itnaa jism se ruh ke  nikal jaane tak


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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2013, 06:21:34 AM »
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mushkil  hai  bach  paanaa  meraa jaan  ke nikal jaane tak
kaise rok paaungaa khud ko aaj  shaam ke dhal jaane tak

mehek tumhaare  jism ki paagal banaa rahi  hai mujhe ab
kaise sambhaalun khud ko poori tarha sambhal jaane tak

aankhen   tumhaari  nashili  jalaa  rahi hain mujhse kabse
kaise  bas dekhtaa  rahun unhe khud ke pighal jaane tak

do  palon  ki  duuri  bhi  ab  baras  ke samaan lag rahi hai
kaise thahar paaungaa main  aaj waqt ke badal jaane tak

pyaasaa hai  dil meraa tumhaari  mohabbat ke liye jaanaa
naa  tadpaao mujhe  itnaa jism se ruh ke  nikal jaane tak


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zabardast hriday ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2013, 08:07:53 AM »
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Waah waah waah Maha kavi hridayji. Kya khoob likha hai aapne. aapko hamari dili mubarakbad qubool ho.
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mushkil  hai  bach  paanaa  meraa jaan  ke nikal jaane tak
kaise rok paaungaa khud ko aaj  shaam ke dhal jaane tak

Khoob bahut khoob..
ye lines..bahut bahut acchi algee mujhe.
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji.....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on February 20, 2013, 06:21:34 AM
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