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by ~Hriday~ on September 28, 2010, 08:53:29 PM
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na poochho yaaron mujhse mere dil ka tab kya haal hua,
nashili uski aankhon se jab mere aankhon ka milna hua,

bechaini uski aankhon me thi, apna to jal jaana hua,
dekho fir se koi kaise kisi shaama ka parwaana hua,

dekhte the khwaabon me jise, uska kuch aisa aana hua,
aankhon pe mere bas na chala, ye to uska deewana hua,

dekha usko angrai lete, dupatte me khudko chhupaate,
dekh geele hothon ko uske mera to tab mar jaana hua,

hosh hi tha maine khoya jab uska khidki pe aana hua,
khwab me aati thi kal tak, aaj haqeeqat me aana hua,

geet uspe likhna chaaha par shabdon ka gum jaana hua,
kal uske husn ke maikhaane me apna to behek jaana hua...



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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 09:29:09 PM »
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Wah ji wah ......... Kapil !!!!!!!!!!!!!

"KAMAL" ....................

SUpreb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

totally full of LUV'.............

Be Happy alwyz .......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2010, 10:22:05 PM »
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thank you so much Neel ji...!!!

Wah ji wah ......... Kapil !!!!!!!!!!!!!

"KAMAL" ....................

SUpreb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

totally full of LUV'.............

Be Happy alwyz .......... Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 03:57:34 PM »
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Klaskar jee Aadaab!

Hum to pahele pehchane hi nahi ke .. kouN hai bad meiN aaye huye replys padheN to pata chala... Usual Smile

Kafi achcha likha hai janab.,..... daad kabool kijiye. Usual Smile

Humne aapki kalaam meiN kuch changing ki hai uske liye mazarrat chahate hai janab...... Usual Smile         





Nashili uski aankhon se jo nazaroN ka milaana hua,
Na pucho yaaroN mujhse dil mera kyuN begaana hua

bechaini uski aankhon me thi, apna to jal jaana hua,
dekho fir se koi kaise kisi shaama ka parwaana hua,
Yeh sher to janab humari samjh ke bahar raha....... icon_scratch waise socha bahut par aik baat samajh meiN aayi ke aapse hi puch lete haiN tongue3         


dekhte the khwaabon me jise, uska kuch aisa aana hua,
aankhon pe mere bas na chala, Dil to uska deewana hua,

Kia baat hai janab bahut umdaa daad bahut khoob... Usual Smile

is sher meiN bhi change kiya hai humne ye ki jagaa dil likha hai...           



dekha usko angrai lete, dupatte me khudko chhupaate,
dekh geele hothon ko uske mera to tab mar jaana hua,

Hmmmm kafi ashiqana hai ..... hume itni akhal nahi hai so daad janab....... Usual Smile         


hosh hi tha maine khoya jab uska khidki pe aana hua,
khwab me aati thi kal tak, aaj haqeeqat me aana hua,

Hmmm bahut umdaa janab..... Kaash aisa humare saath bhi ho jayeN...... Usual Smile bahut umdaa           


geet uspe likhna chaaha par shabdon ka gum jaana hua,
kal uske husn ke maikhaane me apna to behek jaana hua...

Hmmmm may be aisa har kisi ke saath hota hai,,,,, tongue3 achcha sher hai daad janab......         






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Likhate rahiye.......
Koshish jari rakhiye........
Humari kisi baat ka bura laga ho to dil se muafi chahte hai.........

Khush o aabaad rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez,.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 06:27:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon...!!!

Klaskar jee Aadaab!

Hum to pahele pehchane hi nahi ke .. kouN hai bad meiN aaye huye replys padheN to pata chala... Usual Smile

Kafi achcha likha hai janab.,..... daad kabool kijiye. Usual Smile

Humne aapki kalaam meiN kuch changing ki hai uske liye mazarrat chahate hai janab...... Usual Smile         



Likhate rahiye.......
Koshish jari rakhiye........
Humari kisi baat ka bura laga ho to dil se muafi chahte hai.........

Khush o aabaad rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez,.... Usual Smile         


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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 07:24:25 AM »
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bahut achha likha he apne hriday jii`
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 07:28:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

bahut achha likha he apne hriday jii`
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 06:42:09 PM »
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aahhhhaaaaaaaaaaa kapil kya khubsurat subah ho gai hai aaj ki.....
wo aankhon aankhon me ishare wo baatein sab yaad aagai re..... love4 love4
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Kya kahun ab main uske aage ki daastaan
Mere dil me to jaise kisi ka thaher jana hua

Un nazron me thi kuch aisi kashish ki jaise
Wo har janam me sirf mera hi deewana hua

Pehli nazar me hi laga mujhe aise jaise
Uska mere ghar me roz ka aana jana hua

Na jaan na pehchaan fir bhi wo ajnabee
Kyun iss tarah mere husn ka parwana hua

Angdai li to thaam k baith gaya wo dil
Aur dekh use meri muskaan ka fail jana hua

Meri muskurahut pe wo kho baitha dil ko
Aur uske iss andaaz pe mera bhi dil deewana hua

Ab to khyaalon khwaabon pe chhaya hai bas wo
Uski yaad me fir aaj mere dil ka bechain ho jana hua…!!!



na poochho yaaron mujhse mere dil ka tab kya haal hua,
nashili uski aankhon se jab mere aankhon ka milna hua,

bechaini uski aankhon me thi, apna to jal jaana hua,
dekho fir se koi kaise kisi shaama ka parwaana hua,

dekhte the khwaabon me jise, uska kuch aisa aana hua,
aankhon pe mere bas na chala, ye to uska deewana hua,

dekha usko angrai lete, dupatte me khudko chhupaate,
dekh geele hothon ko uske mera to tab mar jaana hua,

hosh hi tha maine khoya jab uska khidki pe aana hua,
khwab me aati thi kal tak, aaj haqeeqat me aana hua,

geet uspe likhna chaaha par shabdon ka gum jaana hua,
kal uske husn ke maikhaane me apna to behek jaana hua...



*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2010, 06:50:52 PM »
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aaj lag raha hai prem ras ki baarish zoron pe hai.. bahut tez barsaat ho rahi hai.. baadal bhi garaj rahe hain aur bheegne me bada hi mazaa aaraha hai... itne din se ye sab mis u miss u kar raha tha main.. ab jaake jaan me jaan aayi hai... bahut achcha lag raha hai yun likhte jaana aapke saath... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...

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aaj kuch is qadar mehek raha hai saara samaa,
jaane kaise khushboo ka mere ghar aana hua,

har gulaab aaj kuch zyaada hi laal hai,
aur us rang me tere hothon ka rang jaana hua,

samundar me bhi lehren aaj kuch paagal si hain,
aur unke paagalpan me mera bhi behek jaana hua,

dekh ke teri husn ki jaadugari aaj fir se,
mera to aaj khayaalon me kahin gum jaana hua,

likhe the kai geet teri mohabbat k naam humne,
aaj apne hothon se un geeton ka gungunana hua,

kal tak teri muskaan dekh tadapte the hum,
aaj tujhe dekh mere hothon ka muskuraana hua,

tujhe baahon me bhane ki chaahat jaagi hai aaj,
jaane kyun ye paagal aaj fir se deewaana hua,

chumne tere labo ki laali teri or badh jaana hua,
dekh teri madmast jawaani mera to behek jaana hua,

tere chaahat ke samundar me mera to doob jaana hua,
kisi toofaan ka aake mere chaukhat pe thahar jaana hua,

aake meri bahon me aaj tera to pighal jaana hua,
aaj fir se ye dil teri mohabbat ka deewaana hua...
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