Jab yaad aayegi meri muhabbat

by honeyrose on June 08, 2008, 03:42:52 PM
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Dil men armaan liye aapki zindagi men aaye
Har taraf apni muhabbat ka chiraag jalaate aaye

Jab yaad aayegi meri muhabbat tab dhoond lena mujhe
Dil men intazaar ki seedhiyan chadhte huey aaye

Nazar aayenge hum aapke dil men awaaz dedo mujhe
Dil men aap ki sadaon ke dhol bajaate huey aaye

Koi shikwa nahin hai iss zindagi se jab aapka saath hoga
Qadam qadam pe ruk jaayenge hum wafa ke phool barsate aaye

Buhat muskhil ho rahi hai mujhe iss muhabbat ko chhupane men
Raaz-e-dil apne hum saari duniya ko batlaate chale aaye
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2008, 03:51:26 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai HoneyRose.. Applause
Really very very Nice..

Keep Writing..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2008, 05:34:11 PM »
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Thanks you so much Mahiya..
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2008, 06:33:43 PM »
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Dil men armaan liye aapki zindagi men aaye
Har taraf apni muhabbat ka chiraag jalaate aaye

Jab yaad aayegi meri muhabbat tab dhoond lena mujhe
Dil men intazaar ki seedhiyan chadhte huey aaye

Honeyrose Jee bahut hi accha likha hai... yeh wala line toh bahut hi accha likha hai aapne   Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2008, 01:00:26 AM »
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Arey wah,,,
Aap to din-ba-din sixer mar rahi hain... yunhi sab ko apne rachnaaon ke jaadu se mohit kijiye...
Shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2008, 09:38:31 AM »
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Arey wah,,,
Aap to din-ba-din sixer mar rahi hain... yunhi sab ko apne rachnaaon ke jaadu se mohit kijiye...
Shukriya...

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Shukriya Samy aapka..


Honeyrose Jee bahut hi accha likha hai... yeh wala line toh bahut hi accha likha hai aapne   Applause Applause


Thanks Sonia..
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2008, 11:31:50 AM »
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You are always welcome... Next post kab dekhen aapki...?
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2008, 12:48:13 PM »
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You are always welcome... Next post kab dekhen aapki...?
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Ji jaldi hi kuch likhugi ..Shukriya aapka..
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2008, 06:04:53 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI,
HONEY DI.... Applause Applause Applause
DIL KO CHOO GAYI AAP TO
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2008, 06:06:02 PM »
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Ji jaldi hi kuch likhugi ..Shukriya aapka..

Thanks jee, wait karenge jee...

Har qadam pe saath rehenge tere humnasheen, -
To bhale ruk jaaye raaste men kahin, -
Chhupakar kissi se hum iqraar nahin karte, -
Dil men hai jo baat hamare khule aam kahenge. -


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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2008, 06:42:52 PM »
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Thanks jee, wait karenge jee...

Har qadam pe saath rehenge tere humnasheen, -
To bhale ruk jaaye raaste men kahin, -
Chhupakar kissi se hum iqraar nahin karte, -
Dil men hai jo baat hamare khule aam kahenge. -


(Syed Naami)

   

Bohat achi lines hai Samy wah kamaal ka hai...

Shukriya shally sis..


Aapke kadmo ke sahare jee rahe hai hum
Aapke muskurahat ko dekhar jee rahe hai hum

Aapke qadam pe rahege muhabbat bankar
Aapke dil men bas jayenge zindagi bankar

Agar sailaab bhi aaye toh na darenge hum
Aapse dil lagane ka hanseen mauqa nahi khone dege hum
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2008, 08:08:48 PM »
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Fantastic reply HoneyRose Saahiba....
Yeh khumar-e-ishq hai ya jaadu...
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2008, 08:13:14 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Honeyrose and Sami ji!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2008, 11:47:01 AM »
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Fantastic reply HoneyRose Saahiba....
Yeh khumar-e-ishq hai ya jaadu...


Shukriya sami aap bhi kuchh likho waiting for reply..Usual Smile



wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Honeyrose and Sami ji!!!
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 Shukriya aapka pooja sis ..Usual Smile




Woh sunheri yaadein dil se kaise bhool jaaye
Woh muhabbat ka mitta dard kaise bhool jaaye

Ek hawaa ke jaise aaye the aap meri duniya me.n
Mere dil ko chhuraya aapne kaise bhool jaon me.n

Khat likhe the humne aapko aapne jawab na diya
Woh sunheri palon ko yaad karte karte maane na mera jiya
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2008, 03:39:21 AM »
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Very sweet lines honeyRose Saahiba... Keep writing,,, You are excelling in poetry...
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