jaise bhi ho mere ho...

by punam on June 07, 2007, 08:40:24 AM
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kyun tum mujhe aisa dard dete ho
kyun mujhe yun rulate rehete ho

kaun hai dil me bata do mujhe
poochoon to muskura dete ho

main jab rooth ke na bolun toh
tum hi meri jaan yeh kehete ho

dekh nahi sakte mujhe rote huye
aise kehete huye dil behela dete ho..

tum bade hi natkhat ho
jo bhi ho jaise bhi ho mere ho....
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2007, 10:40:38 AM »
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Nice Punam but kuch adhuri si lag rahi hai!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2007, 11:37:11 AM »
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Nice one Punam.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2007, 01:14:52 PM »
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bhoot khoob punam ji or majid bhai
bhoot pyara likha hai aap dono ne

and poonam ji nice work again

netra.........
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2007, 09:16:15 PM »
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Punam, Majid

Bahut khoob !

Majid nice to see you back after a while :D
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2007, 02:53:40 PM »
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good job Punam and Majid!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 06:44:35 AM »
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Ricky ji,sikhadi,netra ji,majid ji,pooja di...and raj ji  thanx ...sab ko ..
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 06:48:11 AM »
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kya jadoo tere pyaar me tha
mujhe apna khabar na raha

kho gayi iskadar teri dhun me
jahan dekhu wahan tu hi najar aa raha

dil aaj pukare aik hi naam
palko  ke piche roop tera hi raha...

mil gayi mujhe duniya ki saari khushi
mile jo tum mujhe sara jahan mil gaya...
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2007, 12:10:39 PM »
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Good one sweetheart.. keeep writing

Divya
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2007, 01:52:52 PM »
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Quote from: "punam"
kyun tum mujhe aisa dard dete ho
kyun mujhe yun rulate rehete ho

kaun hai dil me bata do mujhe
poochoon to muskura dete ho

main jab rooth ke na bolun toh
tum hi meri jaan yeh kehete ho

dekh nahi sakte mujhe rote huye
aise kehete huye dil behela dete ho..

tum bade hi natkhat ho
jo bhi ho jaise bhi ho mere ho....


Wah Wah Punam ji.. Bahut Bahut khoooob.. Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Great 1.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2007, 02:52:35 PM »
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Payaar ka khumar, us per teri nigah ka war
Jaaye to jaaye kahan, ek teri hi soch barmbaar!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2007, 09:08:37 AM »
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thanx divyadi,pooja di..and vicky ji...
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2007, 09:11:29 AM »
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yun guzar jaata hai waqt par dil nahi bharta
tum sang ho toh meri zindagi ka suraj nahi dhalta

bin tere yeh maang saj nahi sakti
sansoo se tera ehsaas chut nahi sakta

thaam lo aaj haath mera bin tere yeh zindagi kat nahi sakti
dil ke aaine me tera hi roop hai jo kabhi mit nahi sakta...
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2007, 09:16:21 AM »
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Punam

Oye hoye ! kya baat hai !

Itna khumar :D

Good work !
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2007, 09:33:35 AM »
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Quote from: "punam"
kyun tum mujhe aisa dard dete ho
kyun mujhe yun rulate rehete ho

kaun hai dil me bata do mujhe
poochoon to muskura dete ho

main jab rooth ke na bolun toh
tum hi meri jaan yeh kehete ho

dekh nahi sakte mujhe rote huye
aise kehete huye dil behela dete ho..

tum bade hi natkhat ho
jo bhi ho jaise bhi ho mere ho....


Poonam it's so sweeeet
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