jaroor padho----its my heart voice

by ankit20 on May 03, 2005, 01:34:18 PM
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kahan gayii vo yaadein kahan gaye vo din
jab marne ko bhi tayyar the hum tumhare bin

baddlon me khinchi thi rekha sooraj pe rakha tha kadam
ye sabne tha dekha ke kaise ek ho gaye the hum dum

hamare pyaar ki tarangen bhukamp le aayi thi dharti par
shaayad eeshwar bhi rota hum dono ki judaai par

afsoos magar jaane kahan se chaand par daag hi maine dekha
shak kiya tum par jaise tuti mere haathon se pyaar ki rekha

tum bholi bhali si kah naa mujhse kuch paayi
haai eeshwar kyon laaya tu hamare beech judaai

jaane se pehle meri aankhon me dekha hota,tumhe mai aadha hi nazar aata
thoda bhi sochti to tumhe shaayad shak ke peeche ek bacche ka kasoor nazar aata

tum to meri saans ho,tumhare bin kaise jinda rah sakta hai ye jaalim tan..

mere khoon se likhi hai ye kavita,chahta hoon ise ek baar padh lo mere humdum,kyonki ab mai rakhne jaa raha hoon kisi doosre lok me kadam

tumhare bin mar jaane ka vaada aaj hum poora kiye jaa rahe hain
uupar waale ke saamne apna ye badnaam muh liye jaa rahe hain
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 01:40:30 PM »
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kahan gayii vo yaadein kahan gaye vo din
jab marne ko bhi tayyar the hum tumhare bin

baddlon me khinchi thi rekha sooraj pe rakha tha kadam
ye sabne tha dekha ke kaise ek ho gaye the hum dum

hamare pyaar ki tarangen bhukamp le aayi thi dharti par
shaayad eeshwar bhi rota hum dono ki judaai par

afsoos magar jaane kahan se chaand par daag hi maine dekha
shak kiya tum par jaise tuti mere haathon se pyaar ki rekha

tum bholi bhali si kah naa mujhse kuch paayi
haai eeshwar kyon laaya tu hamare beech judaai

jaane se pehle meri aankhon me dekha hota,tumhe mai aadha hi nazar aata
thoda bhi sochti to tumhe shaayad shak ke peeche ek bacche ka kasoor nazar aata

tum to meri saans ho,tumhare bin kaise jinda rah sakta hai ye jaalim tan..

mere khoon se likhi hai ye kavita,chahta hoon ise ek baar padh lo mere humdum,kyonki ab mai rakhne jaa raha hoon kisi doosre lok me kadam

tumhare bin mar jaane ka vaada aaj hum poora kiye jaa rahe hain
uupar waale ke saamne apna ye badnaam muh liye jaa rahe hain
wah ankit,dil ki awaaz ho to aisi,brilliant.
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2005, 01:46:19 PM »
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thanks a lot nidhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 02:19:07 PM »
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very  nice   ...ankit20...........bahot  khoob...........
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 02:28:18 PM »
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thanks a lot waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 01:05:29 AM »
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zindagi ke bhanwar me aise fanse
ke khud ko bacha bhi naa paaye
prem bhanwar me aise sane
ke dil laga bhi naa paya
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2005, 02:15:22 AM »
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Bohat khoob Ankit.............................
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2005, 06:11:33 AM »
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thanks aryaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2005, 06:16:16 AM »
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bahut ache ankit ji ..............

dil lagaya tha tuh kyun shaq kiya uspe
jab tum khudse jyada yakin karte the uspe
ki mahobat main shaq ki koi jagah nahi
darti pe mahobat se bada koi bhi khuda nahi
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2005, 07:45:59 AM »
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bilkul theek kaha aapne sandhya jii par ........

is khoobsoorat duniya ko dhek kar shaayad
khuda bhi khud par shak kar baitha hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2005, 08:04:48 AM »
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bilkul theek kaha aapne sandhya jii par ........

is khoobsoorat duniya ko dhek kar shaayad
khuda bhi khud par shak kar baitha hai
sukhriya aur bahut khoob ,,,,,,,,,,,,,anwser

khuda bhi soch raha hai duniya banane ke baad ki
kya hai vo kami jiski vajah se log bewaffai karte hai
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2005, 08:12:17 AM »
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bahut khoob,kaafi aachi kami nikali hai aapne duniya me....

agar shaitaan na hote duniya me to khuda ki khudai ko yaad kaun karta
agar bewafai naa karte log to wafa ka naam kahan hota
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2005, 09:04:31 AM »
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tumhare bin mar jaane ka vaada aaj hum poora kiye jaa rahe hain
uupar waale ke saamne apna ye badnaam muh liye jaa rahe hain.......

Bahut accha Ankit
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2005, 09:16:44 AM »
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hamesha ki tarah thanks dhadkan....................
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