jazbaatoN me BIKHRA hua sa, main ek mohabbat ka PYASA...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 14, 2009, 04:53:34 AM
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Mehfil ko ghayal ka aadaab, umeed karta hun jyada buri na lage aapko, kuch alag sa likha hai is baar....


fir aaya hai vo jiska mujhe darr tha sanam,, pata hai tumhe ab kho denge hum,, par kya kareN is kabakht mohabbat ka,, sab jaan kar bhi hota nahin khatam,, tum chale jaana saath uske apni khushi ko,, par na bhula paayeNge tumhe, sach, tumhaari kasam,, ab kisi aur ka sahi, kal to mera tha humdum,, vaada raha ki ye mera pyar na hoga kab,, haan sach tumhari kasam...




jazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa,
main ek mohabbat ka pyasa.

Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa,
Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa.

Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe,
Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa.

Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi,
dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa.

Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi,
main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa.

Beech bhanvar tha vo “ghayal”,
Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa.
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2009, 08:43:30 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2009, 10:09:06 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Shayar Ji... bohot achcha likha hai aapne !!
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2009, 04:17:45 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 14, 2009, 08:43:30 AM
bahoot khoob likha hai janab aur bahot achcha laga padh-kar Applause Applause

Padhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya janaab....!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2009, 07:02:17 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on March 14, 2009, 04:53:34 AM
jazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa,
main ek mohabbat ka pyasa.

Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa,
Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa.

Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe,
Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa.

Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi,
dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa.

Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi,
main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa.

Beech bhanvar tha vo “ghayal”,
Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa.

 Applause Applause

Bahut Khoob Ghayal ji....
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 03:45:15 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 14, 2009, 10:09:06 AM
Bohot Khoob Shayar Ji... bohot achcha likha hai aapne !!

shukriya celmira ji, bas aage v hume yunhi padhti rahiye...!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 04:20:43 AM »
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wah wah bahoot khoob Sajid ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 04:41:45 AM »
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bahoot khoob shayar ji!
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2009, 05:00:25 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 15, 2009, 07:02:17 AM
Applause Applause

Bahut Khoob Ghayal ji....

Shukriya roza ji, aage v hume yuNhi padhne ki jehmiyat uthati rahiye....!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2009, 05:16:36 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 17, 2009, 04:20:43 AM
wah wah bahoot khoob Sajid ji
shukriya sophi ji....!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2009, 06:27:00 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 17, 2009, 04:41:45 AM
bahoot khoob shayar ji!

shukriya ji, umeed hai ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte raheNgi....!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2009, 07:26:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shayar Ji
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