KAASH WOH PAL RUKH JAATE KISI BAHAANE SE...

by khwaish on May 27, 2008, 03:17:11 PM
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Bahut udaas sa ho gaya hoon,
kisi se do pal mil kar phir door jaane se,
kaash woh pal wahi rukh jaate kisi bahaane se...

kuch main kehta!!
kuch woh kehte!!
kuch aur pal hum saath-saath rehte,
par yeh waqt ne thamna seekha hi nahi
yeh kahan rukhte hai,
kisi ke laakh rukhaane se...

ajeeb hai yeh pyaar ka khel "KHWAISH"
kal hi mile the aur yeh mehsoos hua iss dil ko,
ke bichde the hum unse kayi zamaane se...

kisi bhi jaam ke nashe ka mohtaaz nahi hai "KHWAISH"
nasha to woh hai jo barasta hai,
unke nazro ke paimaane se...

Thak kar Chalna  Aur  Chal kar Thakne ke khel bahut hua,
Ab humein hosh kahan??
hum to ab Chalte hai unke chalaane se....

Koi kehde unhe ke ab hum zinda hai unhi ke dum par,
ab humari saans bhi saans leti hai unke muskuraane se....

apna haal-e-dil to hum kehte reh gaye unse,
kaash aaj shama bhi kehde ke usse bhi mohabat hai parwaane se...
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 04:29:58 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  wow!! Too Good Khwaish ji!!! bahoot hi achi kavita ki rachna ki hai... to janab ka do din mai yah haal ho gaya!! Cho Chaweet!! I really enjoyed your this poem very much!! waiting for more in Khumar-e-Ishaq from you!!!  NaNaNa

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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 05:01:46 PM »
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kiya baat hai aap ki Khwaish bahi
bhot hi acha kam hai
ALLAH aap ko zindaghi day
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2008, 05:41:22 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 27, 2008, 04:29:58 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  wow!! Too Good Khwaish ji!!! bahoot hi achi kavita ki rachna ki hai... to janab ka do din mai yah haal ho gaya!! Cho Chaweet!! I really enjoyed your this poem very much!! waiting for more in Khumar-e-Ishaq from you!!!  NaNaNa

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thankyou so much pooja for appreciating....

aap ne itna kuch likh diya ke kya kahoon!! bahut bahut shukriya aapka.
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2008, 05:43:37 PM »
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Very nice Khwaish...bohot achcha likha hai aapne !
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2008, 06:15:04 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2008, 03:17:11 PM
Bahut udaas sa ho gaya hoon,
kisi se do pal mil kar phir door jaane se,
kaash woh pal wahi rukh jaate kisi bahaane se...

kuch main kehta!!
kuch woh kehte!!
kuch aur pal hum saath-saath rehte,
par yeh waqt ne thamna seekha hi nahi
yeh kahan rukhte hai,
kisi ke laakh rukhaane se...

ajeeb hai yeh pyaar ka khel "KHWAISH"
kal hi mile the aur yeh mehsoos hua iss dil ko,
ke bichde the hum unse kayi zamaane se...

kisi bhi jaam ke nashe ka mohtaaz nahi hai "KHWAISH"
nasha to woh hai jo barasta hai,
unke nazro ke paimaane se...

Thak kar Chalna  Aur  Chal kar Thakne ke khel bahut hua,
Ab humein hosh kahan??
hum to ab Chalte hai unke chalaane se....

Koi kehde unhe ke ab hum zinda hai unhi ke dum par,
ab humari saans bhi saans leti hai unke muskuraane se....

apna haal-e-dil to hum kehte reh gaye unse,
kaash aaj shama bhi kehde ke usse bhi mohabat hai parwaane se...

Good work...bahut acche khwaish ji...

Kho kar ke dil apna, hum mashoor ho gaye,
Kissi ke itne pas hain, sabse dur ho gaye,
Ye jaam-e-muhabbat ya ek nigaah ka jadoo,
Bin piye hi aaj kaabil-e-suroor ho gaye...
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2008, 09:46:14 PM »
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ajeeb hai yeh pyaar ka khel "KHWAISH"
kal hi mile the aur yeh mehsoos hua iss dil ko,
ke bichde the hum unse kayi zamaane se...

kya baat hai ...kya baat hai saheb
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2008, 03:13:45 AM »
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Quote from: ali22a on May 27, 2008, 05:01:46 PM
kiya baat hai aap ki Khwaish bahi
bhot hi acha kam hai
ALLAH aap ko zindaghi day

bahut bahut shukriya alisaab..
welcome to yoindia..
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2008, 03:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 27, 2008, 05:43:37 PM
Very nice Khwaish...bohot achcha likha hai aapne !

thanx a lot celmira..
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2008, 03:16:40 AM »
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Quote from: thycreator on May 27, 2008, 06:15:04 PM
Good work...bahut acche khwaish ji...

Kho kar ke dil apna, hum mashoor ho gaye,
Kissi ke itne pas hain, sabse dur ho gaye,
Ye jaam-e-muhabbat ya ek nigaah ka jadoo,
Bin piye hi aaj kaabil-e-suroor ho gaye...

bahut bahut shukriya amit bhai...
aur bahut khoob kaha aapne.. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2008, 03:20:38 AM »
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Quote from: deetri1 on May 27, 2008, 09:46:14 PM
ajeeb hai yeh pyaar ka khel "KHWAISH"
kal hi mile the aur yeh mehsoos hua iss dil ko,
ke bichde the hum unse kayi zamaane se...

kya baat hai ...kya baat hai saheb

bahut bahut shukriya hausle-afsaai ka deetriji..
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2008, 03:30:56 AM »
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Quote from: thycreator on May 27, 2008, 06:15:04 PM
Good work...bahut acche khwaish ji...

Kho kar ke dil apna, hum mashoor ho gaye,
Kissi ke itne pas hain, sabse dur ho gaye,
Ye jaam-e-muhabbat ya ek nigaah ka jadoo,
Bin piye hi aaj kaabil-e-suroor ho gaye...

hmm pehla do line ek gana pe aadarit hai shayad.
Nice ...
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2008, 10:45:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2008, 03:17:11 PM
Bahut udaas sa ho gaya hoon,
kisi se do pal mil kar phir door jaane se,
kaash woh pal wahi rukh jaate kisi bahaane se...

kuch main kehta!!
kuch woh kehte!!
kuch aur pal hum saath-saath rehte,
par yeh waqt ne thamna seekha hi nahi
yeh kahan rukhte hai,
kisi ke laakh rukhaane se...

ajeeb hai yeh pyaar ka khel "KHWAISH"
kal hi mile the aur yeh mehsoos hua iss dil ko,
ke bichde the hum unse kayi zamaane se...

kisi bhi jaam ke nashe ka mohtaaz nahi hai "KHWAISH"
nasha to woh hai jo barasta hai,
unke nazro ke paimaane se...

Thak kar Chalna  Aur  Chal kar Thakne ke khel bahut hua,
Ab humein hosh kahan??
hum to ab Chalte hai unke chalaane se....

Koi kehde unhe ke ab hum zinda hai unhi ke dum par,
ab humari saans bhi saans leti hai unke muskuraane se....

apna haal-e-dil to hum kehte reh gaye unse,
kaash aaj shama bhi kehde ke usse bhi mohabat hai parwaane se...

kya baat hai khwaishji
aapne bahut accha likha hai
aisa lata hai ki aapki tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad gaye hain
really very nice...
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2008, 05:27:10 AM »
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Khwaish ji,

Bahut khoob kahte he aap..yakeenan gehrai aur saralta ka sundar milaap.

Prateek
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2008, 10:39:02 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 29, 2008, 10:45:29 AM
kya baat hai khwaishji
aapne bahut accha likha hai
aisa lata hai ki aapki tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad gaye hain
really very nice...

bahut bahut shukriya diyaji..aap ne itna kuch keh diya bahut hai!! teh dil se shukriya.
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