karke pyar tumse

by shayara__udita on August 19, 2005, 05:50:21 PM
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                           Karke pyar tumse laga aise

                            Na pyar kiya kisise is jaise

                        Hai pyar ki tumhari adhbhut kaya

                         Hai mujhpe uska jadu hai chaya

                              Paribhasha badli pyarki

                        Aaye jabse zindage mein tum meri

                        Hai tumme yeh kaisi alagsi kashish

                     Samajhne ki bahut karti hu main koshish




                               Karke pyar tumse laga aise

                            Diwana-sa ban gaya yeh dil jaise

            Ji karta hai panchiyon ki tarah khule aasman mein udti rahoon

                      Ji karta hai aasman ke har sitare ko chulu

                           Dil mein aate hai khayal kuch aise

                          Sama ko bhar du khushbuon se jaise

                                E man zara sambhalke rehna

                                 Toot na jaye is prit ki raina
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2005, 06:29:38 PM »
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Quote from: "shayara__udita"

                           Karke pyar tumse laga aise

                            Na pyar kiya kisise is jaise

                        Hai pyar ki tumhari adhbhut kaya

                         Hai mujhpe uska jadu hai chaya

                              Paribhasha badli pyarki

                        Aaye jabse zindage mein tum meri

                        Hai tumme yeh kaisi alagsi kashish

                     Samajhne ki bahut karti hu main koshish




                               Karke pyar tumse laga aise

                            Diwana-sa ban gaya yeh dil jaise

            Ji karta hai panchiyon ki tarah khule aasman mein udti rahoon

                      Ji karta hai aasman ke har sitare ko chulu

                           Dil mein aate hai khayal kuch aise

                          Sama ko bhar du khushbuon se jaise

                                E man zara sambhalke rehna

                                 Toot na jaye is prit ki raina


wow   wonderfullllll   Udita.........  good  starting...........  very  nice  wordings......keep  it  up...............
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2005, 12:38:01 AM »
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Bohat khoob Udita.................
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2005, 06:01:37 PM »
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wah udita...........bohat hi khoob,..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2005, 12:06:16 PM »
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thanx Nidhi n Aryaan

plz do continue to read my shayari n post ur comments

udita
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2008, 11:23:52 AM »
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Dil-e-aram ke liya jiya nahi karte ;
mohabat patharo se kiya nahi karte;
intjar ke lamhe to phir gujar jate hai,
magar bawafa nazar nahi aya karte.
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