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by MANOJ6568 on November 09, 2012, 08:26:04 PM
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Karni hi hai gar manoj to kuch jafa ki baat kar
wafa ki baat sunte sunte to ek zamana ho gaya
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2012, 01:13:09 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2012, 03:22:49 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 10, 2012, 01:13:09 AM
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2012, 12:52:34 PM »
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nycccceeeeeeeee one...
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2012, 02:24:09 PM »
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Bhai maja aa gaya.. Dum  hai is patakhe me.
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2012, 04:30:15 PM »
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Quote from: Saavan on November 10, 2012, 02:24:09 PM
Bhai maja aa gaya.. Dum  hai is patakhe me.
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2012, 07:20:19 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on November 09, 2012, 08:26:04 PM

Karni hi hai gar manoj to kuch jafa ki baat kar
wafa ki baat sunte sunte to ek zamana ho gaya


sher ka composition sahi hai conclusion negatine yaaneee ghalat hai bhaaeee icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

        karnee hai gar baat toh wafaa kee baat kar.
        zakhm-e-jafaa ka dard kab tak sahein ge hum.
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2012, 07:41:44 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on November 11, 2012, 07:20:19 PM

sher ka composition sahi hai conclusion negatine yaaneee ghalat hai bhaaeee icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

        karnee hai gar baat toh wafaa kee baat kar.
        zakhm-e-jafaa ka dard kab tak sahein ge hum.
thx for guiding me
mei to bahut mamuli aur chota shayer hu.jo samjh mei aata hai wahi lihta hu.aap shayeri ke maharathi ho so hame guide karte raha karo
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