kashish......sheba

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                        tafseel zindagi ki wo bayaan karta gayaa..,
                        zakhmo ko mere wo jawaan karta gayaa..,

                        rahi kamyaab bewafaai mein bhi mohabbat uski,
                        muskura kar mujhe wo hairaan karta gayaa,

                        aarzuein, josh-o-jazabbaT khamosh the sabhi,
                        qurbat mein apni mujhe insaan karta gayaa,

                        lekar khud pe ilzaam zamaane ka,
                        shahar mein mujhe badnaam karta gayaa,

                       kashish aisi usmein ki khud ko bhula baithi,
                        wajood-e-sheba ko wo jaam karta gayaa...........!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2011, 08:03:15 AM »
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                        tafseel zindagi ki wo bayaan karta gayaa..,
                        zakhmo ko mere wo jawaan karta gayaa..,

                        rahi kamyaab bewafaai mein bhi mohabbat uski,
                        muskura kar mujhe wo hairaan karta gayaa,

                        aarzuein, josh-o-jazabbat sabhi khamosh the,
                        qurbat mein apni mujhe insaan karta gayaa,

                        lekar khud pe ilzaam zamaane ka,
                        shahar mein mujhe badnaam karta gayaa,

                        kashish aisi usmein ki khud ko bhula baithi,
                        wajood-e-sheba ko wo jaam karta gayaa...........!!!!!


Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Sheba Ji Aapka Andaaz-e-Bayaan Hi Alag Hai..

Akhir Kis Ashaar Ki Tareef Karoon..Bahut bahut Khoob!!!

"Rahi kamyaab bewafaai mein bhi Mohabbat Uski
 Muskura Kar Mujhe Woh Hairaan karta Gaya"

 "Aarzuein,Josh-e-Jazbaat Sabhi Khamosh The
  Qurbat mein Apni Mujhe Insaan Karta Gaya"

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2011, 08:15:25 AM »
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                        aarzuein, josh-o-jazabbat sabhi khamos
                        qurbat mein apni mujhe insaan karta gaya

                       
                        KUCH SAMAJ NAHIN AAYA

                        kashish aisi usmein ki khud ko bhula baithi,
                        wajood-e-sheba ko wo jaam karta gayaa...........!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2011, 08:52:22 AM »
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                        aarzuein, josh-o-jazabbat sabhi khamos
                        qurbat mein apni mujhe insaan karta gaya

                      
                        KUCH SAMAJ NAHIN AAYA

                       kashish aisi usmein ki khud ko bhula baithi,
                        wajood-e-sheba ko wo jaam karta gayaa...........!!!!!
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Taasir Bhai...Har Insaan Apne Jazbaaton ko Apne Tareeke Se lafzon Mein zaahir Karta Hai..

"Aarzuein,Josh-e-Jazbaat Sabhi khamosh The
 Qurbat mein Apni Mujhe Insaan Karta Gaya..

Bin Aarzuein Ke Bin Jazbaaat Ke,
Bin kisi Ehsaas Ke Insaan Sirf Mitti Ka Ek Putla bankar Hi reh Jaata Hai..Isme Yeh Ehsaas Ko Darshaaya Gaya Hai ke
Kisi Ke Qurbat mein(Presence Mein)Yeh Ehsaas Phir Zinda Hue,
Isliye Mujhe Woh Shaks Phir insaan karta Gaya..


Kashish Aisi The Ke Khud Ko Bhula baithi
Wajood-e-Sheba Ko Woh jaam karta Gaya


Insaan Khud Ko Tab Bhoola Baithta Hai jab
 Woh Kisi Nashe mein Ghum Rehta Hai,
Yahan par Yeh Batlaaya Gaya Ke Uss Insaan Ki Kashish mein,
uski maujoodgi Mein,Main Khud Ke Wajodd Ko Bhula baithi,
Yahan Comparison Ek Jaam Se Kiya Gaya

Mujhe Inn 2 A'shaar mein Balki bahut gehraai nazar Aayi..Baaki Sheba Ji Bata Sakte Hai Ke Jo Maine Likha Hai Woh Sahi hai Yaa Galat..

Agar maine Kuch galat Likha Hai To main Muaafi Ka Haqdaar Hoon Aapse Bhi Aur Sheba Ji Se Bhi..Shukriya

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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2011, 08:59:09 AM »
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Taasir Bhai...Har Insaan Apne Jazbaaton ko Apne Tareeke Se lafzon Mein zaahir Karta Hai..

"Aarzuein,Josh-e-Jazbaat Sabhi khamosh The
 Qurbat mein Apni Mujhe Insaan Karta Gaya..

Bin Aarzuein Ke Bin Jazbaaat Ke, Bin kisi Ehsaas Ke Insaan Sirf Mitti Ka Ek Putla bankar Hi reh Jaata Hai..Isme Yeh Ehsaas Ko Darshaaya Gaya Hai ke Kisi Ke Qurbat mein(Presence Mein)Yeh Ehsaas Phir Zinda Hue,Isliye Mujhe Woh Shaks Phir insaan karta Gaya..


Kashish Aisi The Ke Khud Ko Bhula baithi
Wajood-e-Sheba Ko Woh jaam karta Gaya


Insaan Khud Ko Tab Bhoola Baithta Hai jab Woh Kisi Nashe mein Ghum Rehta Hai,Yahan par Yeh Batlaaya Gaya Ke Uss Insaan Ki Kashish mein,uski maujoodgi Mein,Main Khud Ke Wajodd Ko Bhula baithi,Yahan Comparison Ek Jaam Se Kiya Gaya

Mujhe Inn A'shaar mein Balki bahut gehraai nazar Aayi..Baaki Sheba Ji Bata Sakte Hai Ke Jo Maine Likha Hai Woh Sahi hai Yaa Galat..

Agar maine Kuch galat Likha Hai To main Muaafi Ka Haqdaar Hoon Aapse Bhi Aur Sheba Ji Se Bhi..Shukriya




waah khawaish ji aapne wahi explain kiya jaisa maine sher mein likha thaa 100% same. waah itna acha to main bhi taasir sahab ko nahin samjha paati waise main apne sher ko kisi ke liye tabhi explain karti hoon jab main sure rahti hoon ki ye samajh se baahra hoga. per taasir sahab ne jinn sher per aitraaz jatayaa wo bahut aasaan tha samajhne ke liye.

aapkaa bahut bahut shukriya khawaish ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2011, 09:25:15 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2011, 10:01:36 AM »
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Mujhe to aaj maalum hua jaam sharaab ko kehte hai main jaam ko pyala matlab goblet samajta tha aur sheba ka wajood pyala ban ke khud ko bhula bheta? kamaal hai?  kher ab waah waah karna hi hai to bematlab misre bhi kya ja sakta hai...waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2011, 10:08:16 AM »
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bht hi khoob peshkash sheba ji....
sply 3rd one....
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2011, 11:16:32 AM »
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                        tafseel zindagi ki wo bayaan karta gayaa..,
                        zakhmo ko mere wo jawaan karta gayaa..,

                        rahi kamyaab bewafaai mein bhi mohabbat uski,
                        muskura kar mujhe wo hairaan karta gayaa,

                        aarzuein, josh-o-jazabbaT khamosh the sabhi,
                        qurbat mein apni mujhe insaan karta gayaa,

                        lekar khud pe ilzaam zamaane ka,
                        shahar mein mujhe badnaam karta gayaa,

                        kashish aisi usmein ki khud ko bhula baithi,
                        wajood-e-sheba ko wo jaam karta gayaa...........!!!!!


Bahut umda sheba ji...khwaish ji har lafz ko bade khubsurat shabdo mein apne explain kiya hai bahut acha ji..
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2011, 11:17:03 AM »
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bahut khoob shiba ji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2011, 02:27:26 PM »
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Shebaa jee! aap ke kalaam me lafzoN ko jis tarah maanikhez andaaz me sajaayaa gayaa hai qaabil e taareef hai.....dili daad kubool farmaayen.....
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2011, 03:42:44 PM »
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waah khawaish ji aapne wahi explain kiya jaisa maine sher mein likha thaa 100% same. waah itna acha to main bhi taasir sahab ko nahin samjha paati waise main apne sher ko kisi ke liye tabhi explain karti hoon jab main sure rahti hoon ki ye samajh se baahra hoga. per taasir sahab ne jinn sher per aitraaz jatayaa wo bahut aasaan tha samajhne ke liye.

aapkaa bahut bahut shukriya khawaish ji
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Thankyou Soooooo Much Shebaji..Jo Aapne itni Izzat bakshi..Aur Aap Shukriya Naa Kahiye, balki Humein Aapka Shukriya Ada Karna Chahiye Jo Aapne Itni Achi Ghazal Padhne Ka Humein Mauka Diya..

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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2011, 09:53:11 AM »
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Mujhe to aaj maalum hua jaam sharaab ko kehte hai main jaam ko pyala matlab goblet samajta tha aur sheba ka wajood pyala ban ke khud ko bhula bheta? kamaal hai?  kher ab waah waah karna hi hai to bematlab misre bhi kya ja sakta hai...waah waah

AT VERY OUTSET I EXTEND MY THANKS FOR YOUR NOTEWORTHY COMMENTS.
SIR, I HEREBY ACCEPT THAT MY LITTLE KNOELEDGE CANNOT REACH TO YOUR INTELLECT LEVEL. SO PLEASE DONT BANG YOUR HEAD AND DONT PASS ANY SATIRICAL COMMENTS TO ANY ONE. IF YOU HAVE OBJECTION IN ANY STANZA, COULD BE ASKED IN DIFFERENT WAY.IF YOU DONT LIKE DONT GIVE A BIG HAND . THATS ALL. I DONT ENTERTAIN ANY ONE IN  P.M UNLESS IT IS INEVITABLE.LOOKING FORWARD TO LEARN FROM YOU . I CAN READLY CORRECT SPELLINGS IF SOME ONE SAYS, BUT I DONT FORMULATE THE 'SHER' ON OTHERS ADVISE.

    I DONT,UNLESS I FEEL IT NEEDS TO BE CLARIFIED, IF OBJECTION RAISED IN ANY OF MY SHER.

THANK YOU SIR.
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2011, 10:23:05 AM »
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kamaal ka peshkash

THANK YOU KILLBILL
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2011, 10:04:33 AM »
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Bahut umda sheba ji...khwaish ji har lafz ko bade khubsurat shabdo mein apne explain kiya hai bahut acha ji..

thank you broken ji
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