keh do sanam....

by Naya_Daur on October 22, 2006, 06:13:26 AM
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keh do sanam,aisi baat jo dil ko chu jaaye
main tujh mein,tu mujh mein iss barsaat mein kho jayein

gulshan gulshan yeh sama,uss par tera  mere sath hona
rang-e-mohabbat ki tasveer,inn palon se khil-khila jaye

anchal tera mujhse atkhaliyan kare,
sajj-o-shringar tera mujhe nasha de

sile honth ajj kuch aaisi baat kar jayein
Jeet deewana bas sirf tera ho kar reh jaye

keh do sanam,aisi baat jo dil ko chu jaaye
main tujh mein,tu mujh mein iss barsaat mein kho jayein...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2006, 09:10:24 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Bhai Jaan,..
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2006, 03:56:58 PM »
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VERY NICE JEET............

tum bhi kuchh aisa karo hamadam is dil ko qarar bas aa jae
tujhe bhool na paaenge sach hai bas jeena tere bin aajae
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2006, 05:14:26 PM »
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bahoot Khoob Didi,..
lage raho,..
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2006, 06:25:14 PM »
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wonderful   Jeet...........  Tabassum.............
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2006, 05:41:56 AM »
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apne sab ehsaas mere pass rehne do
bas mujhe apne dil ke aas pass rehne do

hai ek pyaas ki mere labo per sehera ki
mere labo per abhi wahi payaas rehne do

sulag raha hai dil na jaane kin armaano se
ek jalati bujati si mohbaat ki aanch rehne do

taye hoga yeh ishq ka safar kuch yun bhi
meri aankho mein kuch khawabo ka jahaaan rehne do!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2006, 07:49:49 AM »
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keh do sanam,aisi baat jo dil ko chu jaaye
main tujh mein,tu mujh mein iss barsaat mein kho jayein

gulshan gulshan yeh sama,uss par tera  mere sath hona
rang-e-mohabbat ki tasveer,inn palon se khil-khila jaye

anchal tera mujhse atkhaliyan kare,
sajj-o-shringar tera mujhe nasha de

sile honth ajj kuch aaisi baat kar jayein
Jeet deewana bas sirf tera ho kar reh jaye

keh do sanam,aisi baat jo dil ko chu jaaye
main tujh mein,tu mujh mein iss barsaat mein kho jayein...!!!
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wah! wah! excellent jeet =D> =D>
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2006, 07:51:03 AM »
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kya baat hai bahut khoob tabassum ji, ranju ji ..........
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2006, 08:01:44 AM »
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Thanks  Tabbu,Jsheen n waheed bro n GESU .. .....

Quote from: "ranjana"
apne sab ehsaas mere pass rehne do
bas mujhe apne dil ke aas pass rehne do

hai ek pyaas ki mere labo per sehera ki
mere labo per abhi wahi payaas rehne do

sulag raha hai dil na jaane kin armaano se
ek jalati bujati si mohbaat ki aanch rehne do

taye hoga yeh ishq ka safar kuch yun bhi
meri aankho mein kuch khawabo ka jahaaan rehne do!!


Ranjhana ji...

yeh sulagte armano ko pyaasa app kab tak rakhoge
apni mohabbat ke khawabon ka,mujhse pardha kab tak karoge

aap hi aap ho dil ke har konne mein
inn pyaar ki zanjeeron se kab tak bachoge

kho jaane do ek dujhe mein ajj ki sham
pigaal jaane do khud ko mere agosh mein

behkate kadam,thirakte honth,machalte jism ko
apne deewane ke ilawa,inko sahara kahan se doge....
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2006, 08:09:11 AM »
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Jeet, Tabassum, Ranju

Bahut khoob !

Jeet

Kya baat hai !  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

 :wink:  :wink:  :wink:
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2006, 08:13:05 AM »
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Thanks  Tabbu,Jsheen n waheed bro n GESU .. .....

Quote from: "ranjana"
apne sab ehsaas mere pass rehne do
bas mujhe apne dil ke aas pass rehne do

hai ek pyaas ki mere labo per sehera ki
mere labo per abhi wahi payaas rehne do

sulag raha hai dil na jaane kin armaano se
ek jalati bujati si mohbaat ki aanch rehne do

taye hoga yeh ishq ka safar kuch yun bhi
meri aankho mein kuch khawabo ka jahaaan rehne do!!


Ranjhana ji...

yeh sulagte armano ko pyaasa app kab tak rakhoge
apni mohabbat ke khawabon ka,mujhse pardha kab tak karoge

aap hi aap ho dil ke har konne mein
inn pyaar ki zanjeeron se kab tak bachoge

kho jaane do ek dujhe mein ajj ki sham
pigaal jaane do khud ko mere agosh mein

behkate kadam,thirakte honth,machalte jism ko
apne deewane ke ilawa,inko sahara kahan se doge....



kya baat hai.... :oops:  bahut khoob Jeet ......



jab tak mile ne yeh nighaae teri aur meri
yeh payaas yun hi jalti bujhti rehegi

basi hun jio main hi main tere dil ke har kone mein
toh yeh shama pyaar ki yun hi jalati rehegi


pigahal raha hai mera jism tere hi lafzao ki garmi se
yeh heer ab  ranjha ko ho ke rehegi

tu hi tu aur tera hi tasvur hai mere khyaalo mein
is dil ke har ibaadat bas tere dil ki fariyaad banegi

har lamha hai teri hi baato ki asar is dil per
meri vaaran raate khaawab tera hi bunengi !!
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2006, 08:18:23 AM »
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Ranju

Badi jaldi jawaab diya :D

Good one  :wink:
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«Reply #12 on: October 27, 2006, 10:03:49 AM »
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Ranju

Badi jaldi jawaab diya :D

Good one  :wink:



 Puzzled ! shukriya

jeet ne bahut accha likha thaa

isliye reply jaldi se aa gaya Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2006, 10:08:38 AM »
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Ranju

Badi jaldi jawaab diya :D

Good one  :wink:



 Puzzled ! shukriya

jeet ne bahut accha likha thaa

isliye reply jaldi se aa gaya Usual Smile  Usual Smile



thanks Ranjana ji....... :D :D !!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 28, 2006, 04:48:56 AM »
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ranjitey bahut sohna likhiya hai vesey kedey vastey likhya hia ohvi tey das... :-?mmmm  wonderful likha hia ......


ranju sis keya bat hia her bar ki thra apka javab nahi..

tabassum ji bahut khoob..
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