Khaas hai..

by brokenbyluv on February 18, 2010, 02:35:49 AM
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Main janti hu aaj merra ajnabi kuch udas hai,
mujhe sine se lagane ki usko aas hai,
main bhi tadap rahi hu usse izhar karne ko..
ki wahi ab mujhe lakho mein sabse khaas hai......
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2010, 02:58:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2010, 03:53:04 AM »
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Wow great creation Geet ji bahut hi khoob.hats off
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2010, 03:56:37 AM »
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thnx madhu ji...love4
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2010, 04:30:33 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shihab ji,great lines
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2010, 10:20:54 AM »
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Main janti hu aaj merra ajnabi kuch udas hai,
mujhe sine se lagane ki usko aas hai,
main bhi tadap rahi hu usse izhar karne ko..
ki wahi ab mujhe lakho mein sabse khaas hai......

WAH KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....



YE SACH HAI TERA AJNABI AAJ KUCH UDAAS HAI
TUJHKO MILNE KE LIYE TADAPA RAHI USKE MANN KI PYAAS HAI
AAJ BANA BAITHA HAI TERE LIYE APNE DIL ME JAGAH KHAAS HAI
TU AAYE USKE SEENE SE LAG JAAYE MIT JAAYE MANN KI JO AAS HAI...
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2010, 12:28:18 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2010, 01:30:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob Cara ji,great lines
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2010, 07:31:15 PM »
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Main janti hu aaj merra ajnabi kuch udas hai,
mujhe sine se lagane ki usko aas hai,
main bhi tadap rahi hu usse izhar karne ko..
ki wahi ab mujhe lakho mein sabse khaas hai......


Nice one...
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2010, 07:50:49 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....



YE SACH HAI TERA AJNABI AAJ KUCH UDAAS HAI
TUJHKO MILNE KE LIYE TADAPA RAHI USKE MANN KI PYAAS HAI
AAJ BANA BAITHA HAI TERE LIYE APNE DIL ME JAGAH KHAAS HAI
TU AAYE USKE SEENE SE LAG JAAYE MIT JAAYE MANN KI JO AAS HAI...

Kyun Is Qadar Pash o Pesh Se Guzarte Ho
   Kyun Khamkha Aap Yun  Aahein Bharte Ho

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          To Phir Jakar Izhar Kyun Nahi Karte Ho.!



Thnx cara ji aur aap dono ne bahut khoob likha hai...


Nazdikiyo se aksar betaabi badh jati hai,
dooriya bhi mujhe pal pal satati hai,
usse doori tadpati hai aur nazdiki darati hai..
isi uljhan ko suljhate merri har shaam beet jati hai......
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2010, 07:58:08 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Geetji.

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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2010, 07:59:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2010, 08:03:57 PM »
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Nice one...

thnx think ji n celmira ji....
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2010, 08:27:31 PM »
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Thnx cara ji aur aap dono ne bahut khoob likha hai...


Nazdikiyo se aksar betaabi badh jati hai,
dooriya bhi mujhe pal pal satati hai,
usse doori tadpati hai aur nazdiki darati hai..
isi uljhan ko suljhate merri har shaam beet jati hai......
WAH KYA BAAY HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI.....


TUJHSE DOOR BHI NAHIN RAHE SAKHTA
TERE NAZDIK AANE SE BHI DARTA HAI
KAHIN USKE PYAR KO TU INKAR NA KARDE
BICHARA DIL KI BAAT DIL MEIN DABAKE RAKHTA HAI....
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2010, 08:30:00 PM »
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bahoot Khoob Geet !
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