Khaffa!

by Ravi_Dave on January 27, 2006, 03:40:54 PM
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Khaffa hogaye woh jo lafzon pe kaboo na raha,
kehna kuch aur chahte the kuch aur baata diya,
wafa ki raah mein humne apni chitaa khood sajayi,
paane chahte the unhe zubaan maut banke aayi,

Naa koi umang hain ab pyase preet ki,
naa hi gunjaish hai bichde huve meet ki,
jab goozar te hain wafa ke maud se to koi khata kar jate hain,
jeeyege kaise unke bina yeh soch kar ghabrate jate hain,

Nahi baat karenge ke shabd moosibat ban ke aate hain,
pyar nahi woh zeher barsaate hain,
ab to kab maafi milegi aur deedar honge (2),
woh chod ke nafrat hume thoda pyar denge!
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2006, 03:50:10 PM »
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this is just wonderfull  Ravi.....

jo kabhi na karna chahte the humne woh kar diya
jisse manana kathin hai usse hi khaffa kar diya

abb lafz nahi milte usse samjhane wale
woh door ja raha hai mujhse
koi to bataye hum kaise uski rah roke
kaise usse mana le...

woh chala gaya to jee na payenge
maut na bhi aayi to bin maut hi marr jayenge

abb maan bhi jao oh rooth kar jaane wale
abb kya hum iss layak bhi nahi rahe
ke koi humein pyar se gale laga le
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2006, 04:01:55 PM »
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Ravi and nikki

Feelings ka bahut hi khoobsurat izhaar kiya hai aap dono ne !

Keep it up

Rajbir
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2006, 04:05:01 PM »
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thanx buddy
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2006, 04:11:50 PM »
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Amazing Ravi n Choti !!!

Aap ki duniya hamare naam thi
Aap ke bin zindagi kis kaam ki

Aap ne hum se taalluq torr kar
Ghair se rasm-e-muhabbat aam ki

Umr bhar nisbet rahi jo aap se
ik pal mein doosre ke naam ki

Zindagi be-kaar ho ke reh gai
Saans chalti hai bara-e-naam ki !!  
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2006, 04:12:03 PM »
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Kya Baat Hain!

Bohat Khoob NikkiJi!

Chale gaye woh yun dil todhkar,
waapas naa dekha ek baar bhi moud kar,
kya hum itne bewaafa hogaye,
ke chod gaye hume akele mein jeene ko ghumo ka samandar de kar,

Begaana kar gaye woh is tarah jaise koi apna hi kar sakta hain,
dard unki judaai ka basaaya hain jaise koi apna hi rakta hain,
hume is layak kar diya pyar mein ke hume thokre hi mile,
lekin humne banaya hai mandir jisme hume unki khudai hi mile,

Nahi rahe haal is kadar ke pyar ka damaan phir chade,
zakhmi hain har rooh ke gir gir ke hain aage bade,
unke tasavoor mein khoye huve har waqt unhe hain roka (2)
unhone naa rakhi laaj majboor jee ki soch kar undheron mein akele hain khade!
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2006, 04:14:55 PM »
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Shukriya Doston!
Aap hain humare kaasid warna hum akele mein mar jaate!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2006, 04:24:07 PM »
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HumTum and Ravi

Very well written !

Ravi aap khul kar apni feelings yahan par express kariye.

Yeh doston ki nagri hai... :D

Rajbir
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2006, 04:24:27 PM »
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Very nice ravi, nikki, and hum tum... teenon ne hi bahot achcha likha hai Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2006, 04:26:19 PM »
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very nice Ravi n Humtum
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2006, 04:42:25 PM »
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Thank You Evry1!

Bohat Acche Hum_TumJi!

Maut aajaye humne yeh dua ki,
akele mein nahi humne sare aam ki,

humse poocha hazaaro ne yeh kya pagaalpan hain,
humne apka kasoor chupa ke apne kasoor ki kahani unse bayaan ki,

woh bhi ro pade apki khudari par,
jab apki taarif ki baate humne tamaam ki,

bewaafa keh ke woh bhi aap ki tarah chale gaye,
humne apko dildaar batake sazaa-e-thokar apna li!
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2006, 04:47:42 PM »
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very nice friends!!!!


Hum chahte to waqt badal sakte the,
meri akh se nikle aansu teri akh se nikal sakte the,
hum to ruke rhe jheel k pani ki trah,
bante daria to bhut dur nikal sakte
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #12 on: January 27, 2006, 05:04:21 PM »
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Shukriya Burniin_DesiiresJi apne bhi kya touching kali likhi hain!

Badal naa chaha tha bighadte halaat ko,
rokh naa chaha tha zeherile khayaalat ko,
kuch aur kar naa sakhe sirf unhe khaffa kar diya (2)
aaj bethe hain khushi ke mahol mein lekin khushi ne saath chod diya,
kisi din woh humein apna banayenge (2)
ye soch kar dil ko hain behlaya!
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«Reply #13 on: January 27, 2006, 05:09:02 PM »
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(posting this second time,sorry)

Zikar unka hi aata hai mere fasane me,
jinko jaan se zyada chaha humne zamane me,
tanhai mein unki hi yad ka sahara mila,
nakamyaab rahe jinhe hum bhulane me.
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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2006, 11:37:09 PM »
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humtum,ravi,badnaam FANTASTIC
hoti hai aisi mohabbat bi
socha maine na tha
pyar kia jisko bi
usne hamara haath beech raha mein chor dia tha!!!
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