khali kamry(gul)

by gulzargul on September 27, 2008, 07:04:27 PM
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kesa hy makaa'n ye khali kamry
dil e insaa'n ye khali kamry

ker diya tanha talash e sokoon ny
kerty hain peryshaa'n ye khali kamry

kho jaata hoon apny makaa'n main
dekhta hoon jahaa'n ye khali kamry

kan phat ty hain goonjti aawazon sy
kon hey yahan ye khali kamry

ghar banta hy ghar walon sy
werna hain zanda'n ye khali kamry

rehny ko ghar nahi dil chahiye
dekh ary naadaa'n ye khali kamry

beghar pary hain kitny masoom bachy
aor mery yahaa'n ye khali kamry

ik sannata sa chaya hy yahaa'n
pary hain weeraa'n ye khali kamry

makaa'n ki hawas main dekh ker mujhy
hoty hain heyraa'n ye khali kamry

baantna seekh jaaen ger ham makaa'n ko
phir hongy kahaa'n ye khali kamry

ham ny dekha hy aksar figar
maskan e sheytaa'n ye khali kamry
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 07:26:35 PM »
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bahoot umda bhai gul
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 07:45:26 PM »
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thank u dost

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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 07:59:08 PM »
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mai bhara tere khayal se aur,
hawaon se bhar gaye ye khali kamray,

tere bagair lagte hain
kitne udaas ye khaali kamray
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 08:10:10 PM »
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buht khoob bekarar ji khoob likha aap ny

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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 02:50:08 AM »
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Bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne Gul Applause Yunhi apni shayari ka jaadoo jaari rakhiye  Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2008, 06:15:39 PM »
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thank u miss celmira ji


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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2009, 07:46:14 PM »
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bahut khoob gul ji....
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2009, 08:22:11 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot Khoob Gul ji and good lines Sanjeev ji !
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