khamosh raaho mein

by suman59 on August 01, 2012, 04:55:50 PM
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khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye
tanha hai mera hath, tera hath chahiye

mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen to hai
tujhko bi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye

mai khud apni shayri ko kya acha kehta
mujhko teri tareef se, teri daad chahiye
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2012, 05:01:45 PM »
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bilkul daad bhee haajir hai aur taareef bhee bahut shaandaar peshkash khush raho keep it up rau bhee denaa kaamyaab huaa
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2012, 05:03:03 PM »
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vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
Bahut umda..har shayar ki yahi khwaish hoti hai.
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2012, 05:55:13 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 01, 2012, 05:01:45 PM
bilkul daad bhee haajir hai aur taareef bhee bahut shaandaar peshkash khush raho keep it up rau bhee denaa kaamyaab huaa

bahut bahut shukriya. (dekhiye na maangna padta hai tarif bi... jaise vote do vote do maagte hai) tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2012, 05:56:34 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 01, 2012, 05:03:03 PM
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
vaah vaaah vaaah Kya baat hai
Bahut umda..har shayar ki yahi khwaish hoti hai.

aap ke taraf se wah wah... mujhe aur likhne ko majbur kar raha hai.
bahut bahut bahuuuuuuuuuuut thanks jee
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2012, 07:03:21 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on August 01, 2012, 04:55:50 PM
khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye
tanha hai mera hath, tera hath chahiye

mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen to hai
tujhko bi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye

mai khud apni shayri ko kya acha kehta
mujhko teri tareef se, teri daad chahiye



               HAI TAMANNA MOHABBAT MEIN HAARNEY KII.!
               TEREY DILKASH ADAAO.N SE MAAT CHAHIYE.!

               DEKHEY AASMAAN BHII  MEREY MEHBOOB KO.!
               KAHKASHO.N BHARII  WOH  RAAT  CHAHIYE.!

               ZINDAGII HIJR MEIN GUZRII AB TALAK KHAMOSH.!
               WASL-E-MEHBOOB KII SAUGAAT CHAHIYE.!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2012, 01:45:41 AM »
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bahut khub aunty b ahut badhiya........
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2012, 02:15:26 AM »
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Wah Wah Suman G BAhut Khub
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2012, 02:47:41 AM »
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vey good mam what a nice creation, congrates
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2012, 09:20:54 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2012, 11:48:10 PM »
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wah wah kya bat hai
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