<>*Khamosh sa ek rishta*<>

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<>*Khamosh sa ek rishta*<>


 love4 love4 love4 love4

Khamosh sa ek rishta
Gumsum saa tanha saa

  love9 love9

Do aatmaon ko baandhe
Ek andekhi si dor se

 love9 love9

Kuch kehta kuch sunta
Kuch andekha ajeeb sa

 love9 love9

Do dilon ko jod rakha hai
Ehsason ke zor se
 
love9 love9

Tujhme mujhko basaye
Mujhme tujhko samaye

 love9 love9

Afsano ko sajaye kuch aise
Lehren uthe jaise zor se

 love9 love9

Na koi samjha hai ise
Na koi samjh payega kabhi

 love9 love9

Jo rishta bandha hai
Ek kachchi dor se...!!!

 love4 love4 love4 love4

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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2010, 07:49:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kasak Jee bahut achchi creation Daad..... kam lafzoN meiN bahut kuch kah jana bahut mushkil hai.......
Aapki yeh kalaam achchi lagi hume phir se daad.. Thumbs UP
Likhti rahiye....
khush rahiye.....
Khdua hafez...... Usual Smile         



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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 07:52:47 PM »
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Kasak Jee bahut achchi creation Daad..... kam lafzoN meiN bahut kuch kah jana bahut mushkil hai.......
Aapki yeh kalaam achchi lagi hume phir se daad.. Thumbs UP
Likhti rahiye....
khush rahiye.....
Khdua hafez...... Usual Smile         





aapki daad paake dil khush khush ho jata hai parwaz ji...thnku very much..pasand karne k liye ji...
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2010, 02:18:55 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       KASAK ....DIL KI JI....



                       KHAMOSH SA EK RISHTA
                       MUJHSE JUD GAYA KOI


                       KHAMOSHI SE DIL MEIN
                       MERE UTTER GAYA KOI


                       KHAMOSHI SE MUJHKO
                       APNA BANA GAYA KOI


                       KHAMOSHI SE TAN MANN MEIN
                       MERE AAG LAGA GAYA KOI


                       KHAMOSHI SE MERA SAPNA
                       PURA KAR GAYA KOI..


                      
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2010, 06:39:18 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita hai ya kahun ki geet hai.. jo bhi kahen par bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne aur jiske liye bhi likha hai wo sach me bahut kismat waala hoga jo use ap jaisa ek khaas dost mila hai... bahut pyaara, dil se direct, bahut sundar likha hai apne.. jiske liye aapne likha hai wo agar iska jawaab deta to shayad uski awaaz kehti ye kehti...

ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,
koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
dekhi hai tasveer uski, usko kabhi dekha nahi,
ab to khayalon me bhi uska chehra dikhne laga,

mile the zindagi ke mod pe yun chalte chalte,
kisi ki baaton me main apni awaaz sunne laga,
na mile kabhi, na pata wo kaisi lagti hogi,
par uske hone se ab har samaa mehekne laga,

hamare khaton ka silsila kuch is tarha shuru hua,
wo mujhse apni baat aur main usse apni kehne laga,
apne dil ki har baat ko hum dil me band na rakhke,
wo mujhse kehne lagi aur main usse bhi kehne laga,

jaane ye kaisa rishta hai, jaane kaisa naata hai,
ab to raat bhar humein jagne ka mazaa aane laga,
dard ki deewaaron me kuch is tarha ghira hua tha,
deewaarein sab dheh gayi aur dard dur jaane laga,

ab har subah uske hi naam, shaam bhi uska hua,
waqt ka hi khel hai sab, waqt bhi jaane laga,
har ghadi uski hi baatein, har ghadi uski hi yaadein,
mumkin nahi ye saath pyaare main khud ko samjhaane laga,

tanha thi har raat meri, tanha hi har din bhi tha,
ab to us tanhaayi ka bhi mujhko mazaa aane laga,
saath paake us ajnabi ka, achcha sa lagne laga,
kuch anjaana sa wo chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,

koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga....
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2010, 06:44:40 AM »
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<>*Khamosh sa ek rishta*<>


 love4 love4 love4 love4

Khamosh sa ek rishta
Gumsum saa tanha saa

  love9 love9

Do aatmaon ko baandhe
Ek andekhi si dor se

 love9 love9

Kuch kehta kuch sunta
Kuch andekha ajeeb sa

 love9 love9

Do dilon ko jod rakha hai
Ehsason ke zor se
 
love9 love9

Tujhme mujhko basaye
Mujhme tujhko samaye

 love9 love9

Afsano ko sajaye kuch aise
Lehren uthe jaise jor se

 love9 love9

Na koi samjha hai ise
Na koi samjh payega kabhi

 love9 love9

Jo rishta bandha hai
Ek kachchi dor se...!!!

 love4 love4 love4 love4

Bahut khoob Anamika ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2010, 09:31:06 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita hai ya kahun ki geet hai.. jo bhi kahen par bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne aur jiske liye bhi likha hai wo sach me bahut kismat waala hoga jo use ap jaisa ek khaas dost mila hai... bahut pyaara, dil se direct, bahut sundar likha hai apne.. jiske liye aapne likha hai wo agar iska jawaab deta to shayad uski awaaz kehti ye kehti...

ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,
koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
dekhi hai tasveer uski, usko kabhi dekha nahi,
ab to khayalon me bhi uska chehra dikhne laga,

mile the zindagi ke mod pe yun chalte chalte,
kisi ki baaton me main apni awaaz sunne laga,
na mile kabhi, na pata wo kaisi lagti hogi,
par uske hone se ab har samaa mehekne laga,

hamare khaton ka silsila kuch is tarha shuru hua,
wo mujhse apni baat aur main usse apni kehne laga,
apne dil ki har baat ko hum dil me band na rakhke,
wo mujhse kehne lagi aur main usse bhi kehne laga,

jaane ye kaisa rishta hai, jaane kaisa naata hai,
ab to raat bhar humein jagne ka mazaa aane laga,
dard ki deewaaron me kuch is tarha ghira hua tha,
deewaarein sab dheh gayi aur dard dur jaane laga,

ab har subah uske hi naam, shaam bhi uska hua,
waqt ka hi khel hai sab, waqt bhi jaane laga,
har ghadi uski hi baatein, har ghadi uski hi yaadein,
mumkin nahi ye saath pyaare main khud ko samjhaane laga,

tanha thi har raat meri, tanha hi har din bhi tha,
ab to us tanhaayi ka bhi mujhko mazaa aane laga,
saath paake us ajnabi ka, achcha sa lagne laga,
kuch anjaana sa wo chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,

koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga....

Nice response Kapil
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2010, 01:09:24 AM »
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<>*Khamosh sa ek rishta*<>


 love4 love4 love4 love4

Khamosh sa ek rishta
Gumsum saa tanha saa

  love9 love9

Do aatmaon ko baandhe
Ek andekhi si dor se

 love9 love9

Kuch kehta kuch sunta
Kuch andekha ajeeb sa

 love9 love9

Do dilon ko jod rakha hai
Ehsason ke zor se
 
love9 love9

Tujhme mujhko basaye
Mujhme tujhko samaye

 love9 love9

Afsano ko sajaye kuch aise
Lehren uthe jaise jor se

 love9 love9

Na koi samjha hai ise
Na koi samjh payega kabhi

 love9 love9

Jo rishta bandha hai
Ek kachchi dor se...!!!

 love4 love4 love4 love4



very nice creation.........keep it up



aslam
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2010, 01:10:28 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita hai ya kahun ki geet hai.. jo bhi kahen par bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne aur jiske liye bhi likha hai wo sach me bahut kismat waala hoga jo use ap jaisa ek khaas dost mila hai... bahut pyaara, dil se direct, bahut sundar likha hai apne.. jiske liye aapne likha hai wo agar iska jawaab deta to shayad uski awaaz kehti ye kehti...

ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,
koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
dekhi hai tasveer uski, usko kabhi dekha nahi,
ab to khayalon me bhi uska chehra dikhne laga,

mile the zindagi ke mod pe yun chalte chalte,
kisi ki baaton me main apni awaaz sunne laga,
na mile kabhi, na pata wo kaisi lagti hogi,
par uske hone se ab har samaa mehekne laga,

hamare khaton ka silsila kuch is tarha shuru hua,
wo mujhse apni baat aur main usse apni kehne laga,
apne dil ki har baat ko hum dil me band na rakhke,
wo mujhse kehne lagi aur main usse bhi kehne laga,

jaane ye kaisa rishta hai, jaane kaisa naata hai,
ab to raat bhar humein jagne ka mazaa aane laga,
dard ki deewaaron me kuch is tarha ghira hua tha,
deewaarein sab dheh gayi aur dard dur jaane laga,

ab har subah uske hi naam, shaam bhi uska hua,
waqt ka hi khel hai sab, waqt bhi jaane laga,
har ghadi uski hi baatein, har ghadi uski hi yaadein,
mumkin nahi ye saath pyaare main khud ko samjhaane laga,

tanha thi har raat meri, tanha hi har din bhi tha,
ab to us tanhaayi ka bhi mujhko mazaa aane laga,
saath paake us ajnabi ka, achcha sa lagne laga,
kuch anjaana sa wo chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga,

koi to hai aisa jise main apna samajhne laga,
ek anjaana sa chehra kuch apna sa lagne laga....


Klaskar jii kya baat hai khoob........achi kaawish hai likhte rahiye



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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2010, 08:12:17 PM »
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thanks a lot Rajesh ji...!!!

Nice response Kapil
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2010, 08:13:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!


Klaskar jii kya baat hai khoob........achi kaawish hai likhte rahiye



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