|
cool neha
Guest
|
|
|
|
Bahut dino baad aaj khuda se mulakaat hui...
main hun itni dukhi q..??
iss par bahut der tak baat hui....
pucha maine-naseeb me mere nahi vo q...??
aaj door ho kar bhi khush hai q.....??
khuda hansa aur bola----
vaah re neha! tune hi toh khushi maangi thi uski...
apni khushiya jholi me daali thi uski.....
aaj vo tere bina isiliye khush hai....
qki teri duaon me ab bhi voh shaksh hai...
tu hi chahti thi ki vo khush rahe....
jaha rahe vo aabad rahe....
main apni hi dua par sochne lagi...
uski khushiya mere dukh me badalne lagi...
boli main khuda se.....
aap bhi aap ho...
dua bhi maan li ....par mujhe kuchh na mil saka...
jiski khushiya chahte the vo insaan ki hame na mil saka...
hey khuda !! meri ek aur poori kar de tu mannat...
uski zindagi tu kar de zannat...
kabhi use meri kami mahsoos na ho..
hamari wajah se uski aankhe kabhi nam na ho...
khuda muskuraya aur bola...
kitna chahti hai tu use ki..
ab bhi uski khushiya maang rahi hai...
ham hanse aur kaha....
khudgarz hai ham ya allah..
uski khushi me yeh pagli apni zindagi maang rahi hain...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
qadeer_junaid
Maqbool Shayar
Rau: 17
 Offline
Waqt Bitaya:15 days, 15 hours and 40 minutes.
Posts: 608 Member Since: Apr 2010
|
 |
«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2013, 07:41:17 PM » |
|
Aapki is azad nazm me dard-o-gham ba darja atam maujood hai ,, Jazbaat o ahesasat ke khubsurat mela laga diya hai aapne ...Kahin kahin khud az faisla saazi ki chahya bhi halkoriyan le rahi hai Mubarak ho Aapko ye Takhleeq..
Dua go
Qadeertoopchi
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
sidra04
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2013, 07:43:47 PM » |
|
khuda hansa aur bola---- vaah re neha! tune hi toh khushi maangi thi uski... ye bahot acchaa hai.......  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
Rau: 853
Offline
Gender: 
Waqt Bitaya:112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414 Member Since: Apr 2011
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2013, 08:57:34 PM » |
|
bahut khoob soorat keep it up
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
Rau: 86
Offline
Waqt Bitaya:147 days, 14 hours and 9 minutes.
Posts: 18588 Member Since: Jun 2009
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2013, 09:33:53 PM » |
|
WAH SUPERB NICE FULL OF PAIN LOVE FEELINGS EMOTIONS SACRIFICE SIMLPLY EXCELENT ONE RAU FOR U NEHA JI
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
Rau: 115
Offline
Gender:
Waqt Bitaya:101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.
kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
Posts: 16243 Member Since: Feb 2010
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2013, 09:38:12 PM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
soudagar
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2013, 11:39:12 PM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Advo.RavinderaRavi
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2013, 11:54:08 PM » |
|
बहुत खूब, Bahut dino baad aaj khuda se mulakaat hui...
main hun itni dukhi q..??
iss par bahut der tak baat hui....
pucha maine-naseeb me mere nahi vo q...??
aaj door ho kar bhi khush hai q.....??
khuda hansa aur bola----
vaah re neha! tune hi toh khushi maangi thi uski...
apni khushiya jholi me daali thi uski.....
aaj vo tere bina isiliye khush hai....
qki teri duaon me ab bhi voh shaksh hai...
tu hi chahti thi ki vo khush rahe....
jaha rahe vo aabad rahe....
main apni hi dua par sochne lagi...
uski khushiya mere dukh me badalne lagi...
boli main khuda se.....
aap bhi aap ho...
dua bhi maan li ....par mujhe kuchh na mil saka...
jiski khushiya chahte the vo insaan ki hame na mil saka...
hey khuda !! meri ek aur poori kar de tu mannat...
uski zindagi tu kar de zannat...
kabhi use meri kami mahsoos na ho..
hamari wajah se uski aankhe kabhi nam na ho...
khuda muskuraya aur bola...
kitna chahti hai tu use ki..
ab bhi uski khushiya maang rahi hai...
ham hanse aur kaha....
khudgarz hai ham ya allah..
uski khushi me yeh pagli apni zindagi maang rahi hain...
Aapka ye Kalaam Dil Ko Choo Gaya Neha ji. |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nashwani
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2013, 01:00:49 AM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Anaarhi
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2013, 01:58:19 PM » |
|
Bahut dino baad aaj khuda se mulakaat hui...
main hun itni dukhi q..??
iss par bahut der tak baat hui....
pucha maine-naseeb me mere nahi vo q...??
aaj door ho kar bhi khush hai q.....??
khuda hansa aur bola----
vaah re neha! tune hi toh khushi maangi thi uski...
apni khushiya jholi me daali thi uski.....
aaj vo tere bina isiliye khush hai....
qki teri duaon me ab bhi voh shaksh hai...
tu hi chahti thi ki vo khush rahe....
jaha rahe vo aabad rahe....
main apni hi dua par sochne lagi...
uski khushiya mere dukh me badalne lagi...
boli main khuda se.....
aap bhi aap ho...
dua bhi maan li ....par mujhe kuchh na mil saka...
jiski khushiya chahte the vo insaan ki hame na mil saka...
hey khuda !! meri ek aur poori kar de tu mannat...
uski zindagi tu kar de zannat...
kabhi use meri kami mahsoos na ho..
hamari wajah se uski aankhe kabhi nam na ho...
khuda muskuraya aur bola...
kitna chahti hai tu use ki..
ab bhi uski khushiya maang rahi hai...
ham hanse aur kaha....
khudgarz hai ham ya allah..
uski khushi me yeh pagli apni zindagi maang rahi hain...
बहुत खूब वाह वाह |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
alfaaz
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2013, 06:57:36 PM » |
|
bahut acche...bahut hi kboobsoorat...dheron daad kabool farmaiye
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Dineshkumarjonty
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2013, 09:59:17 PM » |
|
Don not say plz
hum aapki har shayri parhte hai
kyoki aap itna achchha jo likhte hai
reply nahi karte jaldi se shayri to thodi bahot kar late hai baat karni nahi aati ghar vaale sab yahi kahte hai.
khuda se hum jiske liye dil se khushi mangte hai khuda use humko hi deta hai kyoki hum hi use sabse jayada kush
rakhege.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
anand mohan
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2013, 01:01:13 AM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
