Khwaab ke bahaar

by @kaash on July 01, 2009, 01:27:07 PM
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Frnds, in this poem,poet has tried to connect words of first line to the next one,ummeed hai koshish pasand karenge                                                Khwaab ke bahaar  khwaab ka bahaar khwaab ka bahaar Khwaab ke aazaar khwaab ke aazaar khwaab ke baazar  khwaab ke baazar roomaniyat bekaraar    roomaniyat ki bahaar alam me mahakta khumaar    alam ka khumaar khwaab ka bosa ek sharaar       sharaara sa khwaab bepanaah qaraar  qaraar!  khwaab ka rukhsaar aatish-e-rukhsaar  band palkon me bhi shumaar  shumaari  ki vafa   lamha lamha gulzaar    gulzaar-e-hasti ehsaas bhara gulnaar ehsaas ki shiddat jazbatiyat na rakhe kanaar                                                       ( aazaar-rog, rukhsaar-gaal, aatish-e-rukhsaar-muskurana sharaar-chingari   gulnaar-anaar ka phool kanaar-kinara)
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2009, 01:38:36 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Kaash ji,beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
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