~~~Khwaish-e-huzoor...~~~

by vitasta on May 23, 2009, 07:25:19 PM
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bejaan hai har nazm jo tujhe na majboor kare sochne ko
likhun daastan kuch yun zulf tu manzoor kare kholne ko

khudko badal dun gar tere aur kareeb aa sakun habeeb
banu ek khilona aisa, khwaish-e-huzoor kare tatolne ko

'Viti' ko parwaah nahi hogi kisi qayamat-o-aafat ki fakat
parda jo hai darmiyan tamanna-e-'Noor' kare kholne ko

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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2009, 02:50:08 AM »
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Wah wah... bahut accha likh  rahi ho Viti dear.
Aapka rachna simple and very touchy. Bahut khoob... Applause

(Aise kitne Khwaishe hai madam ji?  tongue3)
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2009, 03:02:54 AM »
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Wah wah... bahut accha likh  rahi ho Viti dear.
Aapka rachna simple and very touchy. Bahut khoob... Applause

(Aise kitne Khwaishe hai madam ji?  tongue3)


bahut bahut shukriya roja dear Usual Smile

khwaishein...

jaisa ki ghalib sahab ne farmaya tha...
hazaaron khwaishein aisi ki har khwaish pe dum nikle
bahut nikle mere armaan lekin phir bhi kam nikle...
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2009, 03:21:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya roja dear Usual Smile

khwaishein...

jaisa ki ghalib sahab ne farmaya tha...
hazaaron khwaishein aisi ki har khwaish pe dum nikle
bahut nikle mere armaan lekin phir bhi kam nikle...

oyeoye... kya jawab diya... aapka shayri se mujhe pata chal gaya hai ke Ghalib sb ka ek aur avtar zameen pe aagayi hai....... tongue3

Good writer you are... I am really happy reading u viti dear.
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2009, 03:45:50 AM »
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oyeoye... kya jawab diya... aapka shayri se mujhe pata chal gaya hai ke Ghalib sb ka ek aur avtar zameen pe aagayi hai....... tongue3

Good writer you are... I am really happy reading u viti dear.

haha kahan ghalib aur kahan viti, par tareef ka shukriya roja dear Winking
thanks a lot roja...for the encouragement and appreciation Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2009, 06:31:49 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob VITI.. Gud Work!
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vitasta
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 06:44:03 AM »
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thanks sophi!
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2012, 08:29:07 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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