Kis terah???

by Anushka on June 09, 2006, 06:55:07 AM
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1922 times)
redwhitegang
Guest
«Reply #15 on: June 11, 2006, 06:28:46 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "sangy"
Quote from: "redwhitegang"

Bohot khub kahi aapne,tumhe kya jawab dein
Din ko jinka sapne dekhen aur raat ko jagte hain
Wo he ham se pouch rahe hain
Kya aap ham pe marte hain!!!!!!!!!!


Good one RWG... Usual Smile

lagaya jo aag tune iss seene mein, bhujao tho jaane..
lo root gayi mein ab, manalo tho jaane..
kehna hain aasaan "Hum Tumpe Martey hain"
markar nahi duniya se ladkar hamara saath do, tho maane...

Bohot hi shukriya sangy ji! I am honerd! Usual Smile aap jo hosla afjai kar rahe hain uske liye bohot hi shukriya!

Tujh me aag lagaya tha khud ko hi jalane ko
Pakka sona hu tujh ko yeh dikh lane ko
Tujh ko naraz karta hu thodi na tujhe manane ko
karta hu main teri sundarta me aur noor lane ko
Aur kehte nahi sirf k ham tum pe he marte hain
Awaz do taiyar khare hain tere liye ham ladne ko
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Meri terah khuda keray by waheed_rose2004 in Shairi for Manzar -e- Kudrat « 1 2  All »
Humari terah teen haseenao se mulakat hogi by nandbahu in Miscellaneous Shayri
Anushka
Guest
«Reply #16 on: June 11, 2006, 10:57:12 PM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya aap sab ka.... :D

zamaanaa be-dil hai voh to sitam degaa
Tapak padatey hai aansuu jab apka kaa naam aataa hai  
vafaa tum se karenge dukh sahenge naaz uthaayenge
jise aataa hai dil denaa use har kaam aataa hai
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #17 on: June 12, 2006, 06:55:59 AM »
Reply with quote
bulbul keya bat hai... bahoot khoob... javab nahi teyra sohniyeh...

RWg ji... gaurav... Sangy ji... sabhey bahut hi acha likha hai wonderful guys keep  up the good work...
Logged
Anushka
Guest
«Reply #18 on: June 12, 2006, 09:00:38 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "Sonu"
bulbul keya bat hai... bahoot khoob... javab nahi teyra sohniyeh...

RWg ji... gaurav... Sangy ji... sabhey bahut hi acha likha hai wonderful guys keep  up the good work...


Sonuuuuuuuuuu thx.. aap bhi kuch likhay to fir mehfil jamti naaaaaaaaaaa
Logged
redwhitegang
Guest
«Reply #19 on: June 12, 2006, 10:14:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "Anushka"
Shukriya aap sab ka.... :D

zamaanaa be-dil hai voh to sitam degaa
Tapak padatey hai aansuu jab apka kaa naam aataa hai  
vafaa tum se karenge dukh sahenge naaz uthaayenge
jise aataa hai dil denaa use har kaam aataa hai


Bohot khub Anushka!!! kya kehna!! Usual Smile

Aur sonu ji aapka bhi shukrgujar hu hosla dene ke liye! Usual Smile
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2006, 05:33:59 AM »
Reply with quote
ley bulbul likh deyney haan.... jey to kavey tey chan tarey vi tod key leya deyney haan per phir yea na kavi key chamakdey nahi ney  :lol:  :lol:


Khwaab mein tum aaye,
to khwaab haseen ho jaye,
agar khwaab sach ho jaye,
to zindagi haseen ho jaye


Quote from: "Anushka"
Quote from: "Sonu"
bulbul keya bat hai... bahoot khoob... javab nahi teyra sohniyeh...

RWg ji... gaurav... Sangy ji... sabhey bahut hi acha likha hai wonderful guys keep  up the good work...


Sonuuuuuuuuuu thx.. aap bhi kuch likhay to fir mehfil jamti naaaaaaaaaaa
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2006, 05:35:57 AM »
Reply with quote
Rwg ji your most welcome yeo hi likhtey rahow with wonderful smile  Usual Smile ..... keep up the good work


Quote from: "redwhitegang"
Quote from: "Anushka"
Shukriya aap sab ka.... :D

zamaanaa be-dil hai voh to sitam degaa
Tapak padatey hai aansuu jab apka kaa naam aataa hai  
vafaa tum se karenge dukh sahenge naaz uthaayenge
jise aataa hai dil denaa use har kaam aataa hai


Bohot khub Anushka!!! kya kehna!! Usual Smile

Aur sonu ji aapka bhi shukrgujar hu hosla dene ke liye! Usual Smile
Logged
sangy
Guest
«Reply #22 on: June 13, 2006, 11:15:06 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "redwhitegang"

Bohot hi shukriya sangy ji! I am honerd! Usual Smile aap jo hosla afjai kar rahe hain uske liye bohot hi shukriya!

Tujh me aag lagaya tha khud ko hi jalane ko
Pakka sona hu tujh ko yeh dikh lane ko
Tujh ko naraz karta hu thodi na tujhe manane ko
karta hu main teri sundarta me aur noor lane ko
Aur kehte nahi sirf k ham tum pe he marte hain
Awaz do taiyar khare hain tere liye ham ladne ko


waah janaab  :D

jal gayi main, machal gayi main
tere iss deedar mein O-mere sajan..
le mujhe apne kareeb, laga seene se
khone de hosh mujhe, hone de mujhe magan..
Logged
redwhitegang
Guest
«Reply #23 on: June 13, 2006, 11:44:15 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "sangy"

waah janaab  :D

jal gayi main, machal gayi main
tere iss deedar mein O-mere sajan..
le mujhe apne kareeb, laga seene se
khone de hosh mujhe, hone de mujhe magan..


Aadab aarz hain sangy ji!,

Aab meri likhayii aap ki rply ke bina adhuri lagti hain
Aap ka kalam parte he amabassa bhi chandni lagti hain
Logged
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #24 on: June 13, 2006, 03:34:31 PM »
Reply with quote
Kya baat hai Shahid bhai....and Sangy gud one u too

Kiss tarah tumne ek khawaab sajaya....
Phir aayi mere Kareeb aur mujhe apna banaya.....

Sochta hoon kabhi yeh Zindagi mere paas toh na thi.....
Chahata tha taaron ko par Chand ki toh aas na thi.....

Par tumne Chandani banke meri Zindagi roshan ki hai......
Aaj harr Raah saji Gul se toh harr maud Gulistaan ki gali hai.......!!!!!!!
Logged
Anushka
Guest
«Reply #25 on: June 14, 2006, 12:20:55 AM »
Reply with quote
Saabash Gaurav... very romantic!!!!
Logged
redwhitegang
Guest
«Reply #26 on: June 14, 2006, 08:33:39 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Kya baat hai Shahid bhai....and Sangy gud one you too

Kiss tarah tumne ek khawaab sajaya....
Phir aayi mere Kareeb aur mujhe apna banaya.....

Sochta hoon kabhi yeh Zindagi mere paas toh na thi.....
Chahata tha taaron ko par Chand ki toh aas na thi.....

Par tumne Chandani banke meri Zindagi roshan ki hai......
Aaj harr Raah saji Gul se toh harr maud Gulistaan ki gali hai.......!!!!!!!


bohot khub gaurav, too good!!! tumhari kamyab mohabbat dekh kar meri to aankhe numm ho gayii,aur mujhe aapna wo din yaad aa gaya!.....

Ye kaliyan bi khil uthati,
magar baharon ne Aane me der kar di,
aaj vo bi hamare hote,
Magar hamane ijahar karane me deri kar di


 Usual Smile  :wink:
Logged
sangy
Guest
«Reply #27 on: June 14, 2006, 09:04:16 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "redwhitegang"

Aadab aarz hain sangy ji!,

Aab meri likhayii aap ki rply ke bina adhuri lagti hain
Aap ka kalam parte he amabassa bhi chandni lagti hain


aadab janaab....

ab aap ithna acha likhtey ho tho bina reply kiye raha nahi jaatha  :D
Logged
Anushka
Guest
«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2006, 05:22:34 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "gum"
Quote from: "Anushka"
royaa karengay hum bhii pairo mei isii tarah
attkaa kahii  jo aap kaa dil bhii to khul jaayei merii tarah

naa sukuun hai duri me hai naa aaraam vasl mei
kamabakht dil ko chain nahiin hai kisii tarah

gar chup raheei to gardish mei chuut jaau aap bhi mujhay chod jaogay yeh gam hai abhi meri ankho mei is tarah
kahate to hai bhale kii vo lekin samjhay burii ki taraah  

na jaaye vaahan jaha zemany ney mara hai  
kyaa kiijiye humeii to hai mushkil sabhii tarah

lagatii hai har khetaa teri mujhe naadaan
qurabaan tere sadkei jaoo phir mujhe kah le isii tarah  

hai jaan baaki sitamagar ke haath se senam
kyaa sab jahaa mei jiite hai isii tarahh  


LOVELY WORK DEAR

Zindagi ka raaz maine tanhayi mein paa liya,
Jiska bhi gum mila apna samajh ke apna liya,
Sunane ko mila na ko bhi dastane gum humhe,
Isliye Aaina rakh ke saamne khud ko he suna liya



 =D> Well said Gum... shukriya.. :D
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2006, 08:56:58 AM »
Reply with quote
sabney bahut acha likha... good work everyone... keep up the good work...
Logged
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
May 14, 2024, 01:19:21 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]

by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]

[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.149 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8499 Real Poets and poetry admirer