**Kitni Door Hoon Tumse**

by honeyrose on November 13, 2008, 01:03:57 PM
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Kitni door hoon tumse kya tumen ehsaas hai
Kitna pyaar karte hai tumse kya tumen ehsaas hai

Khoye khoye se rehete hai jabse ishq hua hai
Jaage hai na soye aapki yaadon mein jeete hain 

Kya meri jaan lene ke baad fir mujhe pehchanoge
Katm kar denge ye zindagi aapki yaadon mein rote hain

Sach hai haan ishq hua hai tumse kaise bathaye
Kitne door hoon tumse kya tumen mujse pyaar hai..

_________honeyrose_______
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2008, 01:22:45 PM »
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wah honey ji kya baat hai



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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2008, 01:27:32 PM »
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acha likhte hain per wazan aur behr per ghor karen.

mujhe malum nahee tum likhte ho kiya
jo likha hai us mein jazba hai dikha
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2008, 02:10:59 PM »
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wah honey ji kya baat hai

 

Baadal

Shukriya baadal ji...

Shukriya MHussain ji..
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2008, 02:36:34 PM »
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achi nazm hai! keep it up!
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2008, 03:26:33 PM »
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Sach hai haan ishq hua hai tumse kaise bathaye
Kitne door hoon tumse kya tumen mujse pyaar hai..
_________honeyrose_______

honeyrose ji!
Kitni maasoom tarhap hai!! Bhayee waah!

Kartaa hai ishq baar-baar beyqaraar roz!
Hotaa hai jaan-e-man kaa yun hi intizaar roz!
Katatee hai roz-roz zindagee isee tarah;
Ghatatee hai yun hi zindagee ki umra roz-roz!!

                           - abd bundeli

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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2008, 05:03:57 PM »
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honeyrose ji!
Kitni maasoom tathap hai!! Bhayee waah!

Kartaa hai ishq baar-baar beyqaraar roz!
Hotaa hai jaan-e-man kaa yun hi intizaar roz!
Katatee hai roz-roz zindagee isee tarah;
Ghatatee hai yun hi zindagee ki umra roz-roz!!

                           - abd bundeli



 Applause

Shurkriya Abd ji
Bohat khoob Abd ji
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2008, 05:18:46 PM »
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...good one Honey...nice use of words...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2008, 05:25:12 PM »
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...good one Honey...nice use of words...

Thank you just.....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2008, 05:36:31 PM »
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...you are welcome dear...

Humne tha chaha kabhi uska paa na par,
Use paa na kuchh namumkin sa laga hame,
Duniya mein jeena dushvar ho gaya hamara,
Use akele chhod, marna bhi mushkil laga hame...
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2008, 05:40:25 PM »
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...you are welcome dear...

Humne tha chaha kabhi uska paa na par,
Use paa na kuchh namumkin sa laga hame,
Duniya mein jeena dushvar ho gaya hamara,
Use akele chhod, marna bhi mushkil laga hame...



Nice just....

Humen to adat hai dard ko sahena
Kya faida aab rona aur sochna
Iss duniya mein pyaar muskhil se mila
Iss pyaar se mere daman mein daag lag gaya...
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2008, 06:00:57 PM »
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Daaman kabhi be-daag nahi rehta, aye husn-e-jaan,
Jab daag na ho us pe tab hote hai hum pareshaan...
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2008, 01:24:15 AM »
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Waah khoob honeyrose sahiba aap jab likhte hain to dil khol kar likhte hain, jazbaat mein behte huwe ash'ar hain.... bohot khoob. Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2008, 01:30:02 AM »
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honeyrose ji!
Kitni maasoom tathap hai!! Bhayee waah!

Kartaa hai ishq baar-baar beyqaraar roz!
Hotaa hai jaan-e-man kaa yun hi intizaar roz!
Katatee hai roz-roz zindagee isee tarah;
Ghatatee hai yun hi zindagee ki umra roz-roz!!

                           - abd bundeli



Bohot hi umda abd ji behtareen kalam hai, or achha andaz bhi. zabardast!.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 14, 2008, 01:31:59 AM »
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Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
Jo bhi kahtee ho, tah-e-dil sey kahtee ho!
                   - abd bundeli
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