-----/// Koi ghazal likh doon ///----- Hriday

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«Reply #15 on: March 10, 2013, 03:22:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Farhan ji.....!!!

wahhhhhh buht umda nice,,,,
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«Reply #16 on: March 11, 2013, 12:56:55 AM »
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baarish ho rahi hai aaj to mohabbt ki... ab bhi baadal chhaaye hain aasmaan mein... samaa bahut khoobsurat saa ho raha hai.. shayad yahi wajah hai is khoobsurat jawaab kaa... sach me bahut hi pyaaraa likhaa hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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Thodi si koshish hum bhi kar lete hain.....


saanson   ki  rawaani   ke   liye   tumhaaraa  aanaa kaafi hai
dil ke  sukoon ke  liye   tumhaaraa   muskuraanaa  kaafi  hai

qatl   karne   ke   liye   khanjar   ki   kyaa zarurat hai sanam
jaan  lene  ke   liye   bas   tumhaaraa   sharmaanaa kaafi hai

nashaa  sharaab  me  hai  magar  humein  uski kyaa zarurat
madhosh  hone  ke  liye  tumhaaraa  paas  aanaa  kaafi  hai

bheege labon ko tumhaare main chhuu loon apne labon se
bheeg   jaane  ke  liye  bas  unkaa  chhoo  jaanaa  kaafi hai

likhun  koi  ghazal  main  tumhaare   naam   se  kabhi  agar
apne hothon  se  tumhaaraa  use  gungunaanaa  kaafi  hai

kab   kahaa    maine   ki  zarurat  hai  mujhe   mohabbat  ki
bas mere khwaabon me   tumhaaraa   aa  jaanaa   kaafi  hai

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Bahut pyaara jawab hriday ji. ab meri baari hai toh mera jawab tayyar hai

Doori ek pal ki bhi ab na ganwara kar loon
Teri mohabbat mein apne dil ko aawara kar loon

Teri khushboo se meri sansein bhi mehek jaaye
Aaj aise teri rooh mein mai basera kar loon

Aarzoo hai ki tujhe apne seene se lagaakar
Teri baanhon mein hi apna savera kar loon

Tere haseen rukhsaar par apne labon ko sajakar
Koi haseen si galthi mai dobaara kar loon

tu mujhe mein kho ja mai tujh mein kho jaaon
Chod kar sharm o haya bas tera nazaara kar loon
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2013, 08:06:26 AM »
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Wooow tumne pukara aut main chali aayi. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal  Kapil ji. hats off. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause tongue3 Winking hello
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«Reply #18 on: March 11, 2013, 01:59:08 PM »
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Bahut pyaara jawab hriday ji. ab meri baari hai toh mera jawab tayyar hai

Doori ek pal ki bhi ab na ganwara kar loon
Teri mohabbat mein apne dil ko aawara kar loon

Teri khushboo se meri sansein bhi mehek jaaye
Aaj aise teri rooh mein mai basera kar loon

Aarzoo hai ki tujhe apne seene se lagaakar
Teri baanhon mein hi apna savera kar loon

Tere haseen rukhsaar par apne labon ko sajakar
Koi haseen si galthi mai dobaara kar loon

tu mujhe mein kho ja mai tujh mein kho jaaon
Chod kar sharm o haya bas tera nazaara kar loon


waah waah waah waah ji kyaa kehne aaapke jawaab ke... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... abhi tak jhoom rahaa hoon... nashaa hi nashaa hai.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aqsh ji...!!!

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aankhon mein tumhaare siwaa koi sapna kahaan hai
bas ek tumhaare siwaa koi meraa apnaa kahaan hai

yun to bahut log miley mujhe raah-e-zindagi mein
saath nibhaa sake taa-umraa koi aisaa kahaan hai

hazaar chehron mein ek tumhaaraa hi chehraa hai
koi chehraa is jahaan mein tum jaisaa kahaan hai

aankhon me masti, honthon pe nashaa, kyaa kahun
jahaan mein koi nashaa tumse badh ke kahaan hai

jo ek baar lagaa le tumhe hothon se to mar jaaye
dekhke tumhe abtak koi sambhal paayaa kahaan hai

ek khwaish hai ki mar jaaun tumhaari baahon mein
magar, abtak mujhe wo maukaa mil paaya kahaan hai

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«Reply #19 on: March 11, 2013, 09:08:35 PM »
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tumhaare  husn  ko sonaa aur jism  ko sheesh mahal likh doon
tum   chale  aao  to  main  khoobsurat  koi   ghazal  likh  doon

kabse aankhen bichhaaye baithaa hoon tumhaari raahon mein
tum aa jaao to  tumhaare  naam main apnaa har pal  likh doon

 

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wah wah kya kehne Bahut Khub Hriday Ji Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #20 on: March 13, 2013, 12:41:30 AM »
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thank u soooo much Miru ji.......!!!

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«Reply #21 on: March 13, 2013, 08:53:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ji.....!!!

wah wah
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«Reply #22 on: March 14, 2013, 10:28:01 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill ji.....!!!

waah hriday ji bohut khubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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«Reply #23 on: March 14, 2013, 10:56:28 PM »
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अति सुंदर
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«Reply #24 on: March 24, 2013, 04:22:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Qalb ji......!!!


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«Reply #25 on: March 25, 2013, 10:21:45 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji.....!!!

wah wah
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«Reply #26 on: March 28, 2013, 12:00:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab Waah bahut khoob janab... badi hi dilkash aur khoobsurat
kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

behad khoosurat ashaar kahe haiN janab waaH... dil shaad ho gaya dear...
aise hi likhate rahiye.. aur meri dheroN dili mubarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye.. shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2013, 12:49:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anamika ji...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Madhu ji....!!!

Wooow tumne pukara aut main chali aayi. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal  Kapil ji. hats off. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause tongue3 Winking hello
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«Reply #29 on: June 10, 2013, 12:54:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Shihab ji.....!!!

wah wah kya kehne Bahut Khub Hriday Ji Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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