-----/// Koi ghazal likh doon ///----- Hriday

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tumhaare  husn  ko sonaa aur jism  ko sheesh mahal likh doon
tum   chale  aao  to  main  khoobsurat  koi   ghazal  likh  doon

kabse aankhen bichhaaye baithaa hoon tumhaari raahon mein
tum aa jaao to  tumhaare  naam main apnaa har pal  likh doon

pyaasaa hoon main tumhaare  deedaar  ke liye oh mere sanam
tum  chale aao  to  baarish ho,  main  tumhe  baadal likh doon

din  kaa   ujaalaa  tumhaare   chehre  ke  noor  se hi hai, main
raat  ke  andhere  ko  tumhaari aankhon  kaa kaajal likh doon

taarif tumhaari  kyaa karun main phoolon  aur bahaaron se ab
sharmaa jaayen  woh tumhe dekh , sharam ko  jaljal likh doon

pehle  main  insaan hi thaa, aashiq to tumne  banaayaa mujhe
aa jaao , tumhe baahon mein leke pyaar kaa koi  pal likh doon

chaand  bhi tumhe  dekh sochtaa hogaa ki tum  kyaa cheez ho
mohabbat ki  misaal ho tum, tum ko main taajmahal  likh doon

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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2013, 04:36:22 AM »
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tumhaare  husn  ko sonaa aur jism  ko sheesh mahal likh doon
tum  chale  aao to  main  khoobsurat saa koi  ghazal likh doon

kabse aankhen bichhaaye baithaa hoon tumhaari raahon mein
tum aa jaao to  tumhaare  naam main apnaa har pal  likh doon

pyaasaa hoon main tumhaare  deedaar  ke liye oh mere sanam
tum  chale aao  to  baarish ho,  main  tumhe  baadal likh doon

din  kaa   ujaalaa  tumhaare   chehre  ke  noor  se hi hai, main
raat  ke  andhere  ko  tumhaari aankhon  kaa kaajal likh doon

taarif tumhaari  kyaa karun main phoolon  aur bahaaron se ab
sharmaa jaayen  woh tumhe dekh , sharam ko  jaljal likh doon

pehle  main  insaan hi thaa, aashiq to tumne  banaayaa mujhe
aa jaao , tumhe baahon mein leke pyaar kaa koi  pal likh doon

chaand  bhi tumhe  dekh sochtaa hogaa ki tum  kyaa cheez ho
mohabbat ki  misaal ho tum, tum ko main taajmahal  likh doon

*****HRIDAY*****





Waah Waah Waaaaaah.....

Bahut bahut Khooooooob Hriday jee

Shandaar Peshkash..

bahuttttttttttttt Ache..

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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2013, 05:19:45 AM »
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wahhhhhh buht umda nice,,,,
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2013, 08:13:22 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2013, 09:43:37 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2013, 11:17:48 AM »
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Woooooooow! Really so romantic. bahut bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki yeh ghazal. Kuch likhe bina rah hi nahi paayi. Chalo aaj hriday type wala hi jawab de deti hoon.

Jee karta hai aaj, mai apne jazbaat likh doon
Tere honton par apne dil ki, har baat likh doon

Door ek pal ke liye bhi, tu mujhse ho na paaye
Mere dil ki dhadkano ki, tujhe halaath likh doon

Tere palkhon par saje khwaab, kah rahe hai mujhse
Lagakar gale mohabbat ki, haseen lamhaat likh doon

Tujhe cheen hi loon aaj, is duniya se mere sanam
Meri zindagi ko teri dee hui, khairaat likh doon

Luta kar sabkuch apna, teri chahat mein jaana
Meri har ek saans ko, teri hi saugaat likh doon.



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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2013, 11:27:22 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2013, 02:18:54 PM »
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tumhaare  husn  ko sonaa aur jism  ko sheesh mahal likh doon
tum  chale  aao to  main  khoobsurat  si koi  ghazal likh doon

kabse aankhen bichhaaye baithaa hoon tumhaari raahon mein
tum aa jaao to  tumhaare  naam main apnaa har pal  likh doon

pyaasaa hoon main tumhaare  deedaar  ke liye oh mere sanam
tum  chale aao  to  baarish ho,  main  tumhe  baadal likh doon

din  kaa   ujaalaa  tumhaare   chehre  ke  noor  se hi hai, main
raat  ke  andhere  ko  tumhaari aankhon  kaa kaajal likh doon

taarif tumhaari  kyaa karun main phoolon  aur bahaaron se ab
sharmaa jaayen  woh tumhe dekh , sharam ko  jaljal likh doon

pehle  main  insaan hi thaa, aashiq to tumne  banaayaa mujhe
aa jaao , tumhe baahon mein leke pyaar kaa koi  pal likh doon

chaand  bhi tumhe  dekh sochtaa hogaa ki tum  kyaa cheez ho
mohabbat ki  misaal ho tum, tum ko main taajmahal  likh doon

*****HRIDAY*****





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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2013, 07:47:20 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2013, 12:47:28 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab Waah bahut khoob janab... badi hi dilkash aur khoobsurat
kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

behad khoosurat ashaar kahe haiN janab waaH... dil shaad ho gaya dear...
aise hi likhate rahiye.. aur meri dheroN dili mubarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye.. shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2013, 04:22:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Khwaish ji.....!!!


Waah Waah Waaaaaah.....

Bahut bahut Khooooooob Hriday jee

Shandaar Peshkash..

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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2013, 04:33:35 PM »
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Woooooooow! Really so romantic. bahut bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki yeh ghazal. Kuch likhe bina rah hi nahi paayi. Chalo aaj hriday type wala hi jawab de deti hoon.

Jee karta hai aaj, mai apne jazbaat likh doon
Tere honton par apne dil ki, har baat likh doon

Door ek pal ke liye bhi, tu mujhse ho na paaye
Mere dil ki dhadkano ki, tujhe halaath likh doon

Tere palkhon par saje khwaab, kah rahe hai mujhse
Lagakar gale mohabbat ki, haseen lamhaat likh doon

Tujhe cheen hi loon aaj, is duniya se mere sanam
Meri zindagi ko teri dee hui, khairaat likh doon

Luta kar sabkuch apna, teri chahat mein jaana
Meri har ek saans ko, teri hi saugaat likh doon.






than q soooooooooooo much aqsh ji .... aur aap ke jawaab ke kyaa kehne .. maar hi daalaa hai aapne... sach mein bahut pasand aayi humein aapki ye rachnaa... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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lijiye hamaaraa jawaab bhi tayyar hai...!!!


chhoo lo aake mere hothon ko ki main kuch keh naa paaun aaj
tadap uthun kuch is tarhaa ki qaaboo mein reh naa paaun aaj

seene se lagaa ke mere dil ki dhadkano ko tez kar do sanam
ki jhoomne lagun nashe mein, main sambhal hi naa paaun aaj

mere aankhon ke har khwaab mein tum hi tum baste ho sanam
deedaar ho jaaye haqeeqat mein, fir main so naa paaun aaj

le chalo duur mujhe is jahaan se jahaan koi bandish naa ho
bas tum raho, main rahun, jahaan se laut ke aa naa paaun aaj

kho jaao tum meri chaahat mein aur main kho jaaun tum mein
guum ho dono is tarhaa ki khud ko hi dhund naa paaun aaj

aao naa, aake chhoo lo mujhe apne haathon se, hothon se tum
ki mar jaaun mohabbat mein tumhaare, main jee naa paaun aaj

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«Reply #13 on: March 10, 2013, 01:50:08 PM »
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than q soooooooooooo much aqsh ji .... aur aap ke jawaab ke kyaa kehne .. maar hi daalaa hai aapne... sach mein bahut pasand aayi humein aapki ye rachnaa... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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lijiye hamaaraa jawaab bhi tayyar hai...!!!


chhoo lo aake mere hothon ko ki main kuch keh naa paaun aaj
tadap uthun kuch is tarhaa ki qaaboo mein reh naa paaun aaj

seene se lagaa ke mere dil ki dhadkano ko tez kar do sanam
ki jhoomne lagun nashe mein, main sambhal hi naa paaun aaj

mere aankhon ke har khwaab mein tum hi tum baste ho sanam
deedaar ho jaaye haqeeqat mein, fir main so naa paaun aaj

le chalo duur mujhe is jahaan se jahaan koi bandish naa ho
bas tum raho, main rahun, jahaan se laut ke aa naa paaun aaj

kho jaao tum meri chaahat mein aur main kho jaaun tum mein
guum ho dono is tarhaa ki khud ko hi dhund naa paaun aaj

aao naa, aake chhoo lo mujhe apne haathon se, hothon se tum
ki mar jaaun mohabbat mein tumhaare, main jee naa paaun aaj

*****HRIDAy*****

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That was a beautiful reply.

Tere labon par apne lab rakhkar tujhe aaraam de doon
Behak jaaye jise peekar tum jaana who jaam de doon

Tujhse kya rishta hai mera mai kaise bataun ab
Meri muhabbat ka har ek pal tere naam kar doon

Lab khamosh rahe aur yeh nigaahen bolti rahe
Pyaar beshumaar lutakar haseen teri shaam kar doon

Seene par mere sir rakhkar suno meri dhadkanon ko
Kehti hai dhadkan apna sabkuch tujh pe nilaam kar doon

Aise gale lagaaon ke hawa bhi na guzar paaye darmiyaan
Teri aarzoo par apne dil ko bhi mai aaj gulaam kar doon
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«Reply #14 on: March 10, 2013, 02:29:05 PM »
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baarish ho rahi hai aaj to mohabbt ki... ab bhi baadal chhaaye hain aasmaan mein... samaa bahut khoobsurat saa ho raha hai.. shayad yahi wajah hai is khoobsurat jawaab kaa... sach me bahut hi pyaaraa likhaa hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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Thodi si koshish hum bhi kar lete hain.....


saanson   ki  rawaani   ke   liye   tumhaaraa  aanaa kaafi hai
dil ke  sukoon ke  liye   tumhaaraa   muskuraanaa  kaafi  hai

qatl   karne   ke   liye   khanjar   ki   kyaa zarurat hai sanam
jaan  lene  ke   liye   bas   tumhaaraa   sharmaanaa kaafi hai

nashaa  sharaab  me  hai  magar  humein  uski kyaa zarurat
madhosh  hone  ke  liye  tumhaaraa  paas  aanaa  kaafi  hai

bheege labon ko tumhaare main chhuu loon apne labon se
bheeg   jaane  ke  liye  bas  unkaa  chhoo  jaanaa  kaafi hai

likhun  koi  ghazal  main  tumhaare   naam   se  kabhi  agar
apne hothon  se  tumhaaraa  use  gungunaanaa  kaafi  hai

kab   kahaa    maine   ki  zarurat  hai  mujhe   mohabbat  ki
bas mere khwaabon me   tumhaaraa   aa  jaanaa   kaafi  hai

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