koi (gul)

by gulzargul on September 12, 2008, 06:43:57 PM
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mun main phool khilaa tha koi
bheer main jab milaa tha koi

hogaya saaket yekdam zamaana
aankhon main sehar chupaa tha koi

chaai kali ghata berasny laga gulab
hawaa sy aanchal uraa tha koi


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Kanta
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2008, 01:15:18 AM »
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great likha he gulzar mahashay, ye saaket kiya he

chalo ke sath he tera
kahi wo saya he mera

koe to manjil mile ab
koe to humdum bane mera
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2008, 04:03:20 AM »
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wow very nice kanta and gulzar ji  Applause

Chaley gaye they dur ek pal key liye, magar unke dil key
kareeb they har pal key liye, kaise bhulengey unko ek pal key
liye, jab kho chukey hai khud ko har pal key liye
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2008, 10:23:10 AM »
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saket mean jam jesy sakta hojaana jesy bot ban jaana pathar hojana aik hi jaga ruk jaana stop ho jaana kanta ji

gul
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2008, 10:26:53 AM »
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kisi pathar sy piyaar kesy karo gy
toot  jaay ga kaanch ka dil aakhir      kanta ji


gul
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2008, 10:27:48 AM »
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thanks a lot khushi ji

gul
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Kanta
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2008, 08:13:07 PM »
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pathar se hi to prem he
nirasha bhi unki den he

jo anand na mile man ku
koi us pathar se muje marde
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2008, 08:15:52 PM »
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aap tao buht acha likhny lagi ho sach main kanta ji

gul
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2008, 08:19:06 PM »
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youn udaasi hy chehry per uske
shaam ki surkhi chaai ho jesy

gul
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2008, 08:25:11 PM »
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thanks gulzar mahashay mein bas aj hi esa likh rahi muje khud malum nahi

prabhat ki kirno ne aj jala diya
mera jism rakh bana ke ura diya

kesi ye roshni thi aj pari mujpe
mere jeevan ku mera dushman bana diya
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2008, 08:28:31 PM »
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very very beautifull kanta ji aap ny jo likha buht nirala andaz hy

gul
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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2008, 08:29:40 PM »
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kanta ji aap plz. itna udas mat hon baqi kal ke liye chor do

kuch mood change karo plz.

gul
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2008, 08:41:02 PM »
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kese keru mein kabi kabi udas hoti or wo bhi karan mein hi hoti uska, abi man esa hi he likh ke pyas bujti hi nahi
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2008, 08:43:35 PM »
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koi waja tao hogi
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2008, 08:54:51 PM »
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bata diya mein ne apku sab
dost ek apna dukhi ker gaya

na mani mein ne bat na usne
wo fer ke munh gusa ker gaya
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