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*** Rooz raat sapno main aata hai koi Dil ko dil sae chura le jaata hai koi
Nigaheen milti hain to ho jaati hai qayamat Apni nigahoon sae ghayal kar jaata hai koi
Uske siwa ab kuch aur yaad nahi rehta Is qadar dil par chaa jaata hai koi
Gam sae bhari is duniya main Daman mera khushiyon sae bhar jaata hai koi
Main bhi hoon kisi ke liyae kuch khaas Ye ehsaas mujhae dila jaata hai koi......
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2007, 12:10:33 PM » |
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bahut khoob Alone Bad ji.. bahut hi mast shayeri hai..mazaa aa gya padh ke..Waah!! Anjane kuch khwab meri palkon par saja jaata hai koi.. Na saamne aa kar bhi apni jhalak dikha jaata hai koi.. Kya kare ye dil naadan bhi.. Duur rehkar bhi mujhe apna banaa jaata hai koi..
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2007, 12:13:59 PM » |
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bahut khoob Alone Bad ji.. bahut hi mast shayeri hai..mazaa aa gya padh ke..Waah!! Anjane kuch khwab meri palkon par saja jaata hai koi.. Na saamne aa kar bhi apni jhalak dikha jaata hai koi.. Kya kare ye dil naadan bhi.. Duur rehkar bhi mujhe apna banaa jaata hai koi..thanks Pinky ji....... aapne bhi super likha hai....... once again thanx a lot.....
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2007, 12:18:23 PM » |
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u r welcome ji.. 
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2007, 07:40:25 PM » |
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Shukriya Majid ji.... aap logon ko pasand aai.... matlab mehenat safal hui...... shukriya again.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2007, 10:51:33 PM » |
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very nice alone bad
door rah kar bhi mere dil me kyun rahta hai koi aata na mujhko nazar nazron me rahta hai koi
dil ko toote to is arsa hua bhool chuke yaad rah rah ke vahi zakhm dilata hai koi
jaane kab aaenge aisa na ho aankhe band ho aur vo samjhege dekhta tha na rasta koi
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2007, 12:46:22 PM » |
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very nice alone bad
door rah kar bhi mere dil me kyun rahta hai koi aata na mujhko nazar nazron me rahta hai koi
dil ko toote to is arsa hua bhool chuke yaad rah rah ke vahi zakhm dilata hai koi
jaane kab aaenge aisa na ho aankhe band ho aur vo samjhege dekhta tha na rasta koi shukriya tabassum ji...... aapne bhi bahoot aacha likha hai.....
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2007, 01:31:20 PM » |
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bhaut accha likha hai subhi ne pudh ke maza aagaya
pinki alone bad tabassum.
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2007, 12:59:35 PM » |
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thanx ankur ji.... shukriya.....
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«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2007, 01:04:03 PM » |
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Kyon baat karta hai aisa har koi Har dil main chupa hai jaise dard koi
Jab bhi hua hai zikr-e-bewafai lagta hai jaise har aankh hai roi
Har taraf gam hain ansoon hain Dard ki basti sae guzra hai har koi...
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2007, 01:20:21 PM » |
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*** Rooz raat sapno main aata hai koi Dil ko dil sae chura le jaata hai koi
Nigaheen milti hain to ho jaati hai qayamat Apni nigahoon sae ghayal kar jaata hai koi
Uske siwa ab kuch aur yaad nahi rehta Is qadar dil par chaa jaata hai koi
Gam sae bhari is duniya main Daman mera khushiyon sae bhar jaata hai koi
Main bhi hoon kisi ke liyae kuch khaas Ye ehsaas mujhae dila jaata hai koi......
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2 Good Alone ji Daad haazir hai kabul farmaaye :lol:
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2007, 01:40:20 AM » |
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Bahut khoob kaha hai Alone Bad ji..
Gham ke Gulistaan Se guzar nahi sakta har koi.. Ye to naseeb wale hi kiya karte hain.. Chal kar kaanto bhari raah par bhi, Apni mohabbat ka deedar kiya karte hain..
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2007, 12:19:05 PM » |
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Bahut khoob kaha hai Alone Bad ji..
Gham ke Gulistaan Se guzar nahi sakta har koi.. Ye to naseeb wale hi kiya karte hain.. Chal kar kaanto bhari raah par bhi, Apni mohabbat ka deedar kiya karte hain.. bahoot khubb Pinky ji.......shukriya aapka...
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2007, 12:22:37 PM » |
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shukriya Hum Dum ji..... aapki daad humne kubul kar li..... once again shukriya......
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«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2007, 02:26:17 AM » |
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Thanx Alone ji and Majid ji..!!
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