Kuch Hua aur Kuch Hua B Nahi

by Bhupinder Kaur on July 05, 2013, 11:24:45 PM
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ISS POST KE SABHI PATRA KALPANIK HAIN JINKA VAASTAV JINDEGI SE
KOI TALUK NEHI HAIN AUR AGAR HAIN TO ISE SIRF EK SAMANATA KAHA JAYEGA
!!  toothy10

Zindagi mei kabhi kabhi, kuch aise b manzar aate hai, ki waqt guzarta rukta nahi aur na woh shaksh jise hum behadd chahate hai aur chaa ke bhi woh hume milta nahi. Par woh lamhe humare zehan mei bas jaate hai aur phir kisi yaado ki kitab mei mehakte hai, jaise ki meri......

Umeed kartI hoon kuch jyada toh nahi, par shayad padne layak ho...


Najane kitni aur kai baar hua
Par har baar adhura hi hua

Nazrein meri b utti, Nigahein uski b mili
Uske liye Nazara hua, mere liye Ishara hua

Lafz uske b Khamosh the, Chup mere b Alfaz the
Uske liye Gudgudana hua, mere liye Guftagu huee

Achaal uska b Udaa, Saaya mera b Jhilmila
Uske liye main Musafir hua, mere liye woh Humsafar hua

Kadam uske b Chale, Pag mere b Aage Bade
Uske liye Anth hua, mere liye Shuruvat huee

Mudke usne na dekha kabhi, main b wapas muda nahi
Uske liye sab Dhuan hua, mere liye woh Khuda hua

Yeh “Khwahish" aisa koi nasha jaam mei nahi
Jise pee ke lage, ki yeh jaam akhir hai
Phir Kaise keh do, ke pyar jaisa Kuch Hua aur Kuch Hua B Nahi

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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2013, 12:01:03 AM »
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बहुत खूब,
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2013, 12:38:30 AM »
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Boht khub likha hai apne wah wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2013, 12:43:38 AM »
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bahut khoob....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 01:39:35 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 01:46:00 AM »
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Woow  ek  alag  andaaz aur khoobsurat  ehsaas Bhupinder  ji. outstanding. I  love  this  poem  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2013, 02:04:34 AM »
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mazedaar peshkash bhupinder jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2013, 05:10:30 AM »
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bade achche ehsaas se saji hui is khoobsurat peshkash par dheron daad kaurji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2013, 05:53:23 AM »
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bahut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2013, 02:51:30 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Khoobsurat peshkash.
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2013, 05:50:30 PM »
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bahott sunder Bhupinderjee
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2013, 01:11:41 AM »
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Bhupinder Jee Aadaab.. !

Bahut typical poem thi aapki... kafi alag andaaz raha aur khoob dilnasheen ahsaas ko aapne bayaaN kiya hai...

In one word it's really a "outstanding" post terrific thoughts and mind blowing wordings ... here i seen without rhyming words you written a precious post ...

Dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2013, 08:41:27 AM »
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WARNING:
ISS POST KE SABHI PATRA KALPANIK HAIN JINKA VAASTAV JINDEGI SE
KOI TALUK NEHI HAIN AUR AGAR HAIN TO ISE SIRF EK SAMANATA KAHA JAYEGA
!!  toothy10

Zindagi mei kabhi kabhi, kuch aise b manzar aate hai, ki waqt guzarta rukta nahi aur na woh shaksh jise hum behadd chahate hai aur chaa ke bhi woh hume milta nahi. Par woh lamhe humare zehan mei bas jaate hai aur phir kisi yaado ki kitab mei mehakte hai, jaise ki meri......

Umeed kartI hoon kuch jyada toh nahi, par shayad padne layak ho...


Najane kitni aur kai baar hua
Par har baar adhura hi hua

Nazrein meri b utti, Nigahein uski b mili
Uske liye Nazara hua, mere liye Ishara hua

Lafz uske b Khamosh the, Chup mere b Alfaz the
Uske liye Gudgudana hua, mere liye Guftagu huee

Achaal uska b Udaa, Saaya mera b Jhilmila
Uske liye main Musafir hua, mere liye woh Humsafar hua

Kadam uske b Chale, Pag mere b Aage Bade
Uske liye Anth hua, mere liye Shuruvat huee

Mudke usne na dekha kabhi, main b wapas muda nahi
Uske liye sab Dhuan hua, mere liye woh Khuda hua

Yeh “Khwahish" aisa koi nasha jaam mei nahi
Jise pee ke lage, ki yeh jaam akhir hai
Phir Kaise keh do, ke pyar jaisa Kuch Hua aur Kuch Hua B Nahi

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Justttttttttttttttttt Beautiful.....

Bhupinder Ji....Aap Apne Jazbaat Ko Bahut Acche Tarah se Lafzon Mein Pesh Karte Ho...I Justtttttttttttttttt Love Reading You....

"Uske liye main Musafir hua, mere liye woh Humsafar Hua"

Waaaah Waaaah Waaaaah....Ek line Mein Aapne Do Logon Ki Aalag Soch, Alag nazariye Ko Kya Khoobi Se Pesh kiya Lajawaaaab...


Yuhi Humesha Likhte Rahiye...Bahut Bhaut Khoob


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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2013, 08:47:25 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Bhupinder ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2013, 04:53:22 AM »
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Bahut dilchsp, warning aur bhee dilchsp.
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