Kuch keh na sake........

by ANKUR_CRAZY on December 23, 2006, 10:30:12 AM

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ANKUR_CRAZY

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hello frnds this my time work
life me pehli baar maine kuch likha hai so plz give ur reviews and ur suggestions
and plz improve it if u can.......

"Hum aapse kuch keh na sake,
Kuch kahe bina bhi hum reh na sake,
Samne baithe the aap phir bhi
luves(words) humare hotho se nikul na sake,
Aub sumajh mein nahi ata kya kare
Jub waqt tha tub to kuch kar na sake,
Ab to murna hi hai humari takdeer mein
Aapke bina jine ke baare mein hum soch na sake."


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Talat

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2006, 09:10:08 PM »

Very good effort Ankur....keep it up....!!!


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ANKUR_CRAZY

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2006, 07:32:08 AM »

a bag full of thanx to u talat ji........
view to bahto ne kiya lekin reply sirf aapne kiyaaaa....


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_Vicky_

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2006, 09:40:21 AM »

bahut khooooooob ANKUR BHAI..
yuhi likhte raheye......... !!!!!!!!!


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ANKUR_CRAZY

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2006, 05:24:48 PM »

ji bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa
koshish karange.....


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badnaam_shayar

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Re: Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2006, 05:24:55 PM »

Quote from: "ankur tripathi"

hello frnds this my time work
life me pehli baar maine kuch likha hai so plz give ur reviews and ur suggestions
and plz improve it if you can.......

"Hum aapse kuch keh na sake,
Kuch kahe bina bhi hum reh na sake,
Samne baithe the aap phir bhi
luves(words) humare hotho se nikul na sake,
Aub sumajh mein nahi ata kya kare
Jub waqt tha tub to kuch kar na sake,
Ab to murna hi hai humari takdeer mein
Aapke bina jine ke baare mein hum soch na sake."

Nice Starting Ankur....Wonderfull.....!!!!!!!


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Talat

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2006, 07:08:51 PM »

You are welcome, Ankur Usual Smile

Hum unse kahen bhi to kya kahen
Wo aankhon se sab parh lete hain

Dil ki baat hum unko kya batayen
Wo to dhadkanon main hi rehte hain !!


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ANKUR_CRAZY

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2006, 05:18:41 PM »

very nice talat ....


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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2006, 05:41:09 PM »

Nice start Ankur,keep writing,and very nice TalaT.


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ANKUR_CRAZY

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2006, 05:49:15 PM »

thanx nidhi
and sabke saath aisa nahi hai talat ji...

Kaash vadon ka matlab wo samajhte,
Kaash khamoshi ka matlab wo samajhte,
Nazar milti hai hazaron nazron se,
Kaash meri nazron ka matlab wo samajhte

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ANKUR_CRAZY

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Kuch keh na sake........

«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2007, 07:55:28 AM »

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confuse
yaar "kuch keh na sake" ki post me kya kahe

hehe just kidding
time paas kur raha hun yaar