KUCHH KEHENA HAI

by Jiya on June 08, 2007, 02:43:48 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 24, 2007, 04:14:32 PM »
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Netra & Jiya... both of u rocking ...... Keep flowing..
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«Reply #31 on: June 24, 2007, 04:16:39 PM »
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ji kya baat hai,,, very nice Amit ji.

ye aapka kasoor nahin hai janaab,
kasoorwar, humaari aankho ka wo kaala til hai,
aap to ulajh ke reh gaye in palho mein humaari,
par sach to ye hain ----
jo kaid hain humaari palko mein wo aapka hi dil hai.

.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-. jiya .-.-.--.[/i][/b]


Ha ha ha........bahut acche.....

Tumhari ye adayein hain toh kya kar payenge hum,
Har ek bar tumhare hi or kichnche aayenge hum,
Khata tumhari hai nahi na hi koi kusoor hai mera,
Dil ki lagi hai ye, kaise iss se bach ke reh payenge hum....tongue3
very very nice Amit ji,, how fast u r ? woww,,, bohot hi achhe.

mohabbat par yakeen na ho aapko humaari,
to kis kaam ki ye humaari wafaaye,
aur jo kheench na sake aapko humaari or,
kis kaam ki wo humaari adaayen.

aji khata to ho chuki humse aapka dil churaane ki,
ye dastaan aur kise bataai jaye,
hum to sar jhukaaye baithe hain intzaar mein aapke,
ab iski jo bhi saza sunaai jaye.

ishq wo mehendi ka laal rang hai,
lage ek baar to zindagi bhar ke liye rach jaye,
ishq wo chaman hai bahaar ka,
kaise koi reh kar isme iski khushbu se bach paye.

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«Reply #32 on: June 24, 2007, 04:18:33 PM »
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ji kya baat hai,,, very nice Amit ji.

ye aapka kasoor nahin hai janaab,
kasoorwar, humaari aankho ka wo kaala til hai,
aap to ulajh ke reh gaye in palho mein humaari,
par sach to ye hain ----
jo kaid hain humaari palko mein wo aapka hi dil hai.

.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-. jiya .-.-.--.[/i][/b]


Ha ha ha........bahut acche.....

Tumhari ye adayein hain toh kya kar payenge hum,
Har ek bar tumhare hi or kichnche aayenge hum,
Khata tumhari hai nahi na hi koi kusoor hai mera,
Dil ki lagi hai ye, kaise iss se bach ke reh payenge hum....tongue3
very very nice Amit ji,, how fast u r ? woww,,, bohot hi achhe.

mohabbat par yakeen na ho aapko humaari,
to kis kaam ki ye humaari wafaaye,
aur jo kheench na sake aapko humaari or,
kis kaam ki wo humaari adaayen.

aji khata to ho chuki humse aapka dil churaane ki,
ye dastaan aur kise bataai jaye,
hum to sar jhukaaye baithe hain intzaar mein aapke,
ab iski jo bhi saza sunaai jaye.

ishq wo mehendi ka laal rang hai,
lage ek baar to zindagi bhar ke liye rach jaye,
ishq wo chaman hai bahaar ka,
kaise koi reh kar isme iski khushbu se bach paye.
 
.-.--.-.-..-.-.-.-.-.--..-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.jiya .-.-.-.

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«Reply #33 on: June 24, 2007, 04:29:08 PM »
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Izhare-mohabbat kya karoge ishk me tum
zheel see ankhome aashik ke jhank kar dekha tha
smanadare-ishk  se abhee tak bhee  nikalne n paye the ham

Izhare-mohabbat n kee thee hamne, n kar paye the kabhi  tum
najare hee mile thee, gaharayee-ishk me doobte chale gaye ham

mohabbat ka izhaar n hota hai kabhi juban se aye 'musafir'
ham to jan gaye the anskho se teri dastane  ashiki ko,
 jo n kar paye  the baya juba se apni kabhi bhee tum


bohot khoob natra ji  kya baat hai apki..............


yun sab jaan ke humaara hale dil,
aise anjaan bane rahe aap,
ki bahaate hain hum ashka kiske liye,
humse kyun poochhte rahe aap.

ilm tha is baat ka aapko,
kyun kahaa nahin kabhi ye aapne,
jaante hue ki humko mohabbat hai aapse,
izhaare mohabbat kyun nahin kiya aapne.

................................................. ....................jiya


nice reply,

kyo khafa hote ho tum, jo n kholi thee hamne jubaan
samj the darde dil ankho se ham, kyo n samaj paye tum najaro kee juba

ham to darte the jamane se, ruswayee hone se teree
kal koi dekh n le kisi ki jalim najar tujhe bahon me meri

ye duniya hai jo samaj payee thee kabhi pyar ko kisike
kahi deni n pade ishak me kurbani tujhe hone se pahale meri

netra....
bohot achhe netra ji....

nazre humaari to samjh gayi thi nazaro ki zubaa,
par hum dil ko apne kaise samjhaate,
maana ki mohabbat ka izhaar nazaro se hota hai,
par kabhi to tum wo dhai akshar keh jaate.

jo mohabbat karte hain,
wo ruswaai se nahin dara karte,
jise ruswaai ka dar hai,
wo mohabbat nahin kiya karte.

khush kismat hai unki mohabbat,
ji ishq mein fana ho jaati hai,
ye duniya samjhe ya na samjhe,
par, wo mohabbat to amar ho jaati hai.

................................................. ........jiya.....


jiya fantastic.. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

***********

Kisee ke pass aane se kisee ke dhur hone se
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti kisee ko aazmane se

Jinhe hum yaad rakhte hai woh humko bhool jate hai
Nahi hota asar in per ashq bahane se

Dil main soorat teri aisi sajayee hai
Kabhi mit nahi sakti kisee ke mitane se

Bicharna tha muqaddar main kisee se kya gila magar
Nahi shiqwa muqaddar se na shiqwa hai zamane se

Andheri raat hai Barish hai aur mai Tanha hu
Nahi maloom hoga kya faqat Dil Jalane se..

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«Reply #34 on: June 25, 2007, 10:48:58 AM »
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ji bohot achhe netra ji,,,,,, kaafi achha likha hai aapne,,, gud lines

haan khuda ne ye zindagi di to hai hume,
par tum kahaan hume jeene dete ho,
kuchh kar bhi nahin paate hum,
har waqt khayaalo mein rehete ho,

hum to kabhi samajh bhi na sake,
jo bhi aap javjo mein kehete ho,
hum to padte hain nigaahen aapki,
apni nigaahon mein aap jo kitaab likh dete ho.

.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.--.-.-.jiya .-.-.--.-.


khushkismati dekho , ham  khyalo   me hai   kisee ke
badh gayee dhadkane dil kee, tasveer ban gaye dil me kisee ke

na katha usne kabhi ham se, u usne jban kholee thee
hamane to padhee that tab, jab usne apnee ankhk ki palak  kholee thee..

netra....
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«Reply #35 on: June 25, 2007, 11:01:42 AM »
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Izhare-mohabbat kya karoge ishk me tum
zheel see ankhome aashik ke jhank kar dekha tha
smanadare-ishk  se abhee tak bhee  nikalne n paye the ham

Izhare-mohabbat n kee thee hamne, n kar paye the kabhi  tum
najare hee mile thee, gaharayee-ishk me doobte chale gaye ham

mohabbat ka izhaar n hota hai kabhi juban se aye 'musafir'
ham to jan gaye the anskho se teri dastane  ashiki ko,
 jo n kar paye  the baya juba se apni kabhi bhee tum


bohot khoob natra ji  kya baat hai apki..............


yun sab jaan ke humaara hale dil,
aise anjaan bane rahe aap,
ki bahaate hain hum ashka kiske liye,
humse kyun poochhte rahe aap.

ilm tha is baat ka aapko,
kyun kahaa nahin kabhi ye aapne,
jaante hue ki humko mohabbat hai aapse,
izhaare mohabbat kyun nahin kiya aapne.

................................................. ....................jiya


nice reply,

kyo khafa hote ho tum, jo n kholi thee hamne jubaan
samj the darde dil ankho se ham, kyo n samaj paye tum najaro kee juba

ham to darte the jamane se, ruswayee hone se teree
kal koi dekh n le kisi ki jalim najar tujhe bahon me meri

ye duniya hai jo samaj payee thee kabhi pyar ko kisike
kahi deni n pade ishak me kurbani tujhe hone se pahale meri

netra....
bohot achhe netra ji....

nazre humaari to samjh gayi thi nazaro ki zubaa,
par hum dil ko apne kaise samjhaate,
maana ki mohabbat ka izhaar nazaro se hota hai,
par kabhi to tum wo dhai akshar keh jaate.

jo mohabbat karte hain,
wo ruswaai se nahin dara karte,
jise ruswaai ka dar hai,
wo mohabbat nahin kiya karte.

khush kismat hai unki mohabbat,
ji ishq mein fana ho jaati hai,
ye duniya samjhe ya na samjhe,
par, wo mohabbat to amar ho jaati hai.

................................................. ........jiya.....


jiya fantastic.. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

***********

Kisee ke pass aane se kisee ke dhur hone se
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti kisee ko aazmane se

Jinhe hum yaad rakhte hai woh humko bhool jate hai
Nahi hota asar in per ashq bahane se

Dil main soorat teri aisi sajayee hai
Kabhi mit nahi sakti kisee ke mitane se

Bicharna tha muqaddar main kisee se kya gila magar
Nahi shiqwa muqaddar se na shiqwa hai zamane se

Andheri raat hai Barish hai aur mai Tanha hu
Nahi maloom hoga kya faqat Dil Jalane se..

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bhoot khoob pahali bar padha aapko achaa laga.......

ansoo hee karte hai baya darde dil kee
us patthar-dil ki kya khta jo tadaf kar bhee muskrat hai...

netra...
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«Reply #36 on: June 26, 2007, 03:32:23 PM »
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ji bohot achhe netra ji,,,,,, kaafi achha likha hai aapne,,, gud lines

haan khuda ne ye zindagi di to hai hume,
par tum kahaan hume jeene dete ho,
kuchh kar bhi nahin paate hum,
har waqt khayaalo mein rehete ho,

hum to kabhi samajh bhi na sake,
jo bhi aap javjo mein kehete ho,
hum to padte hain nigaahen aapki,
apni nigaahon mein aap jo kitaab likh dete ho.

.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.--.-.-.jiya .-.-.--.-.


khushkismati dekho , ham  khyalo   me hai   kisee ke
badh gayee dhadkane dil kee, tasveer ban gaye dil me kisee ke

na katha usne kabhi ham se, u usne jban kholee thee
hamane to padhee that tab, jab usne apnee ankhk ki palak  kholee thee..

netra....
nice lines.....

koi aur na samjhe is iqraar ko,
to humne apni palko ko uthaaya hi nahin ,
hum to har waqt aapki nazaro mein hi dekhte rahe,
kabhi aapne nazar bhar ke humaari taraf dekha hi nahin .

wo to meher the khuda ki, ki dekha aapne nazaro mein humaari
varna tasveer humaari dil mein aapke banti hi nahin,
agar na milti nazare humaari to,
aaj ye iqraare mohabbat hoti hi nahin.

****************************** jiya ..........
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«Reply #37 on: June 26, 2007, 03:45:05 PM »
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Netra & Jiya... both of u rocking ...... Keep flowing..
thanks roja ji....... aapne bohot ho achha likha hai ....... gr8.

[/i][/b]ishq wo anjaani gali hai,
jahaan aashiko ke male hain,
jahaan jalta hai dil ishq mein,
jahaan saare hi diljale hain.

ishq wo juaa hai dil ka,
jisne kai dil chhale hain,
jahaan har koi haar ke jeet-ta hai dil ki baazi,
jahaan saare hi diljale hain.

*********************************** jiya.......
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«Reply #38 on: June 29, 2007, 03:25:54 PM »
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jiya fantastic.. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

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Kisee ke pass aane se kisee ke dhur hone se
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti kisee ko aazmane se

Jinhe hum yaad rakhte hai woh humko bhool jate hai
Nahi hota asar in per ashq bahane se

Dil main soorat teri aisi sajayee hai
Kabhi mit nahi sakti kisee ke mitane se

Bicharna tha muqaddar main kisee se kya gila magar
Nahi shiqwa muqaddar se na shiqwa hai zamane se

Andheri raat hai Barish hai aur mai Tanha hu
Nahi maloom hoga kya faqat Dil Jalane se..

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bhoot khoob pahali bar padha aapko achaa laga.......

ansoo hee karte hai baya darde dil kee
us patthar-dil ki kya khta jo tadaf kar bhee muskrat hai...

netra...
[/quote]gud lines netra ji....

maana dard-e-dil ko aansu bayaan kar dete hain ,
wo dard ankhon mein nahin hota hai,
maana aankho se aansu to nikalte hain dard mein ,
par dard to dil mein hi hota hai.


**********************************jiya.............
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«Reply #39 on: June 29, 2007, 08:53:48 PM »
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good job Netra ji and Jiya!!
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«Reply #40 on: June 30, 2007, 09:23:58 AM »
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jiya fantastic.. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

***********

Kisee ke pass aane se kisee ke dhur hone se
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti kisee ko aazmane se

Jinhe hum yaad rakhte hai woh humko bhool jate hai
Nahi hota asar in per ashq bahane se

Dil main soorat teri aisi sajayee hai
Kabhi mit nahi sakti kisee ke mitane se

Bicharna tha muqaddar main kisee se kya gila magar
Nahi shiqwa muqaddar se na shiqwa hai zamane se

Andheri raat hai Barish hai aur mai Tanha hu
Nahi maloom hoga kya faqat Dil Jalane se..

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bhoot khoob pahali bar padha aapko achaa laga.......

ansoo hee karte hai baya darde dil kee
us patthar-dil ki kya khta jo tadaf kar bhee muskrat hai...

netra...
[/quote]gud lines netra ji....

maana dard-e-dil ko aansu bayaan kar dete hain ,
wo dard ankhon mein nahin hota hai,
maana aankho se aansu to nikalte hain dard mein ,
par dard to dil mein hi hota hai.


**********************************jiya.............
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ye kya hogya.......

jo karte baya jiba se najaro kee bat kare lage kabse
jo lagate the iljam ham har khata apne mante hai ab
darde-dil ko na dekha thaab , najaro kee juba samje ab

kaise.....

netra,,,,
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«Reply #41 on: June 30, 2007, 10:25:40 PM »
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jiya fantastic.. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

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Kisee ke pass aane se kisee ke dhur hone se
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti kisee ko aazmane se

Jinhe hum yaad rakhte hai woh humko bhool jate hai
Nahi hota asar in per ashq bahane se

Dil main soorat teri aisi sajayee hai
Kabhi mit nahi sakti kisee ke mitane se

Bicharna tha muqaddar main kisee se kya gila magar
Nahi shiqwa muqaddar se na shiqwa hai zamane se

Andheri raat hai Barish hai aur mai Tanha hu
Nahi maloom hoga kya faqat Dil Jalane se..

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bhoot khoob pahali bar padha aapko achaa laga.......

ansoo hee karte hai baya darde dil kee
us patthar-dil ki kya khta jo tadaf kar bhee muskrat hai...

netra...
gud lines netra ji....

maana dard-e-dil ko aansu bayaan kar dete hain ,
wo dard ankhon mein nahin hota hai,
maana aankho se aansu to nikalte hain dard mein ,
par dard to dil mein hi hota hai.


**********************************jiya.............
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ye kya hogya.......

jo karte baya jiba se najaro kee bat kare lage kabse
jo lagate the iljam ham har khata apne mante hai ab
darde-dil ko na dekha thaab , najaro kee juba samje ab

kaise.....

netra,,,,[/quote]

bohot hi achhe. kabhi kabhi hota hai aisajo kabhi hua nahin wo ho jaata hai.

hum bhi kya karte phir,,
jab aapne samjhi hi nahin baat humaari,
dard utha is dil mein koi,,
to karne lagi baate nazare humaari.


********************************** jiya ....
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«Reply #42 on: July 01, 2007, 10:07:11 AM »
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bhoot khoob jia ji again,

najare hee hotee hai jubane aasheekee
isharo se mahaj badh jatee hai aashkee

n ho yakeen tum ko to karlo mohobbat
najaro kee palak batatee hai "haa" ko  aashikee

kurbaan hojata hai aashik aaashikee ke palk kholtee hai
jee bhar kar dekho tum chuune se simatti hai aashkee

bad jatee hai dil kee dhadkane bhee jab rukh se hatte hai prde
likh jata jarre-jree par nam, sharma kar jab ithlatee hai asheekee

netra.....
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«Reply #43 on: July 03, 2007, 04:02:59 PM »
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bhoot khoob jia ji again,

najare hee hotee hai jubane aashikee
isharo se mahaj badh jatee hai aashikee

n ho yakeen tum ko to karlo mohobbat
najaro kee palak batatee hai "haa" ko  aashikee

kurbaan hojata hai aashik aashikee ke palk kholtee hai
jee bhar kar dekho tum chuune se simatti hai aashikee

bad jatee hai dil kee dhadkane bhee jab rukh se hatte hai prde
likh jata jarre-jree par nam, sharma kar jab ithlatee hai ashikee

netra.....


bohot khoob netra ji,,,,,,,

unki aankho me ajeeb si kashish hai,
is kashish ko aur badaati hai aashqee,
ab to ankhon ka hi unke humko nasha hai,
bin piye hi bahekaati hai aashqee.

ye jaante hain ki kai deewaane hain aapke,
phir bhi deewaana unka banaati hai aashqee.
jaante hain parvaane unke anjaam ko, ki jalna hai unhe,
phir bhi parvaana unka banaati hai aashqee

ye koi jaadu nahin karishma hai khuda ka,
jisme do dilon ko milaati hai aashqee,
ishq mein kai dil tabah ho jaate hain,
aise hi kitno ko diljala banaati hai aashqee.

bigaadti hai aashqee banaati hai aashqee,
phir bhi kitno ko aasheeq banaati hai aashqee


**************************************** jiya ....
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«Reply #44 on: July 04, 2007, 05:30:02 PM »
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bhoot khoob mam ji,

bigadtee nahi hai aashik ko bnatee hai aashkee
har jagah haa wajood me aashik kee jhoomtee hai aashkee

chand boodo me bheega hai jism dhadakta hai dil aashike me
barste megho jhoomtee  haseena kee aab badhatee hai aashkee

n ho bhanwre gar chamn me to murja jate hai fool bhee
shama hote hee roshan parwana chadjate hai patange kee aashkee

netra....

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