kya likhun...

by mixie on February 03, 2014, 01:53:54 AM
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क्या शोला-ए-जाँ का हाल लिखूं
कागज़ पे कहाँ जमाल लिखूं

पलकें तो उठी थीं एक पल के लिए
जो दिल पे गुज़री वो हाल लिखूं

धड़कनों ने छेड़ा है एक और तराना
बज उठे हैं ये कैसे सुर ताल लिखूं

तस्वीर ही देखती रही हूँ
तू मिले तो कमाल लिखूं

यहीं से शुरू होती है दास्तान 'मीना'
उम्र भर का क्यूँ मलाल लिखूं

kya shola-ae-jaan ka haal likhun
kagaz pe kahan jamaal likhun

palkein to utthi thiin ek pal ke liye
jo dil pe guzri wo haal likhun

dhadkanon ne chherra hai koi tarana
baj utthe hain kaise ye sur-taal likhun

tasveer hi dekhti rahi hun
tu mile to kamaal likhun

yahin se shuru hoti hai dastaan 'meena'
umr bhar ka kyun malaal likhun
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2014, 07:56:37 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2014, 12:40:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2014, 01:20:29 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2014, 02:26:37 PM »
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क्या शोला-ए-जाँ का हाल लिखूं
कागज़ पे कहाँ जमाल लिखूं

पलकें तो उठी थीं एक पल के लिए
जो दिल पे गुज़री वो हाल लिखूं

धड़कनों ने छेड़ा है एक और तराना
बज उठे हैं ये कैसे सुर ताल लिखूं

तस्वीर ही देखती रही हूँ
तू मिले तो कमाल लिखूं

यहीं से शुरू होती है दास्तान 'मीना'
उम्र भर का क्यूँ मलाल लिखूं

kya shola-ae-jaan ka haal likhun
kagaz pe kahan jamaal likhun

palkein to utthi thiin ek pal ke liye
jo dil pe guzri wo haal likhun

dhadkanon ne chherra hai koi tarana
baj utthe hain kaise ye sur-taal likhun

tasveer hi dekhti rahi hun
tu mile to kamaal likhun

yahin se shuru hoti hai dastaan 'meena'
umr bhar ka kyun malaal likhun


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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2014, 04:21:12 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2014, 02:51:37 AM »
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वाह वाह,..............
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2014, 12:37:28 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooooob... dheron daaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2014, 06:17:35 PM »
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bht bht khoob
daad daad

yun hi likhte rahie
aate rhie
god bless u
be happy

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