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by mixie on November 12, 2013, 07:26:57 AM
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Mere har lafz se likhi hui ek haseen kitaab ho tum
Jise maine khud hi se chhipaya aisa khwaab ho tum

Jis ehsaas ko main dhundti rahi har mod par
Meri zindagi ka wahi ek behatreen lamha ho tum

Jiski justju mein ek umr maine guzaar di
Ussi ibaadat, ussi bandagii ka anjaam ho tum

Ye mumkin hai ki juda ho jaayein waqt ke taqaze mein
Itna jaan lena ki mere qareeb, mere aas paas ho tum
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2013, 02:05:03 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2013, 04:46:03 PM »
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 bahut khoob.i loved ur poem.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2013, 06:43:17 PM »
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Bahut khooooob...
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2013, 08:45:16 PM »
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Hausla Afzahi ke liye behad shukriya doston...
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2013, 10:18:04 PM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower  icon_flower  waah waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2013, 10:30:24 PM »
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Jiski justju mein ek umr maine guzaar di
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nice feelings................
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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2013, 10:32:26 PM »
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Mere har lafz se likhi hui ek haseen kitaab ho tum
Jise maine khud hi se chhipaya aisa khwaab ho tum

Jis ehsaas ko main dhundti rahi har mod par
Meri zindagi ka wahi ek behatreen lamha ho tum

Jiski justju mein ek umr maine guzaar di
Ussi ibaadat, ussi bandagii ka anjaam ho tum

Ye mumkin hai ki juda ho jaayein waqt ke taqaze mein
Itna jaan lena ki mere qareeb, mere aas paas ho tum


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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2013, 10:38:56 PM »
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bohut hi khoob likha hai .
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2013, 12:02:25 AM »
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Wah Sahal, Hurf milta nahi...aur shukriya Suman ji, Sidra ji, Jeet ji
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2013, 05:21:14 AM »
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