---lahron sang jana kya---

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lahron sang, beh jana kya
pahli nazar, fisal jana kya!

izhaar e ishq,aankho se
haya se nazren, jhukana kya!

basi hai soorat,dil me
parda rukh se, uutthaana kya!

badi aazmaishe hain, raah e mohabbat me
ho sachcha dilbar, mohabbat ko  aazmaana kya!

dil kahe, dil hi suney
alfaaz o jubaa ka, takazaa kya!

parh na sake, jab aankho ko
naino ki, paribhasha kya!

kahti hain ab dhadkane, smjh le kb
larazte hotho ki, abhilasha kya!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2011, 08:45:51 PM »
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Bahaut unique si poem hai dost..
Aisi kism ki toh main aj tak nahin likh paya,
lakh koshishein kar kar bhi..
Bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2011, 11:55:56 PM »
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GOOD
lahron sang, beh jana kya
pahli nazar, fisal jana kya!

izhaar e ishq,aankho se
haya se nazren, jhukana kya!

basi hai soorat,dil me
parda rukh se, uutthaana kya!

badi aazmaishe hain, raah e mohabbat me
ho sachcha dilbar, mohabbat ko  aazmaana kya!

dil kahe, dil hi suney
alfaaz o jubaa ka, takazaa kya!

parh na sake, jab aankho ko
naino ki, paribhasha kya!

kahti hain ab dhadkane, smjh le kb
larazte hotho ki, abhilasha kya!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2011, 12:15:18 AM »
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Nice work
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2011, 01:09:50 AM »
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Good Job Killbill Ji
Yeh Wali Behad Achhi Kahin Hain Aapney Applause


basi hai soorat,dil me
parda rukh se, uutthaana kya!

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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2011, 02:04:18 AM »
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bht bht sukriya rahim dost……
aapne pasand kia yahi bahot h…
aur rahi baat likhne ki to aap ek aala darje ke shayar h…
aapka badappan hai ki aapne esa kaha k esa nai likh paye Usual SmileUsual Smile
aapka fan hu mai dost
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2011, 04:22:05 AM »
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Bahut khubsoorat. Bahut hi umda KB ji. Dil se daad de raha hoon. kubul farmayen
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2011, 05:14:41 AM »
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wah wah kbji... khub

kahte kahte ruk jana kya.
dil ki baat chhupana kya.

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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2011, 05:31:59 AM »
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lahron sang, beh jana kya
pahli nazar, fisal jana kya!

izhaar e ishq,aankho se
haya se nazren, jhukana kya!

basi hai soorat,dil me
parda rukh se, uutthaana kya!

badi aazmaishe hain, raah e mohabbat me
ho sachcha dilbar, mohabbat ko  aazmaana kya!

dil kahe, dil hi suney
alfaaz o jubaa ka, takazaa kya!

parh na sake, jab aankho ko
naino ki, paribhasha kya!

kahti hain ab dhadkane, smjh le kb
larazte hotho ki, abhilasha kya!!


good one
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2011, 08:09:51 AM »
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bht bht sukriya manoj ji…

kuch 2 line likhte to aur acha lagta…
aapse aasa krta hu 2 line ki…
sukriya
khus rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2011, 08:13:09 AM »
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sajid sirji……
aapka cmnt aana hi sbse badi bat h ji…
aap mere fav shayaro me shumar ho…

bht bht sukriya ke aapne waqt dia aur parha……

khus hu mai…
sukriya dil se
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 08:15:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 08:19:17 AM »
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niha ji………
sbse pehle to aapko thanx…
aapne apne kimti waqt dia aur is bejaan si kosis ko saraha…

aur dusra apko sry b ek bar fir se.

aapka cmnt dekhkar bht relax feel hua.

khus rahiye sada
sukriya dil se
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imdaad:::
aapke daad ke kabil to nahi mai
fir bhi aapne dil se dia hai islie kubul hai kubul hai…kubul hai Usual Smile

khus rahiye janaab
sukriya
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2011, 08:33:28 AM »
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manjum :
aap jese kamaal ki shayra se daad pakar bht acha lagta hai…

aapki shayri se kuch sikh lete hain hum jese kam akal bhi…

aapka sukriya dil se
khus rahiye ji
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