lamha lamha kareeb aakar... Intezar !

by Intezar on January 19, 2011, 09:13:19 AM
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Raftaa raftaa jab mai teri raaton se gujar raha tha
Ban ke nasha tu meri aankhon mein utar raha tha

Aanch tere badan ki mujhe jalaati rahi raat bhar
aur main bekhauf teri baahon mein pighal raha tha

shayad tujhe yaad ho wo tera mujhme simat jaana
Jab mai teri aagosh mein aakar khud bikhar raha tha

us raat lipat kar mujhse jo sawaal tere labon ne kiye
Jawaab ban kar main tere hontho par sisak raha tha

Mujhe khud mein kiya shaamil tune saanso ki tarah
Jab main kareeb aakar teri aahon mein ulaj raha tha

darmiyan koi aahat bhi na thi teri dhadkano ke siwa
Jab main dil ban kar tere seene mein dhadak raha tha

Ab raat dhalne ko hai, wo pal aakar  gujarne ko hai
Jis pal ki raah mein ye dil ek umra se tadap raha tha

Nam thi aankhe, khaamosh the lab tujhse milkar bhi aaj
lamha lamha kareeb aakar Intezar tujhse bichhad raha tha… !

Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 09:19:05 AM »
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ufffffffffffffffffffffff...............

iske siwa kuch na keh paungi abhi...........
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 12:23:11 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhhhhh god intejaar ji

aap ne kamal ki feelings ko itne aasan shabdon me kaise likha ?

plzzzzzzzz mujhe b sikha dooooooo


mind blowing sir ji

aaj se aap sir ho hamare aap mano ya na mano
pranaaaaaaaaam
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 03:45:20 PM »
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jawab ban ke mai tere hotho pe sisak raha tha..
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ye line aaj pahli baar padhi mene zindgi me
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lajawaab creation hats off
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 04:52:23 PM »
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kya bat hai intezaar ji..


wah khoob aag lagai he apne...


dher saari daad~
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 07:17:08 PM »
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ye uffffff bhi bahut ajeeb hai kasak ji... shukriya

Intezar !

ufffffffffffffffffffffff...............

iske siwa kuch na keh paungi abhi...........
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 07:50:44 PM »
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Rahi ji shukriya hausla afzaayi ka aur itni izzat dene ke liye bhi dil se bahut bahut shukriya.... lekin seekhne sikhaane ke liye ye sir ka rishta jaroori to nahi hai na Huh?? khuda aapko khush rakhe har raah kaamyab kare.... Shukriya ji...

Intezar !

ohhhhhhhhhhhh god intejaar ji

aap ne kamal ki feelings ko itne aasan shabdon me kaise likha ?

plzzzzzzzz mujhe b sikha dooooooo


mind blowing sir ji

aaj se aap sir ho hamare aap mano ya na mano
pranaaaaaaaaam
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 08:23:29 PM »
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Shukriya Nirala ji... aap ki is tarah hausla afzaai ka dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

jawab ban ke mai tere hotho pe sisak raha tha..
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ye line aaj pahli baar padhi mene zindgi me
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lajawaab creation hats off
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2011, 08:30:38 PM »
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Behad khubsurat ehsas intezar ji..bahut umda...
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2011, 12:52:05 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab bahi...

Intezar !

Bahut Khub Intezar Bhai...


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2011, 12:54:57 AM »
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Abhi ji shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

kya bat hai intezaar ji..


wah khoob aag lagai he apne...


dher saari daad~
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2011, 01:48:05 AM »
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Waah Mere Bhai, Kya KHoob Ghazal Likhi Hai, Really Very Romantic, Yunhi Likhte Rahein,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2011, 01:49:12 AM »
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bhai aapne wakt diya uske liye bahut bahut shukriya... aap logo se hi to mehfil mein jaan hoti hai bahut bahut shukriya... !

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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2011, 02:59:18 AM »
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Bahut Khub Intezar Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2011, 06:58:52 PM »
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Shukriya Rishi ji...

Intezar !

Bahut Khub Intezar Ji Applause Applause
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