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by tabassum shakeel on May 02, 2006, 07:37:35 PM
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«Reply #45 on: May 15, 2006, 11:43:58 AM »
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anushka ye line maine aaj subah hi likhin hain ye kisi web site par ho nahi saktin kyonki abhi main sirf yoindia par hi likh rahi hun con firm kiye bina  baat karna thik nahi batao kahan dekhin hain.aur konsi line dekhi hai ..how can u say it a sharing ..tell me
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«Reply #46 on: May 16, 2006, 12:25:59 AM »
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Bohat khoob Tabassum....
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«Reply #47 on: May 16, 2006, 04:13:57 AM »
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Salam Tabusumji...,
Aap naraz na hoh please mey yeh sher ki baat kerehi hu
jo apnay post kiya tha... shayed meh galt hu ..aur agar hu to maaf kerna. No hert feelings Tabusumji Usual Smile  

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besan ki sondhi roti pe khatti chatni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai  chauka basan chulhe chimte jaisi maa
ban ki khurri khat pe leti har ahat pe kan dhare
aadhi soi aadhi jagi thaki dupahari jaisi maa
 
biwi beti bahan padosan thodi thodi sab men banti
din bhar ek rassi ke upar chalti naatni jaisi maa
 
bant ke apna chehra matha aankhen jaane kahan gai
fate purane ek elbum men chanchal ladki jaisi maa
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«Reply #48 on: May 16, 2006, 05:11:02 AM »
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Salam Tabusumji...,
Aap naraz na hoh please mey yeh sher ki baat kerehi hu
jo apnay post kiya tha... shayed meh galt hu ..aur agar hu to maaf kerna. No hert feelings Tabusumji Usual Smile  

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besan ki sondhi roti pe khatti chatni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai  chauka basan chulhe chimte jaisi maa
ban ki khurri khat pe leti har ahat pe kan dhare
aadhi soi aadhi jagi thaki dupahari jaisi maa
 
biwi beti bahan padosan thodi thodi sab men banti
din bhar ek rassi ke upar chalti naatni jaisi maa
 
bant ke apna chehra matha aankhen jaane kahan gai
fate purane ek elbum men chanchal ladki jaisi maa


Tabusumji yeh line is website meh hai..http://www.urdupoetry.com/nida24.html
written by Nida Fazli..
Jo bhi hai achi ghazal hai....
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«Reply #49 on: May 17, 2006, 12:52:23 PM »
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Salam Tabusumji...,
Aap naraz na hoh please mey yeh sher ki baat kerehi hu
jo apnay post kiya tha... shayed meh galt hu ..aur agar hu to maaf kerna. No hert feelings Tabusumji Usual Smile  

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besan ki sondhi roti pe khatti chatni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai  chauka basan chulhe chimte jaisi maa
ban ki khurri khat pe leti har ahat pe kan dhare
aadhi soi aadhi jagi thaki dupahari jaisi maa
 
biwi beti bahan padosan thodi thodi sab men banti
din bhar ek rassi ke upar chalti naatni jaisi maa
 
bant ke apna chehra matha aankhen jaane kahan gai
fate purane ek elbum men chanchal ladki jaisi maa


Tabusumji yeh line is website meh hai..http://www.urdupoetry.com/nida24.html
written by Nida Fazli..
Jo bhi hai achi ghazal hai....


ya if ur talking abt this there all ready i  mentioned n m means not mine
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«Reply #50 on: May 17, 2006, 12:54:16 PM »
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tabusm.. anu.. or sabhi dosto ney bahut acha likha hai... yeo hi likhtey rahow...
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«Reply #51 on: May 17, 2006, 12:54:42 PM »
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WoW!!!! wonderfull!!! Tabussumji..... bahut hi touching
now i m remembering my maa....
Very Nice Anushka........


thanx touchy
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«Reply #52 on: May 17, 2006, 01:00:30 PM »
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Bohat khoob Tabassum....
bahut shukriyya aryan aapki tarif mayne rakhati hai kyunki
aap khud bahut hi achcha likhate hain
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«Reply #53 on: May 17, 2006, 01:46:16 PM »
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Salam Tabusumji...,
Aap naraz na hoh please mey yeh sher ki baat kerehi hu
jo apnay post kiya tha... shayed meh galt hu ..aur agar hu to maaf kerna. No hert feelings Tabusumji Usual Smile  

Quote from: "tabassum shakeel"
besan ki sondhi roti pe khatti chatni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai  chauka basan chulhe chimte jaisi maa
ban ki khurri khat pe leti har ahat pe kan dhare
aadhi soi aadhi jagi thaki dupahari jaisi maa
 
biwi beti bahan padosan thodi thodi sab men banti
din bhar ek rassi ke upar chalti naatni jaisi maa
 
bant ke apna chehra matha aankhen jaane kahan gai
fate purane ek elbum men chanchal ladki jaisi maa


Tabusumji yeh line is website meh hai..http://www.urdupoetry.com/nida24.html
written by Nida Fazli..
Jo bhi hai achi ghazal hai....


ya if ur talking abt this there all ready i  mentioned n m means not mine


Got the message..... like i said jo bhi hai achi ghazal/shayer..... lets just get on with life yea... Usual Smile
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«Reply #54 on: May 17, 2006, 03:33:05 PM »
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Shukriya Tabbassum Didi Kayanath Ji And waheed Bhai,..
Kaynath Ji Maine Wo Web Site Dekha Bahoot Hi Touching Words Hain Usmein,..

Jisne Kadar Na Jaani Maa Ki is Zamaane Mein,..
Wo Taradap Raha Hai Har Kisi Se Pyaar Paane Mein,..

Maa Wo Hai Jo Apne Bache Ki Khushion Ke Liye Duaaein Mangti hai,..
Aur Hum Hain Ke Lage Hain Uski Chahat Ko Mitaane Mein,..

Maa Hai Ki Har Sitam Apne Bache Ka Sehkar Bhi Dua Deti Hai,..
Aur Har Pal Pyaar Rakhti Hai Bachon Ko Apne Nazraane Mein,..

Aye Khudaa Meri Maa Ko Salamath Rakhna Tu Har Pal,..
Maaf Karde Gar Maine Kiya Ho Koi Galti Anjaane Mein,..

Mil Jaate Hain Yahan Lakhon Chahne Wale Doston,..
Lekin Nahi Banaa Koi Maa Jaise Phir Khudrat Ke Khazaane Mein,..

Khuda Se Sab Apni Maa Ke Liye Khushion Mango,..
Khuda Bhi Unhe Maaf Nahi Karta Jisne Diya Hai Dard Maa Ko Uska Dil Dukhaane Mein,.,.

Maa Ka Sayaa Har Pal Har Waqt Hum Sab Pe Rahe,..
Maa Wo Cheez Hai Jiske Rehne Se Mehakti Hai Khushboo Sabke Ashiaane Mein,..

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Doston Pehli Baar Dil Ke Alfazon Ko Jordkar Maa Ki Shaan mein Kuch Likhaa Hoon I Hope U All Like It,..
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«Reply #55 on: May 17, 2006, 07:06:30 PM »
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bahuuuuuuuuut khoob jaanasheen
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«Reply #56 on: May 17, 2006, 08:04:02 PM »
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yahan tamil nadu men aap sab jante hain ki log kafi alag se dikhate hain aise men ek bachcha kisi bheed men kho gaya use kisi  insan ne rote dekha to chup kiya samjha ke poocha kis ke sath yahan aae the vo bachcha bola maa ke saath .maa ka naam kya hai us bachche ne naam bataya to anouncement karaya ki is naam ki jo bhi lady hain jinka bachcha khoya hai yahan aaen.
isbeech ubachche se poocha tumhari maa kaisi dikhati hai
vo bachcha bola bahut pyari hai
poocha lambi hai ya chhoti hai bola bahut achchi hai phir poocha achcha kaisi hai us bachche ne idhar udhar dekha ek aishvarya rai ka poster laga tha use dikha ke bola aise hai
sabmen qurisity ho gai ab sab usaki maa ko dekhna chahte the ..itne me ek kaafi kaali si aurat
jo achchi khasi moti bhi thi daudti roti hui ai bachcha usse lipat gaya dono lipat ke rone lage
rote rote bachcha kahne laga dekha maine kaha tha na meri maa bahut pyari hai.sabhi senti ho gaye ....ye waqyq bilkul sachcha hai.....har bachche ki nazar men apni maa sab se pyari hoti hai.................
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«Reply #57 on: May 18, 2006, 02:44:54 AM »
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yahan tamil nadu men aap sab jante hain ki log kafi alag se dikhate hain aise men ek bachcha kisi bheed men kho gaya use kisi  insan ne rote dekha to chup kiya samjha ke poocha kis ke sath yahan aae the vo bachcha bola maa ke saath .maa ka naam kya hai us bachche ne naam bataya to anouncement karaya ki is naam ki jo bhi lady hain jinka bachcha khoya hai yahan aaen.
isbeech ubachche se poocha tumhari maa kaisi dikhati hai
vo bachcha bola bahut pyari hai
poocha lambi hai ya chhoti hai bola bahut achchi hai phir poocha achcha kaisi hai us bachche ne idhar udhar dekha ek aishvarya rai ka poster laga tha use dikha ke bola aise hai
sabmen qurisity ho gai ab sab usaki maa ko dekhna chahte the ..itne me ek kaafi kaali si aurat
jo achchi khasi moti bhi thi daudti roti hui ai bachcha usse lipat gaya dono lipat ke rone lage
rote rote bachcha kahne laga dekha maine kaha tha na meri maa bahut pyari hai.sabhi senti ho gaye ....ye waqyq bilkul sachcha hai.....har bachche ki nazar men apni maa sab se pyari hoti hai.................


BILKUL SEHI KAHA TABUSUMJ.... JAISI BHI HO HAR BAACHAY KO APNI MAA SAB SAY ACHI AUR KHUBSURAT DIKTI HAI...

Na chahey maa ka sonay jaisay baal,
Na chahey maa kay moti wali kangaan,
Chahey to baas maa ki aanchaal ki thendi thendi chau.......
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«Reply #58 on: May 18, 2006, 01:10:24 PM »
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jinhe is aanchal ki chanv mili unki qismat ka kya kehna
vo sach much hi bad qismat hain jinhe isake bina pada rehna
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«Reply #59 on: May 19, 2006, 08:17:05 PM »
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bahuuuuuuuuut khoob jaanasheen
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