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by tabassum shakeel on May 02, 2006, 07:37:35 PM
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besan ki sondhi roti pe khatti chatni jaisi maa
yaad aati hai  chauka basan chulhe chimte jaisi maa
ban ki khurri khat pe leti har ahat pe kan dhare
aadhi soi aadhi jagi thaki dupahari jaisi maa
 
biwi beti bahan padosan thodi thodi sab men banti
din bhar ek rassi ke upar chalti naatni jaisi maa
 
bant ke apna chehra matha aankhen jaane kahan gai
fate purane ek elbum men chanchal ladki jaisi maa




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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2006, 08:29:22 AM »
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Bohat hi khubsoorat ghazal hai Tabaasum...
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2006, 08:44:04 AM »
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thanxxxxx aryan
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2006, 03:29:38 PM »
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Nice one tabbassum,..
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2006, 07:50:11 AM »
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thanx janasheeeen
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2006, 01:03:07 PM »
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pal-pal anchal ki chaiya karti
Kalpvraksh si pyari Maa
Thapki dekar Lori Sunati
hamein sulati pyari maa
hath pakad kar jeevan path mein
Chalna Sikhati pyari maa
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2006, 05:52:40 PM »
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Nice One Ajay,..
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2006, 06:24:10 PM »
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bahut khoob ajay its really nice
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2006, 06:37:15 PM »
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sabhi yo india visitors se meri humble request hai ki  aap men se jo bhi is topic ki visit kaaren pls pls apni maa ko yaad karke ek hi line likhen par bina likhen na jaaen ...ham sabhi apni maa se bahut pyar karte hain han use sher men bandh kar kahna mushkil ho sakta hai aap sirf prose men ek line likh jaaen yakeen kariye vo sab lines milkar ek pyari gazal ho jaaegi.......ye na samjhiyega ki main is thread ko is liye badha rahi hun ki ye mera hai ye to ham sabka hai shuru chahe koi kare jab tak sab ke khayal ismen na aaenge ye adhoora hai hamen sabko kuch kahna hi hai yahan aaker sirf padh ke na jaiye ...ise likhenge to apne aap gazal kahne lagenge..........
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2006, 06:43:29 PM »
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Nice Thoughts Didi Inshaallah Main Kuch Likhne Ki Zaroor Koshi Karoonga,..
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2006, 06:55:09 PM »
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Aaaye Hain Hum Is Duniya Mein Maa Ka Sahara Leke,..
Kashti The Hum Sab Duniya Mein Aane Se Pehle,.. Bheja Hai Khuda Ne Hume Ek Kinara Deke,..

Dil Nahi Dukhaaeyenge Hum Apni Maa Ka Uske Pairon Tale Jannath Hai,..
Jisne Maa Ki Kadar Ki Hai Uski Zindagi Mein Har Pal Rahat Hain,..

Maa Na Hoti To Hum Na Hote Is Rangeen Zamaane Mein,..
Maa To Sab Se Anmol Hai Sab Keemti Khazaane Mein,.

Maa Ki Godd Mein Ek Pal Bhi So Jaao To Saare Dard Bhool Jaaaoge,..
Gar Maa Ki Bad Dua Loge To Dono Jahan Mein Khud Ko Tardpaoge,..

Kadar Poocho Unse Maa Ki Jinho Ne Use Khoya Hai,..
Humne Kabhi Uski Kadar Na Jaani Isliye Usne Roya Hai,..

Dard Na Do Maa Ko Uski Ek Aah Bhi Arsh Tak Pahoonchti Hai,...
Khushi Jisne Di Ho Maa Ko Uski Zindagi Khushion Se Sawarti Hai,..

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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2006, 06:58:11 PM »
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MAA

kabhi na dekha main maa ko
waqt pe khana khate hue
kabhi na dekha maine maa ko
sabse pahle sote hue
din se pahle vo uthtin thin
raat gae vo soti thin
apna kuch na karte dekha
sabke liye vo hazir thin
jaane kab vo khati thin
jaane kab nahati thin
kaise ek jin ki tarah
har jagah hazir rahti thin
idd ke din  ham khoob the sajate
naye naye kapde nai choodiyan
jhaljhal karte hamare kapde
sau sau bar aaina dekhte
us din bhi maa kichen men rahtin
unhin purane kapdon men
roz se zyada kaam vo kartin
naye kapde saheje rakhtin
jab jab jaakar unse kahti
maa aap bhi to nae kpde pahno
hath men krchha liye plat kar
meri aur muska detin
main zid karti to vo kahtin
bas zara sa aur kaam hai
munni bahar baitho tum
isko niptate hi bas main
 nae se kapde pahnungi
kaam khatm na hota unka
idd khatm ho jaati thi
jaane kab phir der raat ko
maa us din so paati thi
maa ke liye kya idd nahi hai
main ye socha karti thi
inhi khyalon se dab kar
jaane kab so jaati thi
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2006, 07:03:07 PM »
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thanxx janasheen ....tum kuch achcha hi likhoge mujhe pata hai....
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2006, 07:06:24 PM »
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Shukriya Didi Jo Apne Hume Acha Samjha,..
Lekin Maa Ke Liye Jitna Bhi Acha Likho Kam Hai,.
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2006, 07:14:51 PM »
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ye bhi achcha hai .....maa ke liye ham men se koi bhi jo bhi likhega sab achcha hi hoga.....
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