Maan jaao, ki, tumhain roz manaauungaa main!

by abdbundeli on October 18, 2010, 07:16:38 AM
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Aik bahut hi puraanee meyree gazal aaj meyrey haath aa lagee hai! Padhh kar na jaaney kaisaa-kaisaa lagaa! Aap bhi padhhiyegaa?

Maan jaao, ki, tumhain roz manaauungaa main!
Gungunaao, ki, tumhain baarhaa gaauungaa main!!

Dil-o-jigar mein raat-din rahogey tum meyrey!
Tum sataaou, magar, kabhi na sataauungaa main!!

Tumhain azeez hain, gar, aansuon key durdaaney:
To rulaaou zaroor; par, na rulaauungaa main!!

Jaantaa hun, bagair meyrey, rahogey beychain:
Bazm sey alhadah chupchaap bulaauungaa main!

Chain sey neend lo seeney pai meyrey jab chaahey!
Jaag jaaou khushi sey: par, na jagaauungaa main!!

Chain hi chain hai mujhey: agar ho tum khush, to!
Paas aaou, sarey aagosh khilaauungaa main!!

Lab tumhaarey baney hain sirf muskuraaney ko:
Muskuraaou, tumhain palkon pai bithhaauungaa main!

Karoongaa door nazar sey na lamhey bhar ko bhee;
Ta'aannukon-khiley seeney sey lagaauungaa main!

Gour farmaayiye: aisaa mileygaa koun kahaan?
'Abd', huaa har aik hukm bajaauungaa main!

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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2010, 08:23:55 AM »
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ahaaa abd sahab ..bahut khoob likha he apne..dil se daad pesh he jiiii....dheeer saaariii daaad ke sath likhate rahiye...

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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2010, 02:35:43 PM »
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Janaab Abd Babu Aadab...
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge
Aur Kya Kahun Janaab Tareef Men Alfaaz Nahi Mil Rahe Hain.
Aagaz Se Anjaam Tak Bas Behtareen Hi Behtareen Wah Wah
Har Lafz Maano Jaise Muhabbat Mein Dooba Hua Sa Hai
Aapki Is Peshkash Ko Parhke To Humpe Bhi Jaise Nasha Sa
Taari Ho Gaya.....Behad Khgoobsurat Janaab.

Hazaaron Dad... Applause Applause

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Shihab ji!
Dil-o-jigar ki baateyn jigar-o-dil sey hi to mahsuus ki jaateen hain! Shukriyah!

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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2010, 02:38:11 PM »
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ahaaa abd sahab ..bahut khoob likha he apne..dil se daad pesh he jiiii....dheeer saaariii daaad ke sath likhate rahiye...


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Abhi ji!

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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2010, 05:16:12 PM »
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abd ji...kya kahun iss nazm k liye shabd nahin mil rahe...itne sare rang bikhar gaye iss ek kalam ko padhke..kai khubsurat lamhe aur yaadein fir se tarotaaza ho gai...

behad pyaar bhari nazm hai ye aapki..pyaar me khudko bhulkar kisko chahna kya hota hai..wo dikhta hai...bht khubsurat........
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2010, 05:29:33 AM »
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Abd ji bahut khoob. icon_flower


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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2010, 05:49:02 AM »
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abd ji...kya kahun iss nazm k liye shabd nahin mil rahe...itne sare rang bikhar gaye iss ek kalam ko padhke..kai khubsurat lamhe aur yaadein fir se tarotaaza ho gai...

behad pyaar bhari nazm hai ye aapki..pyaar me khudko bhulkar kisko chahna kya hota hai..wo dikhta hai...bht khubsurat........


Meethhey-meethhey itney saarey alfaaz; aur, wo bhi aik saath!! Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'KasaK' ji!

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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2010, 05:50:55 AM »
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Abd ji bahut khoob. icon_flower

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Prince' ji!

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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2010, 06:31:44 AM »
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Wah wah wah ji ati sunder hai ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aik bahut hi puraanee meyree gazal aaj meyrey haath aa lagee hai! Padhh kar na jaaney kaisaa-kaisaa lagaa! Aap bhi padhhiyegaa?

Maan jaao, ki, tumhain roz manaauungaa main!
Gungunaao, ki, tumhain baarhaa gaauungaa main!!

Dil-o-jigar mein raat-din rahogey tum meyrey!
Tum sataaou, magar, kabhi na sataauungaa main!!

Tumhain azeez hain, gar, aansuon key durdaaney:
To rulaaou zaroor; par, na rulaauungaa main!!

Jaantaa hun, bagair meyrey, rahogey beychain:
Bazm sey alhadah chupchaap bulaauungaa main!

Chain sey neend lo seeney pai meyrey jab chaahey!
Jaag jaaou khushi sey: par, na jagaauungaa main!!

Chain hi chain hai mujhey: agar ho tum khush, to!
Paas aaou, sarey aagosh khilaauungaa main!!

Lab tumhaarey baney hain sirf muskuraaney ko:
Muskuraaou, tumhain palkon pai bithhaauungaa main!

Karoongaa door nazar sey na lamhey bhar ko bhee;
Ta'aannukon-khiley seeney sey lagaauungaa main!

Gour farmaayiye: aisaa mileygaa koun kahaan?
'Abd', huaa har aik hukm bajaauungaa main!

                       - abd bundeli



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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2010, 11:38:26 AM »
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Wah wah wah ji ati sunder hai ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'KOYAL46' ji!

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