*****Maana tum husn wale ho****

by baadal102 on February 05, 2008, 04:31:33 PM
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Maana tum husn wale ho,garoor wale ho,

Lakh Chupo tum dunia se,
Khud ko chupa ke hume jalate kyo ho,

Bechain tum bhi ho mere liye.
Fir Ek jhalak ko tere hume tarsate kyo ho,

Rehte ho aas pass mere,
Fir dur hone ka ehsaas karate kyo ho,

Reh nahi sakte humare bina,
Fir humare aane ka intzaar karte kyo ho,

Singaar karte ho sirf hamare liye,
Fir parda nashi ban ke khud ko chipate kyo ho,

Garoor aa hi jaata hai husn ko,
Garoor ker ke khud ko satate kyo ho!!!!!


Baadal
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2008, 04:48:14 PM »
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Nice creation Baadal ji
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2008, 04:49:55 PM »
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Bahot khoob baadal ji...
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2008, 04:51:28 PM »
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thanx roja ji & punam ji


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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2008, 04:51:55 PM »
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wah ji kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob baadal ji!!!
ek koshish meri taraf se:

Husan ko garoor, ashiq ke payar se atta hai
mujhe to bada nadan Ashiq, najar atta hai

Bechaini uski main hi to pyar najar atta hai
Husan ke dil ko karaar issi se atta hai

Rahte hai tere aas pass, aor kaha jayege
Kaise Ashiq ko phir, inkaar najar atta hai

Husan ke intzaar main shama ka jalna hai
Kayun phir Ashiq itna, bekraar najar atta hai

Shingar hai tere liye, aor parda zamne ke liye
Thehar thora sa, kyun itna be-sabar najar atta hai

Janta hai sara jahan, husan ke in adao ko
Jitna jhuka hai Ashiq, utna hi husan ko us per pyar atta hai

Husan ko garoor, ashiq ke payar se atta hai
mujhe to bada nadan Ashiq, najar atta hai.........
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2008, 04:53:19 PM »
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bahut khoob didi..

Koyi saat de na de .. tum mere saat raho
Mere andheron main banke saat chandni raat raho
Pyar jab tumne kiya toh wafa nibana
sirf saanson main banke dhadkano hayaat raho
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2008, 04:55:51 PM »
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shukaria pooja, wah kaya khoob likha hai Roja!!! Good one!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2008, 04:56:14 PM »
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bahut aache pooja ji
verry good lines

Shingar hai tere liye, aor parda zamne ke liye
Thehar thora sa, kyun itna be-sabar najar atta hai



Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2008, 04:59:22 PM »
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roja ji bahoot khoob


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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2008, 05:01:11 PM »
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bahut aache pooja ji
verry good lines

Shingar hai tere liye, aor parda zamne ke liye
Thehar thora sa, kyun itna be-sabar najar atta hai

Baadal

humm koi jawab nahi... sad5
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zakhmola
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2008, 09:07:35 AM »
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hushn waalon ke naam ek chhota sa peigaam
bas pad leina na lagana hum par koyi iljaam...

Mere Haalat par na hans Ae mujhe girane waale
ab darta hai tu mujhey girta hua dekhkar
jab girne ki aadat si ho gayi hai mujhey....

oothake girana , Girake oothana , Fir se Girana--Girana Girana
shyad girne se bachana inn hasinao ka kaam nahin
yeh chand alfaaf chand hasinaon ke naam
jinhey apne rang roop par kuchh zyada he naaz hai

Inke har ek andaaz ko kya kahein janaab
surkh honthon ki laali ya sharabi Shabab
madhosh madmast karte hain janab

chahat aarjooo tamanaayein sharabi
yeh haalat sabhi ki inhone bana di

gir ke fida fir bhi harke inn par

gira ke oothana gar tumhi ne hai humko
toh hamein kasam khuda
hum bhi 100 baar gir jaaye
girey na kahin koyi Bas khuda maan jaaye
hamein aur hamein bas hamein he giraye....

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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2008, 09:49:59 AM »
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Nice creation Baadal ji
Maana tum husn wale ho,garoor wale ho,

Lakh Chupo tum dunia se,
Khud ko chupa ke hume jalate kyo ho,

Bechain tum bhi ho mere liye.
Fir Ek jhalak ko tere hume tarsate kyo ho,


Raat ke andhera kab tak suraj ko chupayega,
Amavas ka chand kab tak apni chandani ko chupayega
kab tak phool jaisa chehre bhavre se chupa rahega,
kab tak mehkhana devdas se door rahega
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baadal102
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2008, 11:34:50 AM »
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bahut aache zakhmola ji
bahut choti koshish mere taref se



Dekh surat husn ki,
Ashiq bekarar ho jaata hai,

Bechania tab bad jaati,
Jab husn ko pyar ashiq pe aata hai,

Shingaar mai husn chand nazar aata hai,
Ye dekh ashiq tadap jaata hai,

Maana husan ko garoor,
Ashiq ke payar se atta hai,

Husn ye kyo bhoolta hai,
Use banane wala bhagwan nahi ashiq kehlata hai!!!!!



Baadal






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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2008, 02:09:19 PM »
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bahut aache zakhmola ji
bahut choti koshish mere taref se



Dekh surat husn ki,
Ashiq bekarar ho jaata hai,

Bechania tab bad jaati,
Jab husn ko pyar ashiq pe aata hai,

Shingaar mai husn chand nazar aata hai,
Ye dekh ashiq tadap jaata hai,

Maana husan ko garoor,
Ashiq ke payar se atta hai,

Husn ye kyo bhoolta hai,
Use banane wala bhagwan nahi ashiq kehlata hai!!!!!



Baadal


Aapka choti si koshish bahut accha laga padkar. Yu hi aise choti choti koshishein karte rehna Baadal sb.
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2008, 03:27:47 PM »
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zakhmola nice lines, magar samjh bahoot kam aai hai.. apki poem mai khumar kam aor gussa jayada najar ayya... jo mai samjh saki!!! Ho sakta hai ki main galat samjhi hu!!!

Baadal ji kaya khusurat koshish ki hai apne!! bahoot khoob!!

Husan ne kab kaha ki use Rub ne banaya hai
Chehre per yah noor, Ashiq ki deewangi se aaya hai

Husan ki adao ko, jab jab Ashiq ne uthaya hai
Husan ki agan ko, utna hi aor jalaya hai

Bechaini Ashiq ki, husan ko bhi bechain karti hai
Ashiq ke garoor ke samne, tabhi to husan ne sir jhukaya hai

Shingar husan ka, Ashiq ki najaro se hi to ayya hai
Jo husan wo dekhein, wo zamane ko kaha najar ayya hai

Husan ne kab kaha ki use Rub ne banaya hai
Chehre per yah noor, Ashiq ki deewangi se aaya hai...............

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