-----/// Main aag bujhaaun kaise ///----- Hriday

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bheegi   hui   si   kal  ki  woh   raat, main  bhulaaun  kaise
hoon nashe mein abhi tak, main  hosh  me ab  aaun  kaise

dekh  us  bheege  badan  ko aag  lagi  is  dil  me  kuch aisi
jal  rahaa  hoon  abhi tak, main woh  aag  bujhaaun  kaise

tadap  rahaa  hoon  ab  tak, kuch jal raha  hai seene mein
seene ke  jalte huye angaar ko thandak pahuchaaun kaise

dheere   se  jab  usne  chehre  se zulfon ko hataayaa apne
qatl  kaise  huwaa  meraa  us lamhaa , main bataaun kaise

bheege hue  se  honth aur samundar si woh aankhen uski
doobaa  unme kuch  is tarhaa, main  ab  nikal paaun kaise

uuuff,  kyaa  thi  woh, jaane  kahaan  se  aayi thi kal woh
naam tak  nahi poochaa, ab use  main dhund paaun kaise

naa neend hai  aankhon mein, naa hi  bhook hai mujhe ab
khoyaa hoon uske khayaalon  mein, sambhal  paaun kaise

kaash  woh  fir  dikh  jaaye  aaj jahaan  kal  dikhi  thi woh
baithaa  hun wahin, bin  mile usse  main  ghar jaaun kaise

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2013, 03:31:36 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2013, 03:36:09 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2013, 05:04:10 PM »
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waaaah.. bahut khoooob..
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2013, 01:15:14 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2013, 03:55:51 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2013, 05:41:57 AM »
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bheegi   hui   si   kal  ki  woh   raat, main  bhulaaun  kaise
hoon nashe mein abhi tak, main  hosh  me ab  aaun  kaise

dekh  us  bheege  badan  ko aag  lagi  is  dil  me  kuch aisi
jal  rahaa  hoon  abhi tak, main woh  aag  bujhaaun  kaise

tadap  rahaa  hoon  ab  tak, kuch jal raha  hai seene mein
seene ke  jalte huye angaar ko thandak pahuchaaun kaise

dheere   se  jab  usne  chehre  se zulfon ko hataayaa apne
qatl  kaise  huwaa  meraa  us lamhaa , main bataaun kaise

bheege hue  se  honth aur samundar si woh aankhen uski
doobaa  unme kuch  is tarhaa, main  ab  nikal paaun kaise

uuuff,  kyaa  thi  woh, jaane  kahaan  se  aayi thi kal woh
naam tak  nahi poochaa, ab use  main dhund paaun kaise

naa neend hai  aankhon mein, naa hi  bhook hai mujhe ab
khoyaa hoon uske khayaalon  mein, sambhal  paaun kaise

kaash  woh  fir  dikh  jaaye  aaj jahaan  kal  dikhi  thi woh
baithaa  hun wahin, bin  mile usse  main  ghar jaaun kaise

*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #9 on: February 14, 2013, 08:03:52 AM »
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waah waah waah hriday ji bahut pyaari kalaam thi. har sher bahut kuch kah gaye. bahut bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2013, 10:51:25 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!



Bahut khoob janab badi achchi kalaam kahi hai... ahsaas O khayaal behad
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Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 09:09:28 PM »
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thank u soooo much Shireen ji.....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2013, 03:14:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rajan ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Vimmi ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji.....!!!

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