-----/// Main kitnaa badal gayaa hoon ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 22, 2013, 01:22:10 AM
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tumhaare  hone  se  dekho  naa kitnaa badal gayaa hoon
ladkhadaataa thaa pehle, ab  main  sambhal  gayaa hoon
yeh  mohabbat  nahi  hai  to kaho  naa  yeh aur  kyaa hai
jo tumhaare hi saanche mein main  to  dhal  gayaa  hoon

yeh  shaam   ki  hai  laali  aur  yeh   thandi  si hawaayein
kuch  keh  rahi  hain  mujhse  magar kyaa   keh rahi hain
main   thaa   nahi   aisaa   kabhi  jo  aaj  lag  rahaa hoon
hai  asar  yeh  kis  kaa, jo  main  yun  badal  gayaa hoon

dhadkano  ki  yeh  tezi  aur   mere   dil   ki   yeh  baatein
kuch  to  hai   bahut  khaas  jo  in   mein   ho  rahaa  hai
aankhon  mein   hai  khwaab  aur  hai  chehraa   kisi  kaa
thodi  si   beqaraari,   main   thodaa  machal  rahaa hoon

hai kyaa   yeh   mohabbat  jis  mein  main jal gayaa hoon
kyun kisi  mom  ki  tarhaa   aaj  main pighal  gayaa hoon
hai   dil  mein   thodi  aag, hai    bas   thodaa   saa  paani
ufff   yeh   kaisaa   safar  hai  jis  mein  nikal  gayaa hoon

koi  rok   lo,  koi  tok   lo, main  aage    nikal    naa  jaaun
abhi   thodaa   jalaa  hoon, main pooraa  jal   naa   jaaun
aaj  pankh  failaa  ke  main  aasmaan  chhoonaa chaahun
chhoo lene woh aasmaan zameen par uchhal gayaa hoon

yeh mohabbat  nahi  hai  to  kaho  naa  yeh  aur kyaa hai
ab  tumhaare hi saanche  mein  main  jo dhal gayaa hoon
ladkhadaataa  thaa  pehle, ab main  sambhal gayaa hoon
tumhaare  hone  se  dekho  naa kitnaa badal gayaa hoon


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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2013, 01:28:31 AM »
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Bahut Khoob,Sach bahut Badale-Badale se Nazar aate ho,,,
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2013, 01:57:18 AM »
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Waaah kya baat hai Hriday ji .... Bade hi zinda ehsaas aur sulagte shole jaisa bayaan .... Bahaut bahaut bahaut aur usse bhi zyaada daad apko
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2013, 03:15:15 AM »
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बहुत खूब ह्रदय जी....बहुत खूब....
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2013, 09:04:41 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2013, 03:02:12 PM »
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kya baat kya baat kya baat...
tumhaare  hone  se  dekho  naa kitnaa badal gayaa hoon
ladkhadaataa thaa pehle, ab  main  sambhal  gayaa hoon
yeh  mohabbat  nahi  hai  to kaho  naa  yeh aur  kyaa hai
jo tumhaare hi saanche mein main  to  dhal  gayaa  hoon
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2013, 12:06:29 AM »
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Main koi Shayar to nahin,
Phir bhi mujko hai yeh yakin...

Hriday ji ne kamaal ki ghazal likhi hai specialy the first four lines I adore them.

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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2013, 08:05:52 PM »
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Waaaaaaahhh.... Hriday ji bahut bahut bahut khoooooooooob... Hamesha ki tarah dil ko choo gayi aapki rachna... dheron dheron dheron daaaaaad..
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2014, 02:34:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa jo aapne ise waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!
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