Manjil

by Suku on April 21, 2009, 12:32:12 PM
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aankho ke saamne

manjil hai

Kadme bhi

unhi raste pe hai

dil me

josh bhi hai

sapne bhi

manjil paane ki hai

raste me

kitne musaafir bhi hai

jisme ek

humsafar bhi hai



phir ye

kaisi hulchal

kyun dar raha hai mann

wahi jaane se

jaha jaana

tay hua hai

are

wahi to manjil hai



yunhi ulajh ulajh kar

musafir bhatak jaate hai

in toofano me

yun ghir jaate hai

khud ki manjil ko

khud hi thookra daalte hai

khud apne pe

biswaas nahu hume



sayad mai layak nahi

kisi manjil paane ke

manjil paane ke

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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2009, 12:34:57 PM »
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   NICE COMPOSITION...................SUKU...WELCOME..!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2009, 12:39:59 PM »
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Beautiful work Suku..
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2011, 11:58:35 AM »
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aankho ke saamne

manjil hai

Kadme bhi

unhi raste pe hai

dil me

josh bhi hai

sapne bhi

manjil paane ki hai

raste me

kitne musaafir bhi hai

jisme ek

humsafar bhi hai



phir ye

kaisi hulchal

kyun dar raha hai mann

wahi jaane se

jaha jaana

tay hua hai

are

wahi to manjil hai



yunhi ulajh ulajh kar

musafir bhatak jaate hai

in toofano me

yun ghir jaate hai

khud ki manjil ko

khud hi thookra daalte hai

khud apne pe

biswaas nahu hume



sayad mai layak nahi

kisi manjil paane ke

manjil paane ke




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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2011, 12:49:17 PM »
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