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by S.hashmi on January 18, 2010, 02:50:33 PM
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               MARNE WALE  KE SAATH CHAAHE LOG MARAA NAHI KARTE
                LEKIN ZINDA LOG BHI HAMESH ZINDA HUA NAHI KARTE

                      KISI KA JISM  HO JATA HAI KHATAM
                      KISI KE JAZBAT HO JAATE HAI FANAA

                      KUCHH LOG MAR KE BHI JI LETE HEIN
                       DILON MEIN ZINDA YADON KI TARAH

       "AUR KUCHH LOG JEETE JEE KHUD MEIN DAFAN HO JAATE HEIN MERI TARAH"

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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 03:23:35 PM »
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Achhi creation hai Hashmi ji lekin itni mayoosi theek nahin. Allah ki zaat se achhi ummeed rakhiye.
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 11:44:11 PM »
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Achha likha hai Hashmi ji lekin itni mayoosi theek nahin. Bhagwan ki zaat se achhi ummeed rakhiye.
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2010, 10:35:48 AM »
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Achhi creation hai Hashmi ji lekin itni mayoosi theek nahin. Allah ki zaat se achhi ummeed rakhiye.
    Shukria .....Ji bilkul, Allah bahot gafururrahim hai, isme koi shaq nahi ......... magar riyaz ji, hame apni creations se har kism ke logo ke jazbaton ko zahir karna hai, kudrat ke har rang har den  ko lafjon mein dhalna hai, Maanti hun mere in lafzon mein bahot mayoosi hai, kyonki hasrat aur kismat mein bahot farq hota hai..lekin aage wali creations mein khud iske dusre pehluon ko bhi Zahir karne ki koshish ki hai.........
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 11:26:59 AM »
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Very touching creation S.Hashmi ji.bahut dard ke saath aapne likha.bahut khoob. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 01:15:23 PM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna hai Hashmi Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2010, 11:40:50 AM »
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Bahut achchhi rachna hai Hashmi Ji

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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2010, 05:46:46 PM »
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Bahut Khub Hashmi JI
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2012, 02:09:03 AM »
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                    *************************************

               MARNE WALE  KE SAATH CHAAHE LOG MARAA NAHI KARTE
                LEKIN ZINDA LOG BHI HAMESH ZINDA HUA NAHI KARTE

                      KISI KA JISM  HO JATA HAI KHATAM
                      KISI KE JAZBAT HO JAATE HAI FANAA

                      KUCHH LOG MAR KE BHI JI LETE HEIN
                       DILON MEIN ZINDA YADON KI TARAH

       "AUR KUCHH LOG JEETE JEE KHUD MEIN DAFAN HO JAATE HEIN MERI TARAH"

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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2012, 02:33:06 AM »
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               MARNE WALE  KE SAATH CHAAHE LOG MARAA NAHI KARTE
                LEKIN ZINDA LOG BHI HAMESH ZINDA HUA NAHI KARTE

                      KISI KA JISM  HO JATA HAI KHATAM
                      KISI KE JAZBAT HO JAATE HAI FANAA

                      KUCHH LOG MAR KE BHI JI LETE HEIN
                       DILON MEIN ZINDA YADON KI TARAH

       "AUR KUCHH LOG JEETE JEE KHUD MEIN DAFAN HO JAATE HEIN MERI TARAH"

                   **************************************************
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