Mawazna...! COmparisson !

by SADIQA JAWED on July 26, 2005, 06:37:20 PM
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MAWAZNA !...........

Har ik Sehra main bikhry
Rait k Zaroon ko gin lyena
Samnder Dar Samnder
Ja key tum Katroon ko ginlyna
Kisi Shab beth Kar ginna Tum Sitary
Orr Meri Jan Tum...
har ik jangal main Pairoon (tree) Par..
Sajey Patoon ko gin Lye Na
Jama Karlyna phir tum aik jaga Par
Rait key Zaroon ko Orr
Pani Key Katroon Ko
Sitary Bhi Mila Ley na
WoH Paty Bhi Saja Ley na
Magar Meri Mohabat sey
YEH SAB KUCH KAM HI NIKLEY GA !.....
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2005, 08:28:58 PM »
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MAWAZNA !...........

Har ik Sehra main bikhry
Rait k Zaroon ko gin lyena
Samnder Dar Samnder
Ja key tum Katroon ko ginlyna
Kisi Shab beth Kar ginna Tum Sitary
Orr Meri Jan Tum...
har ik jangal main Pairoon (tree) Par..
Sajey Patoon ko gin Lye Na
Jama Karlyna phir tum aik jaga Par
Rait key Zaroon ko Orr
Pani Key Katroon Ko
Sitary Bhi Mila Ley na
WoH Paty Bhi Saja Ley na
Magar Meri Mohabat sey
YEH SAB KUCH KAM HI NIKLEY GA !.....


very nice :D
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2005, 08:59:10 AM »
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MAWAZNA !...........

Har ik Sehra main bikhry
Rait k Zaroon ko gin lyena
Samnder Dar Samnder
Ja key tum Katroon ko ginlyna
Kisi Shab beth Kar ginna Tum Sitary
Orr Meri Jan Tum...
har ik jangal main Pairoon (tree) Par..
Sajey Patoon ko gin Lye Na
Jama Karlyna phir tum aik jaga Par
Rait key Zaroon ko Orr
Pani Key Katroon Ko
Sitary Bhi Mila Ley na
WoH Paty Bhi Saja Ley na
Magar Meri Mohabat sey
YEH SAB KUCH KAM HI NIKLEY GA !.....


very nice :D


THNK U ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2005, 09:24:49 AM »
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very nice sadii.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2005, 10:00:03 AM »
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very nice sadii.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Usual Smile....

RAT KA NASAHA HA !
JO ANKH MA BHARA HA
DIN HO YA RAT HO
BAS IK TERI BAT HO
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2005, 02:11:09 PM »
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GHAIRON KI BAT SUN K MUSKURAYA NA KARO
YUNHI BAT BAT PAY DUSHMANON KO HANSHA YA NA KARO
MAIN TO SEH LONGA AIN SAB BATON KO
SHOKHE SHOLON SY APNY CHAHERY KO JAYALA NA KARO
AKEYLY MAIN SOCHNA KISI KO YAD  KARKEY TUM
YUNHI JAHTLEY SY CHAHRY SEY ZULFAIN HATA YA NA KARO
KABHI TO TUM KO YAD EY GI MAZHAR KI
YUN HI HAR WAQT MUJHY SATAYA NA KARO
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2005, 02:18:13 PM »
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Bohat khoob SadiQa...........................
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2005, 05:06:09 PM »
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GHAIRON KI BAT SUN K MUSKURAYA NA KARO
YUNHI BAT BAT PAY DUSHMANON KO HANSHA YA NA KARO
MAIN TO SEH LONGA AIN SAB BATON KO
SHOKHE SHOLON SY APNY CHAHERY KO JAYALA NA KARO
AKEYLY MAIN SOCHNA KISI KO YAD  KARKEY TUM
YUNHI JAHTLEY SY CHAHRY SEY ZULFAIN HATA YA NA KARO
KABHI TO TUM KO YAD EY GI MAZHAR KI
YUN HI HAR WAQT MUJHY SATAYA NA KARO


very  nice  work  Sadiqa................  bahot  accha  aap  ne  likha.....
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2005, 05:11:44 PM »
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GHAIRON KI BAT SUN K MUSKURAYA NA KARO
YUNHI BAT BAT PAY DUSHMANON KO HANSHA YA NA KARO
MAIN TO SEH LONGA AIN SAB BATON KO
SHOKHE SHOLON SY APNY CHAHERY KO JAYALA NA KARO
AKEYLY MAIN SOCHNA KISI KO YAD  KARKEY TUM
YUNHI JAHTLEY SY CHAHRY SEY ZULFAIN HATA YA NA KARO
KABHI TO TUM KO YAD EY GI MAZHAR KI
YUN HI HAR WAQT MUJHY SATAYA NA KARO


very  nice  work  Sadiqa................  bahot  accha  aap  ne  likha.....


Shab key Pichey Pehar tak
Main LAita Raha HICKIYAN
or phir SO gaey TUM !....
(wasee)
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