MAZA NA MAYE KE PIYAALON MEIN DOOB KAR PAAYA .................. HASAN

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Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya


Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


..........................
Unqa = Vanished ; jamaalon = beauties / qualities ; Sukoot e shab =
Raat ki khamoshi ; Maqsad = prpose ; takhleeq= creation ; kaaynaat=
universe ; hawaalon = references
...........................


मज़ा  न  मय  के  पियालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया
जो  उस  हसीं  के  ख़यालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया


वफ़ा , ख़ुलूस , मोहब्बत   हैं  आज  क्यूँ  उनक़ा
जवाब   इन   ही   सवालों   में  डूब  कर  पाया


जलाल , रह्म - ओ - करम , आज़माइशें , इन'आम
ख़ुदा  को  उस  के  जमालो   में  डूब  कर  पाया


सुकूत - ए - शब  ने , न शबनम , न चांदनी ने दिया
सुकूं   जो  चाँद  के   हालों   में   डूब  कर  पाया


जवाब - ए - मक़सद - ए - तख़लीक़ - ए - कायनात 'हसन'
क़ुरान   के   पाक   हवालों   में   डूब   कर   पाया

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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2013, 12:45:48 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob hasan bhaijaan
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2013, 12:46:50 AM »
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Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya


Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya



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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2013, 12:58:11 AM »
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waah waah, Hasan Sahab bahut khoob ...Dheron Daad...
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2013, 01:02:10 AM »
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Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya

Kya baat hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya

Waaaaaah.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

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Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

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Waaaaaaaaah Hasan ji... kitni khoobsurat kalaam se bazm ko nawaza hai aapne... tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin... dil se hazaron daad qubool kijiye.. rau due raha kal doongi...
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2013, 01:06:36 AM »
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Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya


Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


..........................
Unqa = Vanished ; jamaalon = beauties / qualities ; Sukoot e shab =
Raat ki khamoshi ; Maqsad = prpose ; takhleeq= creation ; kaaynaat=
universe ; hawaalon = references
...........................


मज़ा  न  मय  के  पियालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया
जो  उस  हसीं  के  ख़यालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया


वफ़ा , ख़ुलूस , मोहब्बत   हैं  आज  क्यूँ  उनक़ा
जवाब   इन   ही   सवालों   में  डूब  कर  पाया


जलाल , रह्म - ओ - करम , आज़माइशें , इन'आम
ख़ुदा  को  उस  के  जमालो   में  डूब  कर  पाया


सुकूत - ए - शब  ने , न शबनम , न चांदनी ने दिया
सुकूं   जो  चाँद  के   हालों   में   डूब  कर  पाया


जवाब - ए - मक़सद - ए - तख़लीक़ - ए - कायनात 'हसन'
क़ुरान   के   पाक   हवालों   में   डूब   कर   पाया


matle se leker maqte tak
umda kalaam hi nazar aya.

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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2013, 01:20:31 AM »
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ग़ज़ल में आपकी मतले से मक़ता तक साहिब,
बहुत ही उम्दा ख्यालों में डूबता पाया.

वाह,वाह हसन सर,बहुत ही उम्दा ग़ज़ल कही है आपने.
इस खूबसूरत ग़ज़ल के लिये दिली मुबारकबाद कबूल कीजिये.
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Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya


Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


..........................
Unqa = Vanished ; jamaalon = beauties / qualities ; Sukoot e shab =
Raat ki khamoshi ; Maqsad = prpose ; takhleeq= creation ; kaaynaat=
universe ; hawaalon = references
...........................


मज़ा  न  मय  के  पियालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया
जो  उस  हसीं  के  ख़यालों  में  डूब  कर  पाया


वफ़ा , ख़ुलूस , मोहब्बत   हैं  आज  क्यूँ  उनक़ा
जवाब   इन   ही   सवालों   में  डूब  कर  पाया


जलाल , रह्म - ओ - करम , आज़माइशें , इन'आम
ख़ुदा  को  उस  के  जमालो   में  डूब  कर  पाया


सुकूत - ए - शब  ने , न शबनम , न चांदनी ने दिया
सुकूं   जो  चाँद  के   हालों   में   डूब  कर  पाया


जवाब - ए - मक़सद - ए - तख़लीक़ - ए - कायनात 'हसन'
क़ुरान   के   पाक   हवालों   में   डूब   कर   पाया




excelleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeent ,sir
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Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Aadaab Sir
jab aise kalaam padhta hun to sochne par mazboor ho jaata hun.
darta hun kaheen sab kuch taaliyon men na kho jaaye.
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वाह.....हसन जी....बहुत खूब....क्या बात है.....ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....
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subhanAllah behad khooob kalam raha, dili daad khubool ho...
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waah waah Hasan sir bahut umda, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya

Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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Laajawab..kamaal ke aashar rahe..

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