Mera mehboob aisa hoga.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 26, 2009, 08:41:23 AM
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Ek tasav_ur pesh karne ki koshish ki hain apne mehboob ki......Ghayel ka yeh tasav_ur kaisa laga zarur batana

Woh dhad_kano ka raag hogi
Woh har dil ka sazz hogi
Woh nadiya ki dhaar hogi
Woh jharno ka pehla pyaar hogi
Subah ki hogi usme ang_daieeya
Shaam ki hogi usme rangee_niya
Uska aasoo mano koi pavitra jal hoga
Woh hasegi jaha waha pooja ka sthal hoga
Woh madira ka pyaala hogi
Woh din ka ujaala hogi
Rishi ki tapasya hogi uske liye
Bhakto ki sadhna hogi uske liye
Ganga ke jal bhati jiska man pavitra hoga
Swarg ki apsarao se bhi sundar jiska tan hoga
Zulfe jiski sheetal chahya hogi
Mujh sang woh yu rahegi mano mera saaya hogi
Uske gulabi hoth mano amrut ke pyaale ho
Jab woh mere ghar aaye to roshan aagan galiyare ho
Bato me uski sadgi hogi
Aakho me masoom narazgi hogi
Jise dekh main apni sudh budh kho du
Jiske bin jeene ke khayal se hi ro du
Woh ghalib ke sher me hogi
Woh meera ke geet me hogi
Woh duniya ki har shay me hogi
Wahi sangeet me hogi
Jise dekh to bahar bhi sharma jaye
Woh agar chu le to path_thar bhi heera ho jaye
Tanhaiee me woh mile to yu lage mano chand sitaro ki baraat aayee ho
Aur woh jab mujhse door ho to yu lage mano jeevan ke har pehlu me khamoshi chaiee ho
Woh har pal mujhse baat karegi
Main jis haal me rahu woh mere sath rahegi
Woh meri kamnaa hogi woh meri aaradhna hogi
Woh mere kan kan me hogi woh meri sadhna hogi
Woh mere jeevan ka sahara hogi
Main toofan me gheera hu woh mera kinara hogi
Apni adao se woh mujhe rijhayegi
Main agar rooth jaoo to woh muje manaygi
Mere ghar me woh yu rahegi mano mehal me dasi rehti hain
Har gam har khushi sar jhukaye sehti hain
Har pal uske sang mere mata pita ka aashirwaad hoga
Uski pavitra seva me mamta ka swad hoga
Main manta hu ab aisa mehboob milta nahi
Phool khilte hain par mere mehboob jaisa phool khilta nahi
Par kya pata kisi din kisi modh par
Mera mehboob milega mujhe har bandishe tod kar
Aakho me aasoo GHAYEL ki aa jayege
Bhool ke sari duniya ek duje me hum sama jayege
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2009, 09:07:20 AM »
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ghayel ji mein dua karungi bhagwaan se ki jaisi aapne khwahish ki hai waisi ki koi jeevan sangini aapko jald mil jaaye jiski hasi aapke jeevan mei khilkhilaye   Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2009, 10:54:02 AM »
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arey wah mere jaan kya shayari likha aap ne,tere mahboob aisa hoga nahi aisa
hi hai jo aap se bahut pyar karti hai.
very nice,mindblowing,luv u,
madhu
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2009, 11:11:46 AM »
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wah GHAYEL

tuney toh sach meh ghayel kar dia ... kya baat hai dost

jasbir singh
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karndhar
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2009, 11:37:10 AM »
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Wah Ghayal Ji,
Hum to Ghayal ki Ghaatak shayri se Ghayal ho gaye !
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2009, 12:04:58 PM »
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wah ghayel ji kiya baat hay apki shyri kay but yay per kay mehboob kuch ziada hi ghoror kernay lagay tub  hhahahah khyal rakhiyay ga .
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2009, 07:24:43 AM »
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ghayel ji mein dua karungi bhagwaan se ki jaisi aapne khwahish ki hai waisi ki koi jeevan sangini aapko jald mil jaaye jiski hasi aapke jeevan mei khilkhilaye   Usual Smile

Bohat shukriyaan Bhavna aur dua ke liye bhi bohat bohat shukriyaaaaaaaa... NaNaNa
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 06:13:23 AM »
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Kisi ke tasavur me rahne lagi hai
 use bhi iski khabar hogi,
 akele nahi ho intezaar ke is safar me
kahin na kahin wo bhi tumhari muntazir hogi

Superb creation dear....... hope tumhe tumhari tasavur wali mehbuba jald se jald mile
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 06:26:50 AM »
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Bahut khoob  Applause

sahi mein ghayal kiya aapne ...Keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2009, 07:11:57 AM »
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arey wah mere jaan kya shayari likha aap ne,tere mahboob aisa hoga nahi aisa
hi hai jo aap se bahut pyar karti hai.
very nice,mindblowing,luv u,
madhu

Apni is jaan ko yuhi pyaar deti raho main yuhi likhta rahuga....love u too  Winking
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2009, 12:35:19 PM »
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wah GHAYEL

tuney toh sach meh ghayel kar dia ... kya baat hai dost

jasbir singh

Arey yaar koi baat nahi hain bas tumhari mohabbat dekh dekh ke main bhi thoda Romantic ho jata hu kabhi kabhi  DOH aur pasand karne ke liye shukriyaan Yaara
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«Reply #11 on: March 31, 2009, 07:38:43 AM »
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Wah Ghayal Ji,
Hum to Ghayal ki Ghaatak shayri se Ghayal ho gaye !

Arey yeh to tumhari mohabbat hain dost jo khushi khushi Ghayel ho jate ho, Thank u very much for giving time to my work.
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«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2009, 07:59:53 AM »
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Beautifull creation bohat khoob Sajid ji...
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«Reply #13 on: March 31, 2009, 08:32:13 AM »
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Very nice work sajid ji!!!

waise sab dua kar rahe hai apko apki mehbooba miljaye  DOH
Kuch kahenge nahi  NaNaNa
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«Reply #14 on: March 31, 2009, 08:47:28 AM »
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wah ghayel ji kiya baat hay apki shyri kay but yay per kay mehboob kuch ziada hi ghoror kernay lagay tub  hhahahah khyal rakhiyay ga .

Aji unka gurur bhi unki tarah haseen hogaa, waise tumhe kahi mile to mera salam zarur kehna....
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