Mere Piya JI

by deepika_divya on March 30, 2009, 03:50:41 PM
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CHUP CHUP KE DEKHO JI,
DEKHO HONE LAGI RAAT HAI
MEINE KAHA PIYA JI SE
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

DEKHO TUM SUNO NA JI
YUN NA MUJHE CHEDA KARO
LEKE MUJHE YUN BAHON MEIN
BAHIYAN TUM NA MODA KARO

CHU KAR MERE LABO KO
UNHONE MERA BOLNA RUKWA DIYA
MEINE JOR SE CHILLA KAR
KAHA JI PIYA TUMNE YEA KYA KIYA

RUTT KAR MAINE UNNSE JARA
JA BEITI MEIN PANGHAT PE JAKE
AAYE PIYA CHUP CHUP KAR
BIGO DIYA MUJHE PANGHAT SE PANI LAKE

KYA KARU BADE HI SAITAN HAI
KALAI MODE MERI ,KABI BALO SE KHELTE
MERE KAJAL KO KALI GHATA KEHTE HAI
TAKHTE NAHI HAI MUJHE CHEDTE CHEDTE

PAR JAB YEA RUTT JATE HAI
TAK JAATI HUN MEIN MANATE MANTE
KAHUN JAB MEIN INHE 'I LOVE U'
MAAN B JAATEIN HAI HASTE GAATE

AISE HAI MERE PIYA JI
KARTE HAI MUJHE BEHAD PYAAR
MERI CHOTI SEI MUSKARAHAT K LIYE BHI
HO JAATE HAI KARNE KO JAAN VAAR




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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2009, 03:52:04 PM »
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Awwww!!!

cho chweeeeeeeeeeeetttt...

Loved each and every line of this poem...

its really cute... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2009, 07:02:03 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sophi ji parr kar apki yah shayri
dil humara kahe... kaya baat hai , kaya baat hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 07:08:16 PM »
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Sophi apne bahoot he pyar bhare shabdo se bade he dil se yah kavita likhi hai.. magar jab ise parra to her pehra kuch alag rythem main khatam hone ki wajah se feelings atakti ja rahi thi... apke her pehre ke baad ek line jorr kar apki first pahre ki last line jorri hai.. Agar mere is tarah karne se apko boora lage to feel free to delete my post!! 

CHUP CHUP KE DEKHO JI,
DEKHO HONE LAGI RAAT HAI
MEINE KAHA PIYA JI SE
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

DEKHO TUM SUNO NA JI
YUN NA MUJHE CHEDA KARO
LEKE MUJHE YUN BAHON MEIN
BAHIYAN TUM NA MODA KARO
Ishaq ki agan main kaise yah zazbaat hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI


CHU KAR MERE LABO KO
UNHONE MERA BOLNA RUKWA DIYA
MEINE JOR SE CHILLA KAR
KAHA JI PIYA TUMNE YEA KYA KIYA
Hans kar kahne lage, yah to abhi shuruwaat hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

RUTT KAR MAINE UNNSE JARA
JA BEITI MEIN PANGHAT PE JAKE
AAYE PIYA CHUP CHUP KAR
BIGO DIYA MUJHE PANGHAT SE PANI LAKE
Bheegte lubo ki kapkaphat ko bhi kaha araam hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

KYA KARU BADE HI SAITAN HAI
KALAI MODE MERI ,KABI BALO SE KHELTE
MERE KAJAL KO KALI GHATA KEHTE HAI
TAKHTE NAHI HAI MUJHE CHEDTE CHEDTE
Unki issi adao per, jaan meri nissar hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

PAR JAB YEA RUTT JATE HAI
TAK JAATI HUN MEIN MANATE MANTE
KAHUN JAB MEIN INHE 'I LOVE U'
MAAN B JAATEIN HAI HASTE GAATE
Hansi khushi se beet jaati her mulakaat hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

AISE HAI MERE PIYA JI
KARTE HAI MUJHE BEHAD PYAAR
MERI CHOTI SEI MUSKARAHAT K LIYE BHI
HO JAATE HAI KARNE KO JAAN VAAR
Aise mere sajaan per, meri jaan bhi qurbaan hai
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2009, 04:15:06 AM »
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Thanks Anjel & thank you Pooja Di.For ur sweet appriciating  words.

I was in mood to write seeing the beutiful view from the train the way Going to Shirdi . So jaisa Dil mea aaya wisa likti chali gai..... Usual Smile

Lines added by u is realy Nice.
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2009, 04:20:28 AM »
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Beautiful work Sophie.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2009, 04:53:53 AM »
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Bohat khoob Sophi.. Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2009, 05:00:38 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 30, 2009, 03:50:41 PM
CHUP CHUP KE DEKHO JI,
DEKHO HONE LAGI RAAT HAI
MEINE KAHA PIYA JI SE
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

DEKHO TUM SUNO NA JI
YUN NA MUJHE CHEDA KARO
LEKE MUJHE YUN BAHON MEIN
BAHIYAN TUM NA MODA KARO

CHU KAR MERE LABO KO
UNHONE MERA BOLNA RUKWA DIYA
MEINE JOR SE CHILLA KAR
KAHA JI PIYA TUMNE YEA KYA KIYA

RUTT KAR MAINE UNNSE JARA
JA BEITI MEIN PANGHAT PE JAKE
AAYE PIYA CHUP CHUP KAR
BIGO DIYA MUJHE PANGHAT SE PANI LAKE

KYA KARU BADE HI SAITAN HAI
KALAI MODE MERI ,KABI BALO SE KHELTE
MERE KAJAL KO KALI GHATA KEHTE HAI
TAKHTE NAHI HAI MUJHE CHEDTE CHEDTE

PAR JAB YEA RUTT JATE HAI
TAK JAATI HUN MEIN MANATE MANTE
KAHUN JAB MEIN INHE 'I LOVE U'
MAAN B JAATEIN HAI HASTE GAATE

AISE HAI MERE PIYA JI
KARTE HAI MUJHE BEHAD PYAAR
MERI CHOTI SEI MUSKARAHAT K LIYE BHI
HO JAATE HAI KARNE KO JAAN VAAR






Wow..It's so Romantic,i have no words to say..I m Speechless..Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..
Beautiful Work By you. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2009, 05:22:09 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on March 31, 2009, 04:53:53 AM
Bohat khoob Sophi.. Applause

Thanks Honey Di
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2009, 05:22:57 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 31, 2009, 04:20:28 AM
Beautiful work Sophie.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you Sajid ji !
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2009, 05:25:58 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 31, 2009, 05:00:38 AM
Wow..It's so Romantic,i have no words to say..I m Speechless..Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..
Beautiful Work By you. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank u so  much Khwaish ji !
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2009, 11:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 30, 2009, 03:50:41 PM
CHUP CHUP KE DEKHO JI,
DEKHO HONE LAGI RAAT HAI
MEINE KAHA PIYA JI SE
DEKHO HONE LAGI BARSAAT HAI

DEKHO TUM SUNO NA JI
YUN NA MUJHE CHEDA KARO
LEKE MUJHE YUN BAHON MEIN
BAHIYAN TUM NA MODA KARO

CHU KAR MERE LABO KO
UNHONE MERA BOLNA RUKWA DIYA
MEINE JOR SE CHILLA KAR
KAHA JI PIYA TUMNE YEA KYA KIYA

RUTT KAR MAINE UNNSE JARA
JA BEITI MEIN PANGHAT PE JAKE
AAYE PIYA CHUP CHUP KAR
BIGO DIYA MUJHE PANGHAT SE PANI LAKE

KYA KARU BADE HI SAITAN HAI
KALAI MODE MERI ,KABI BALO SE KHELTE
MERE KAJAL KO KALI GHATA KEHTE HAI
TAKHTE NAHI HAI MUJHE CHEDTE CHEDTE

PAR JAB YEA RUTT JATE HAI
TAK JAATI HUN MEIN MANATE MANTE
KAHUN JAB MEIN INHE 'I LOVE U'
MAAN B JAATEIN HAI HASTE GAATE

AISE HAI MERE PIYA JI
KARTE HAI MUJHE BEHAD PYAAR
MERI CHOTI SEI MUSKARAHAT K LIYE BHI
HO JAATE HAI KARNE KO JAAN VAAR






WoW Sophi....So beautiful and romantic...so much full of love.....Bohot bohot khoob dear Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2009, 11:51:24 AM »
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Pooja..your addition has increased the beauty of Sophi's work..
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2009, 11:53:26 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 01, 2009, 11:49:07 AM
WoW Sophi....So beautiful and romantic...so much full of love.....Bohot bohot khoob dear Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank U so So much Talat Di
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2009, 11:54:16 AM »
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waaah... Sophi dear...Very Romantic... love9
Pooja di... mast laga padkar....  Usual Smile
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