Meri Mahbooba bhi alag hi kashmakash me rahti hai

by ParwaaZ on August 05, 2010, 12:12:32 AM
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Meri mehbooba bhi alag hi kashmaksh meiN rahti hai
Jab bhi miti hai mujh se dosti ki duhaai deti hai

Besakhta mere kadam chal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Imaan wala huN maiN mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

MaiN Jab hota huN tanhaai ke ghanghor andehroN meiN
Kisi ki yaadeN aakar meri aankhoN ko binaai deti hai

Wa rastaH iqtiyaar kar le ab tu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
Zabt e meyaar se meri jaan mujhe rihaaii deti hai




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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 02:12:02 PM »
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bahut khoob Parwaaz ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 02:25:35 PM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz ji..
yuhi likhte rahiye..

kuchh me bhi kahun---

suna he khuda ke chahne wale mohabbat me imaan nahi dete
dil de diya to kya hua sahab toot bhi jayega to jaan nahi dete
mere shabda samajhne wale janege 'Abhi' meri tadap kya he
khuda to kaaynat bhi dede maang lu to meri mohabbat ko anjaam kyu nahi dete~


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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 08:08:11 PM »
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Bahut Khub Janaab Parwaaz Saheb...

Khush Rahiye...

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Aage apna saath banaye rakhiye........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 08:11:04 PM »
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bht khubbbb parwaz saheb.....
kuch alag si nazm hai ye aapki....
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 01:39:35 AM »
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Meri mehbooba bhi alag hi kashmaksh meiN rahti hai
Jab bhi miti hai mujh se dosti ki duhaai deti hai

Besakhta mere kadam chal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Imaan wala huN maiN mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

MaiN Jab hota huN tanhaai ke ghanghor andehroN meiN
Kisi ki yaadeN aakar meri aankhoN ko binaai deti hai

Wa rastaH iqtiyaar kar le ab tu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
Zabt e meyaar se meri jaan mujhe rihaaii deti hai



Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Kahi Hai Parwaaz Ji,.

Daad Kabool karein, Sab Ashaar Bohat Achche the

but This I liked Most


Besakhta mere kadam chal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Imaan wala huN maiN mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 09:50:02 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Parwaaz Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khooooooob.. Jazzbaaton Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati Se Utaara hai.. Ek Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Rahi Aapki.. Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 07:31:37 AM »
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Meri mehbooba bhi alag hi kashmaksh meiN rahti hai
Jab bhi miti hai mujh se dosti ki duhaai deti hai

Besakhta mere kadam chal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Imaan wala huN maiN mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

MaiN Jab hota huN tanhaai ke ghanghor andehroN meiN
Kisi ki yaadeN aakar meri aankhoN ko binaai deti hai

Wa rastaH iqtiyaar kar le ab tu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
Zabt e meyaar se meri jaan mujhe rihaaii deti hai






Bahut khoob Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 07:46:11 AM »
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Truly touching lyns. Bahut khub... =]
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 01:03:31 PM »
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bahut khoob Parwaaz ji...!!!


Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.... Usual Smile
aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...

aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye
Shaad O aabaad rahiye....

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2012, 01:35:34 PM »
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wah parwaz sahab boht khub
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2013, 01:07:06 AM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz ji..
yuhi likhte rahiye..

kuchh me bhi kahun---

suna he khuda ke chahne wale mohabbat me imaan nahi dete
dil de diya to kya hua sahab toot bhi jayega to jaan nahi dete
mere shabda samajhne wale janege 'Abhi' meri tadap kya he
khuda to kaaynat bhi dede maang lu to meri mohabbat ko anjaam kyu nahi dete~




Abhi Jee Aadaab..>!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... Tareef ke liye aapke tah e dil se shukraguzaar haiN... Usual Smile


aapne bhi khoob kahaa hai daad daad daad...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2013, 01:08:45 AM »
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bht khubbbb parwaz saheb.....
kuch alag si nazm hai ye aapki....


Kasak Jee Aadaab..!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee ... is adna si kalaam ko padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye hum aapke tah e dil se shukra guzaar hai...


Aage bhi apnaa saath banaye rakhiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2013, 01:11:59 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Kahi Hai Parwaaz Ji,.

Daad Kabool karein, Sab Ashaar Bohat Achche the

but This I liked Most


Besakhta mere kadam chal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Imaan wala huN maiN mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai


Azeem Sahaab Aadaab...!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.... Tareef Wa houNsla afzai ke liye tah e dil se mashkoor O mamnoon hai... Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2013, 01:17:06 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Parwaaz Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khooooooob.. Jazzbaaton Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati Se Utaara hai.. Ek Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Rahi Aapki.. Applause Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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Vikas Bhai Aadaab...!


Kya baat hai janab kahaaN hai aajkal aap .. ?
Aapke toH darshan hi durlab ho gaye haiN...

Khair bahut bahut shukriyaa janab is adna si kalaam ko pasaNd karne aur tareef karne keliye... Usual Smile

Aage bhi saath banaye rakhiye... bazm meiN hazari lagate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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