Merri ek hi tou mhbt hai...Geet...

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Merra ek sapna hai ki main hamesha tumhe
apni ankho mein basa k rakhu,

merri ek tamanna hai ki main hamesha tumhe
apne saamne bitha k rakhu,

merri ek dua hai ki main hamesha tumhe
apna bana k rakhu,

merri ek hsrat hai ki main hamesha tumhare
labo ki muskan saja k rakhu,

merri ek chahat hai ki main hamesha tumhe
apni baaho mein chhupa k rakhu,

merri ek hi zindgi hai jise main hamesha tumhare
naam se saja k rakhu,

merri ye jo dhdkane hai unhe main hamesha tumhare
dil mein sama k rakhu,

merri ek hi tou mhbt hai gar ho merre bas mein..
tou apne mehbub ko har nazar se bacha k rakhu.........
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2011, 07:19:38 PM »
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[wah wah Geet ji ek ek karke bahut saari tamannayen likh di achha kiya.likha bahut khoob hai samajhdari se ..........
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2011, 07:24:51 PM »
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[wah wah Geet ji ek ek karke bahut saari tamannayen likh di achha kiya.likha bahut khoob hai samajhdari se ..........
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Bahut shukriya suresh ji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2011, 07:51:26 PM »
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Akhri line bahaut khoob rahi..
Waise toh pura kalam hi acha hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2011, 07:54:41 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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Akhri line bahaut khoob rahi..
Waise toh pura kalam hi acha hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
shukriya rahim.
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2011, 07:56:21 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji

Shukriya rishi ji..
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2011, 10:36:18 PM »
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khayal aur tamanaye ache hain…
good…
lekin ye to har mohbt karne wale dil ki tamanaye hain…
aur haan asli mohbt to sirf aur sirf ek hi hoti hai sabhi ki…
 
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2011, 01:59:30 PM »
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bahut khub geetji... sundar...
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2011, 06:53:26 PM »
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bht bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2011, 07:25:49 PM »
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mast poem Geet-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Soch tou mera bhee hai sakhee tujh se milta-julta
Bas farq yahi hai k Sapne mere ek nahi Anek hain
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2011, 08:29:31 AM »
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khayal aur tamanaye ache hain…
good…
lekin ye to har mohbt karne wale dil ki tamanaye hain…
aur haan asli mohbt to sirf aur sirf ek hi hoti hai sabhi ki…
 

Ji sach kaha apne bahut shukriya merri kavita ko apna waqt dene k liye...
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2011, 08:30:25 AM »
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Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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bahut khub geetji... sundar...

Bahut shukriya manju mann ji..
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bht bht khoob geet ji...
Shukriya priya ji...
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