Mhbt k liye jiti hu...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 09, 2011, 05:55:20 PM
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Mhbt k liye jiti hu per marna chahti hu terri baho mein,
taa umar kante hi mile mujhe ab phool chahiye raho mein,

kasak ab phir jo uthne lagi hai use thamne nhi dena hai,
har galati ko sudharna chahti hu aake terri panaho mein,

haasil karni hai terri mhbt kisi bhi kimat per,
apna chehra dekhna hai hamesha terri nigaho mein,

ab chahiye har din terri muskurahat ka,
aur zindgi ka har pal terri duao mein,

koi majburi nhi hogi ab hamare darmiya,
jism mein lahu k sang merra ishq bahega tujhe chhuti in hawao mein.........


Love for u is more than beats in my heart...
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 04:14:16 AM »
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wah wah geet bahut umda bahut khub

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 07:03:02 AM »
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nahot khub geet ji...........

harbar ki tarah dil ko touch karne wali poetry likhi he apne.....

bahot aacha laga padkar...keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 07:22:20 AM »
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PYAAR BHARA YE TERA NAGMAA SAKHEE DIL KO CHHU GAYAA..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

lahu k sang sang merra ishq bahega tujhe chhuti in hawao mein.........LINE JAMI NAHI DI......lahu kyu ?
Hawaao k sang bahega merra ishq ab chhuyega tujhe har raah me.....



Mhbt k liye jiti hu per marna chahti hu terri baho mein,
taa umar kante hi mile mujhe ab phool chahiye raho mein,

kasak ab phir jo uthne lagi hai use thamne nhi dena hai,
har galati ko sudharna chahti hu aake terri panaho mein,

haasil karni hai terri mhbt kisi bhi kimat per,
apna chehra dekhna hai hamesha terri nigaho mein,

ab chahiye har din terri muskurahat ka,
aur zindgi ka har pal terri duao mein,

koi majburi nhi hogi ab hamare darmiya,
lahu k sang sang merra ishq bahega tujhe chhuti in hawao mein.........


Love for u is more than beats in my heart...
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 07:55:45 AM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya manju mann ji,utkarsh ji , koyal,koyal sweetu merre jism lahu beheta hai waise hi merra ishq use chhuti har hawa mein bhi bahega yahi kehna chaha hai maine apni is line mein...i think i shud have added jism too...
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2011, 08:47:33 AM »
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Ya thats a must then only it becomes simmly......

Jism mai behta lahu jaise bahega ishq mera tujhe chhuti hawaao mai....


Bahut bahut shurkiya manju mann ji,utkarsh ji , koyal,koyal sweetu merre jism lahu beheta hai waise hi merra ishq use chhuti har hawa mein bhi bahega yahi kehna chaha hai maine apni is line mein...i think i shud have added jism too...
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2011, 09:10:04 AM »
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Ya thats a must then only it becomes simmly......

Jism mai behta lahu jaise bahega ishq mera tujhe chhuti hawaao mai....


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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2011, 10:23:34 AM »
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mastttttt mast.
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2011, 10:47:36 AM »
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bahut achha likha hai aapne ........aapki dua kabool ho
phool hi phool gire......aapki raah meiN
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2011, 01:59:31 PM »
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BAhut Khub Geet Ji Nice Once Again
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2011, 04:39:44 PM »
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Shukriya nirala ji,tamanna ji aur rishi ji..tamanna ji itni pyari dua k liye shukriya ji khuda apko khush rakhe..ameen...
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2011, 05:59:58 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2011, 03:05:44 PM »
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is shayri ko to OSCAR de dena chahiye .Its so simple and at the same time very very meaningful   Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2011, 03:11:01 PM »
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is shayri ko to OSCAR de dena chahiye .Its so simple and at the same time very very meaningful   Applause Applause Applause


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Thnx for understanding...
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2011, 03:23:05 PM »
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