mohabbat ki barsaat........sheba

by Sheba on April 17, 2012, 04:50:04 PM
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                             baad  muddat  ke  jo  unse  mulaaqaat hui..!
                             rahe khamosh labb, ankho.N se barsaat hui..!

                             younn to kai paighaam tajalliyo.N ke aate rahe..,
                             saath  unke hi buss  musarrat  meri  raat  hui..,

                             jhoom uthi fizaa bhi dekh mere mehboob ko..,
                             muskurayaa qamar aur kahkasho.N ki baraat hui..,

                             khushi uss  pal ne diya mujhe fatah sab pe..,
                             saare  gile-shiqwo.N  ki  phir  maat  hui..,

                            hua qissa tamaam sheba jalne-jalaane ka abb..!
                             raat bhar shamaa ki parwaane se baat hui...!
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2012, 05:00:45 PM »
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bahut khoob sheba ji.. Maqta ghajab ka hai. Vaise sabhi ashaar behaf khoob hai.. Vaah vaaah
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 05:07:35 PM »
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awesome sheba.....bahut bahut khoob..badiya......Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2012, 05:08:57 PM »
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boht khub sheba ji kamal ka likhti hain ap
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2012, 05:15:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob sheba jee
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2012, 06:24:49 PM »
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bahut khub shebaji...makta aur bhi lajawaab
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2012, 06:27:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Bahot khoob Shebaji! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2012, 06:33:53 PM »
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Bahut  hi  khubsurat  ghazal  hai . Har  sher  haseen  hai
Khas taur  se  maqta .  Aap  ki  tarah  khubsurat  tabsire  
to  nahin  kar  sakta  , phir  bhi  Maqta  parh  kar  samajh  
nahi  aa   raha  hai  ki  parwaane  ki  qismat  per  rashk  
karoon  ya  hasad . Dheron  daad  hazir  hai .
                              Khair  andesh , Hasan
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2012, 06:35:32 PM »
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waah waah kyaa haseen mulaakaat hui behtreen ghazal pesh kee ab aap jaisee khoobsoorat daad to hamaare pass naheen hain to bas samjhiye daad daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2012, 09:14:41 PM »
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toooo goood .... wah wah wah .... i was just recalling the entire event in your poem ... so beautifully written ... wah wah

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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2012, 10:00:06 PM »
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Wah wah wah! Behad haseen ghazal. Bilkul lajawaab, shaandar, ghazab.
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2012, 12:21:57 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2012, 12:50:32 AM »
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                             baad  muddat  ke  jo  unse  mulaaqaat hui..!
                             rahe khamosh labb, ankho.N se barsaat hui..!

                             younn to kai paighaam tajalliyo.N ke aate rahe..,
                             saath  unke hi buss  musarrat  meri  raat  hui..,

                             jhoom uthi fizaa bhi dekh mere mehboob ko..,
                             muskurayaa qamar aur kahkasho.N ki baraat hui..,

                             khushi uss  pal ne diya mujhe fatah sab pe..,
                             saare  gile-shiqwo.N  ki  phir  maat  hui..,

                            hua qissa tamaam sheba jalne-jalaane ka abb..!
                             raat bhar shamaa ki parwaane se baat hui...!

Nice poetry Sheba.........daadaulasad(Asghar)
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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2012, 02:54:26 AM »
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kya baat hai Sheba ji... khubsurat peshkash... !!!

Tere ek baar jalne me kayi baar jalaya humne khudko...
gar teri zid hai mit jaane ki to pehle mita de mujhko...!!!

Intezar !
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«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2012, 03:01:20 AM »
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wahwahwahwahwahwahwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....Asghar
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