Mohabbat

by klaskar on March 25, 2010, 09:23:17 AM
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Doston ye kavita maine apne pyaar k liye us waqt likha tha jab wo sirf meri dost thi. Main tab tak izhaar nahi kar paaya tha apne pyaar ka . Uske shahar jata tha aksar usse milne dost banke. Hamesha usse yahi kehta ki tum meri sabse achchi dost ho. Main har pal usse dur reh k usko yaad karta tha. Ghanto phone pe baatein karta tha par apne dil ki baat keh nahi paata tha. Aur izhaar karne k kuch din baad maine ye kavita usko padhwaya tha. Use bahut pasand aai thi ye kavita. Izhaaar se pehle bhi wo mere yaadon me rehti thi, izhaar k baad bhi wo yaadon me rahi, aur aaj bhi wo bas ek yaad banke reh gayi hai....

"Q k sabse pyaari yaadein tumhaari"....!!!


Kashish hai mohabbat, Junoon hai mohabbat,
Sach poochho to dil ka sukoon hai mohabbat,
Haseen bhi hai , nazneen bhi hai,
Mehekta sama, dilnasheen bhi hai,
Socho mat tum ki kya hai mohabbat,
Hamare shabdo me to bas khuda hai mohabbat...

Dost the tum, saathi the tum,
Sukh dukh k bhaagi the tum,
Gham the bahut aur khushiyaan the kam,
Par saath hote the to bas haste the hum...

Aansu tumhaare rula dete the,
Muskaan tumhaare hasa dete the,
Yaadein tumhaari aati thi jab,
Hum to bas muskura dete the....

Dil me mere khayal aata tha,
Pyar nahi hai ye mujhko pata tha,
Tumse milta baatein karta,
Par baaton me mere ikraar nahi tha...

Gujarte gaye din mahine saal,
Kya kehte tumse apne dil ka haal,
Subah shaam aur raat aur din,
Dil me aata bas tumhaara khayaal...

Dost meri tum sabse pyaari,
Baatein karti sabse nyaari,
Socha karta kabhi kabhi main,
Jaane kaisi hai tumse yaari...

Baatein kare to phool baraste hain,
Saath rahen to hum haste hain,
Jaane kaisa rishta hai tumse,
Baat na ho to hum taraste hain...

Milogi jaana jis din humse,
Ji bharke tumko dekhenge,
Dil me jo bhi baat hai mere,
Sach kehta hoon tumse keh denge,

Pyar k mithe bol bolke,
Tumko main madhosh kar dunga,
Rok saka na khud ko agar main,
Tumko baahon me bhar lunga...

Aitraaz tumhe na hoga uspe,
Mujhko yakeen hai apne pyaar pe,
Gale se lag jaana tum mere,
Agar yakeen ho apne pyaar pe,

Pyaar main dunga, laad main dunga,
Duniya ki saari khushiyaan main dunga,
Madhosh kar dene waale hothon ko,
Ek baar jaroor chumunga,

Yaar ho mere, dildaar ho mere,
Khwaabo me aate ho shaam sawere,
Gar ek baar tum gale laga lo,
Yaadon k sahare tumhaare ji lunga...

Saagar kitna gehra hai,
Usse gehri aakhen tumhaari,
Chaand kitna pyara hai,
Usse pyaari baatein tumhaari,

Koi aake poochhe humse,
Kya karte ho tanhaayi mein,
Yaad karte hain jaan ko apne,
Q ki sabse pyaari yaadein tumhaari...
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2010, 09:32:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji. Aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi jaanke humein bahut achcha laga. Kuch lines is kavita k upar maine abhi add kiye hain. Ek brief description. Padh lijiyega. Thanx again....!!!

waah waah Kapil ji,bahut hi nyara aur pyara likha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2010, 09:46:18 AM »
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Wah wah,Kapil ji kamaal kar diya aapne.bahut hi romantic and lovely creation,excellent,meri duaa hai aapke pyar aapko jaldi mill jaye.beautiful work Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2010, 10:00:53 AM »
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Thanx a lot Madhu ji... bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka... duwaon k liye shukriyaa.... hamara pyaar humein mila bhi tha aur humse juda bhi ho gaya ...

Anyways thanx  a lot once again for appreciationg my creation... !!!

Wah wah,Kapil ji kamaal kar diya aapne.bahut hi romantic and lovely creation,excellent,meri duaa hai aapke pyar aapko jaldi mill jaye.beautiful work Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2010, 10:04:26 AM »
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Bahut achhi kavita likhi hai Kapil ji. Badi khubsurti se apni yadon ko aapne is poem mein pesh kiya hai.
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2010, 10:07:58 AM »
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waah!!! waah!!! Kapil bhai, bahut hi sundar likha hai...hausla banaye rakhiye...

Mohabbat ye 'Adab' ki hai jo bas pahloo badalti hai,
Kabhi bahoon mein rahti hai kabhi aahon mein rahti hai..!!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2010, 10:26:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Riyaaz ji...bahut bahut shukriya ...!!!

Bahut achhi kavita likhi hai Kapil ji. Badi khubsurti se apni yadon ko aapne is poem mein pesh kiya hai.
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2010, 10:27:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Pandey ji...!!!

waah!!! waah!!! Kapil bhai, bahut hi sundar likha hai...hausla banaye rakhiye...

Mohabbat ye 'Adab' ki hai jo bas pahloo badalti hai,
Kabhi bahoon mein rahti hai kabhi aahon mein rahti hai..!!!

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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2010, 02:23:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause  Applause

Bohot hi pyaari nazm hai jiske ek ek lafz se mohabbat chalakti hai.....Bohot hi khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2010, 02:46:46 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka Talat ji... achcha laga janke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi...mere mohabbat bhare shabdo ko aapne samjha uske liye main aapka shukraguzaar hoon... bahut bahut shukriya ..!!!

Applause Applause  Applause

Bohot hi pyaari nazm hai jiske ek ek lafz se mohabbat chalakti hai.....Bohot hi khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2010, 12:35:14 PM »
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wah!wah! kya baat hai. bahut pyara 2 socha karte the aap.
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«Reply #11 on: March 26, 2010, 01:00:46 PM »
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Shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

wah!wah! kya baat hai. bahut pyara 2 socha karte the aap.
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«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2010, 07:24:16 PM »
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Hmm main kya bolun Kapil jee...Apne intro main hi rula dia...'yaad banke rehgaya'..bahaut khoob...Ab baat nazm ki toh itna kehna chahta hoon...main parrte gaya aur har kadi ke baad, i felt yeh best hai phir dusri phir teesri karte karte nazm puri hogayi...Bahaut acha likha hai...Har lavz behta gaya aur ek nadi bangayi... Applause Applause Applause Applause My salutes to u nazm aur bahaut bahaut dil se nikli duaein...tumhe woh miljaye...Jisse na mile wohi janta hai dard kitna hota hai... sad5
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2010, 12:44:49 AM »
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My God .......... its kinda of story...
Very well writtn..........

Really really Good!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Doston ye kavita maine apne pyaar k liye us waqt likha tha jab wo sirf meri dost thi. Main tab tak izhaar nahi kar paaya tha apne pyaar ka . Uske shahar jata tha aksar usse milne dost banke. Hamesha usse yahi kehta ki tum meri sabse achchi dost ho. Main har pal usse dur reh k usko yaad karta tha. Ghanto phone pe baatein karta tha par apne dil ki baat keh nahi paata tha. Aur izhaar karne k kuch din baad maine ye kavita usko padhwaya tha. Use bahut pasand aai thi ye kavita. Izhaaar se pehle bhi wo mere yaadon me rehti thi, izhaar k baad bhi wo yaadon me rahi, aur aaj bhi wo bas ek yaad banke reh gayi hai....

"Q k sabse pyaari yaadein tumhaari"....!!!


Kashish hai mohabbat, Junoon hai mohabbat,
Sach poochho to dil ka sukoon hai mohabbat,
Haseen bhi hai , nazneen bhi hai,
Mehekta sama, dilnasheen bhi hai,
Socho mat tum ki kya hai mohabbat,
Hamare shabdo me to bas khuda hai mohabbat...

Dost the tum, saathi the tum,
Sukh dukh k bhaagi the tum,
Gham the bahut aur khushiyaan the kam,
Par saath hote the to bas haste the hum...

Aansu tumhaare rula dete the,
Muskaan tumhaare hasa dete the,
Yaadein tumhaari aati thi jab,
Hum to bas muskura dete the....

Dil me mere khayal aata tha,
Pyar nahi hai ye mujhko pata tha,
Tumse milta baatein karta,
Par baaton me mere ikraar nahi tha...

Gujarte gaye din mahine saal,
Kya kehte tumse apne dil ka haal,
Subah shaam aur raat aur din,
Dil me aata bas tumhaara khayaal...

Dost meri tum sabse pyaari,
Baatein karti sabse nyaari,
Socha karta kabhi kabhi main,
Jaane kaisi hai tumse yaari...

Baatein kare to phool baraste hain,
Saath rahen to hum haste hain,
Jaane kaisa rishta hai tumse,
Baat na ho to hum taraste hain...

Milogi jaana jis din humse,
Ji bharke tumko dekhenge,
Dil me jo bhi baat hai mere,
Sach kehta hoon tumse keh denge,

Pyar k mithe bol bolke,
Tumko main madhosh kar dunga,
Rok saka na khud ko agar main,
Tumko baahon me bhar lunga...

Aitraaz tumhe na hoga uspe,
Mujhko yakeen hai apne pyaar pe,
Gale se lag jaana tum mere,
Agar yakeen ho apne pyaar pe,

Pyaar main dunga, laad main dunga,
Duniya ki saari khushiyaan main dunga,
Madhosh kar dene waale hothon ko,
Ek baar jaroor chumunga,

Yaar ho mere, dildaar ho mere,
Khwaabo me aate ho shaam sawere,
Gar ek baar tum gale laga lo,
Yaadon k sahare tumhaare ji lunga...

Saagar kitna gehra hai,
Usse gehri aakhen tumhaari,
Chaand kitna pyara hai,
Usse pyaari baatein tumhaari,

Koi aake poochhe humse,
Kya karte ho tanhaayi mein,
Yaad karte hain jaan ko apne,
Q ki sabse pyaari yaadein tumhaari...

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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2010, 09:49:29 AM »
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Thanx a lot Neel Ji...!!!Thanx a lot for the appreciation...!!!

My God .......... its kinda of story...
Very well writtn..........

Really really Good!!!!!!!!!!!!
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