morey piya hain door......

by mudassirali on July 07, 2010, 04:07:58 PM
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assalamalaikum, yeh mainey ek ladki ki apney zindigi bhar key hamrahi sey juda honey par woh kya soch sakti ,ko dhyan mein likhi hai ummeed hai pasand aayeygi.

 :'(morey piya hain door nazar sey, door des ja baithey hain
aahein hoon leti chup hoon rehti, aaoonga jab woh kehtey hai

patiyan likh kar in ansuan ki, kagaj bhigoya karti hoon
pagal hai tu, kyun roti hai, mujh sey phir woh kehtey hai

raat raat bhar, jaag jaag kar aaney kay din ginti hoon
ab aaoonga tab aanoonga, mujh bholi ko yoon kehtey hai

rahat nahin hai, sukoon mera cheen liya us zalim ney
dhang sey tum khaana peena, hanstey hanstey kehtey hai
 
maalum hai mujhey, andaza hai, dukh mein woh bhi to rehtey hain
par apney dil ka haal woh kyon nahin mujh sey kehtey hain.

(mudassir)
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2010, 12:13:09 AM »
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assalamalaikum, yeh mainey ek ladki ki apney zindigi bhar key hamrahi sey juda honey par woh kya soch sakti ,ko dhyan mein likhi hai ummeed hai pasand aayeygi.

 :'(morey piya hain door nazar sey, door des ja baithey hain
aahein hoon leti chup hoon rehti, aaoonga jab woh kehtey hai

patiyan likh kar in ansuan ki, kagaj bhigoya karti hoon
pagal hai tu, kyun roti hai, mujh sey phir woh kehtey hai

raat raat bhar, jaag jaag kar aaney kay din ginti hoon
ab aaoonga tab aanoonga, mujh bholi ko yoon kehtey hai

rahat nahin hai, sukoon mera cheen liya us zalim ney
dhang sey tum khaana peena, hanstey hanstey kehtey hai
 
maalum hai mujhey, andaza hai, dukh mein woh bhi to rehtey hain
par apney dil ka haal woh kyon nahin mujh sey kehtey hain.

(mudassir)
Bhai Mudassir Ali baRe jazbaat se likha hai aapne. Aap ka andaaz bohot pasand aaya. Likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2010, 03:57:18 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2010, 05:41:02 AM »
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Nice one Ali Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2010, 06:24:50 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ANDAZ HAI AAP KA MUDASSIR SAHEB!
ISI SE MUTALLIQ KUCH MERI JANIB SE BHI..........

JANE KOUN GALI ME CHODI TUNE RAIN GATHARIYA
KIS SE POOCHOON, KIT JAON ,MANN KAISE SAMJHAOON
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